FIGHT AGAINST DESTINY-PreRishFF Thrd2 Part 27 Pg-122 Updt. 24th May - Page 96

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

your extra complicated plot se.

Hahaaaa.. I like this comment a lot 😃

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

you do force your readers to read about her by adding her to your updates.😡😔 No hardly anyone wants to read about her they only want prerish. 😡

No I don't.. I just right what I want to bas.. jo ye story hai from day 1.. It is still PreRish, my own version.. everyone has a subplot along with PreRish wo sharma ho sakte hain, Basus ho sakte hain ..yaha Adhirajs hai because it is written from Rishabh's pov.. so his life that was never discussed in the show forms the basis. Focus mein to Prerna, Bajaj or Kukki hi hai..

Lekin I completely understand if you don't connect with it and I respect that because maine to khud bhi bola ye slow hai ..

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

No I don't.. I just right what I want to bas.. jo ye story hai from day 1.. It is still PreRish, my own version.. everyone has a subplot along with PreRish wo sharma ho sakte hain, Basus ho sakte hain ..yaha Adhirajs hai because it is written from Rishabh's pov.. so his life that was never discussed in the show forms the basis. Focus mein to Prerna, Bajaj or Kukki hi hai..

Lekin I completely understand if you don't connect with it and I respect that because maine to khud bhi bola ye slow hai ..

Very nice update!! Love the way how Rishabh is taking care of every little thing that might give happiness to Kukki or might hurt her. Also explaining to Prerna his reasons of keeping Kukki a bit away from her shows that he does not want to hurt her as well.

Good to see Prerna reflecting on her thoughts every now and then but she's still very confused. But good to see her making her own decisions finally!

I don't know why but while reading your story I've always felt that it was Menaka was not the only one at fault when she left Kukki. Rishabh had something to do with it too. And though I love Prerish, I would personally for this story especially want to give Menaka another chance if she was not completely at fault and also if she's genuinely regretting now.

Please show a bit more of Menaka-Kukki-Rishabh since I'm too eager to know the reason of their separation.

A few flashbacks of Ara-Menaka-Rishabh-Aditya is also something I would want to read since that's also something the story is based on. If you're planning to show Aditya-Tanvi as a couple in the future, please add a few scenes of them too.

These all are just things that I would've loved to read but I absolutely love the way you write the story.

Waiting for the next part!

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

Even I am against the idea that she should be with Bajaj because Anurag nahi hai ya she hates him for some reason so that's not happening, I can assure of you that.

To choose RB out of choice she needs to know herself as well as him, tabhi she can make an informed choice.. this is what they are doing right now. Getting to know.each other without a deal or anyone else's influence. No sharmaa ..no Basus.. she is in his world now and will get to know him..

Then please make more quick updates I want to read them

Originally posted by: Tvfanatic85

Then please make more quick updates I want to read them

Meenu n me and last wala is meenu me and swati giving pappi to Meenu https://www.instagram.com/p/CAiG-cmHquj/?igshid=1naq8b737k3g6

Meenu Terese hoga quick updates you can do it. I am proud of you I mean I will be 🤣

Originally posted by: yogakshema

Hello Yoga.. so happy to hear from you after a long time. Thank you for reading, sharing your thoughts and suggestions.. means a lot to me 🤗

My comments below-

Very nice update!! Love the way how Rishabh is taking care of every little thing that might give happiness to Kukki or might hurt her. Also explaining to Prerna his reasons of keeping Kukki a bit away from her shows that he does not want to hurt her as well.

Glad that you liked the update. Rishabh's love for Kukki can't be compared with anyone or anything in his life. He is worried for her, doesn't hesistate to seek help and while protecting his daughter he also wants to be upftont with Prerna. He is already guilty of what he did in Calcutta and now like you said he doesn't want to hurt Prerna or Kukki anymore.

Good to see Prerna reflecting on her thoughts every now and then but she's still very confused. But good to see her making her own decisions finally!

She is evaluating every action of hers. It's just a week and she has already got exposed to lot professionaly and personally. She soon will geta clarity on what she wants and what she needs to do..

I don't know why but while reading your story I've always felt that it was Menaka was not the only one at fault when she left Kukki. Rishabh had something to do with it too.

Your feeling is absolutely right is all I want to say at this point in time 😊 But it might look like may be none of them was at fault. It depends on the reader how they will interpret it.

And though I love Prerish, I would personally for this story especially want to give Menaka another chance if she was not completely at fault and also if she's genuinely regretting now.

@underline- I want to honestly take it as a compliment in my humble best capacity. Thank you for giving the new added characters a chance. Her regret and actions are genuine but does she stand a chance or ever had one with Rishabh is what is Prerna's task to explore.. she is already started to raise questions about Menaka.. she will get on task too ..

Please show a bit more of Menaka-Kukki-Rishabh since I'm too eager to know the reason of their separation.

I will be exploring this in coming updates. You' see a little glimpse of Menaka ka chhota sa past with Kukki along with Rishabh and Menaka together under one roof in presence of Prerna in the nexy update itself, which is in progress. Lets see if that will grab your interest 😊

A few flashbacks of Ara-Menaka-Rishabh-Aditya is also something I would want to read since that's also something the story is based on.

I have a lot in progress and this is one of the things I am working on. Thank you for the mention as I will now start to integrate things from past with present. Thank you again!

If you're planning to show Aditya-Tanvi as a couple in the future, please add a few scenes of them too.

You will see a bit of Tanvi and Aditya in next to next update.. not as a couple but interacting more like friends which will form a foundation for their friedndship and then may be proper relation. But Tanvi too has a hurdle to cross because Ara was his first love.. so Tanvi the exact opposite of Ara .. will he find a love interest in her is what I am working on..

These all are just things that I would've loved to read but I absolutely love the way you write the story.

Basic work is ready for all your requests in my mind and soon you'll see these gradually in coming updates. I am slow writer and write updates on phone isliye zyada hi time lag jata hai.. but all this will be addressed because story based hi hai on everything you mentioned..

Waiting for the next part!

It is in progress. Hopefully by mid-week I will post.

Take care 🤗

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

nikal tu meneka ko 🥱 itna explanation ki zarurat nahi

Wo jayegi when her character has done her work in the story. Pakka jayegi😊

I wasn't explaing her character but bata rha tha that I was never a writer, still not a writer and won't be one. I don't even know if I have any strong points when it comes to writing but limitations to ache se pata hai.

I cannot cater to an audience who loves to read something written in high standard wala language. People who are fan of a text written in the most beautiful words. I miserably fail there.

I can't cater to an audience that loves beautifully written romance. I know apne bas ka baat nahi hai

I can't cater to an audience that loves mature content. Apne ko padne ko nahi hota to likhenge kaha se..

All I have done is play with characters, situations, plots and some emotion may be and ab tak I am pretty content with the response.

I very well know that I am incapable of doing justice to all the readers, so the least I could do was justice to the story that I had in mind 6 months pehle and let readers chose for themselves. Kam se kam utna to karu. Isliye jab not many read it tab bhi I didn't change a thing in the story. So many readers left, but so many new members joined in too.. and that was very encouraging.. hate aditya hate Menaka bolke bhi you've stuck with me so far 🤗

Isliye Menaka jayegi par abhi nahi. 😃