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Maan heard it all. Now he should know the real characters.

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chapter 9

Dadima wants Maan to get married. Will he agree?

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chapter 10

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chapter 11

Why was she even applying for the secretary post when she is qualified for a better one?

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chapter 12

Geet seeing a different side of Maan. The better one.

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Maan has agreed to at least see the girls.

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Originally posted by: coderlady

chapter 11

Why was she even applying for the secretary post when she is qualified for a better one?


She is not qualified but she wants to pursue architecture as a career and wants to do this job so that she could pursue it. 😄😄

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Anxiously waiting for Part 15

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Hey guyss hope you all are enjoying my story i am really thankful to all of you for your wonderful comments seriously you guys are superb and m really sorry for updating late but my laptop was not working and due to this lockdown we are not able to move anywhere but it is for the betterment only. but luckily i got some help from my mama's friend and he fixed the laptop and here i am with the update again . Hope you all are fine stay home stay safe please be safe at your places and follow this lockdown thoroughly. Stay happy bye bye now enjoy the story. Love♥️ you all.


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Part 15



Geet said - Ji daarji ap or hmari puri family th mere saath he ho par mai apne paro par khada hona chati hu or kbtk mai ap logo ke saahre chlti rhugi kbi na kbi th mujhe akele chlne ki adat daalni padugi naa mere daaman pr jo daag hai usske baad mujhee koi bhi shareef khandaan nahi apnayegaa daarji islie mai independent banna chati hu.. daarji taki koi bhi kabhi bhi mujh pr ya hmari family pr ungli na utha sake..


Daarji said- Geet puttar tu aee ki keh ri h isme teri koi vi galti nai si puttar or tere daaman pr koi daag nai hai tujhse zadaa pavitr iss duniya vich koi vi nai hai puttar tu th saadi jaan hegi puttar...


Geet said- Daarji please ap bas mujhe late working hours ke liye permission dedijiiye...


Daarji said- Geet puttar mai tenu permission taa dedawaga pr tenu vi saadi ek shart manni padugi...

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Daarji said- Geet puttar je tu chaundi aa ki mai tenu late kaam krne waasten manjoori dedwaa ta tenu meri ek shrt maani padugi…


Geet said being confused - Shart kedi shart daarji…


Daarji said- Dekh puttar mai jaanda aa tenu tere atteet di yaada hale vi pareshan krdi aa pr tenu apni zindagi vich aage te badhna he padhugaa naa jse ki tunee hale keyaa ki tera pariwar tere sth hai or puttar hum zindagi bhar tere naal rahege pr apna sukh dukh baatne waaste tenu vi taa ek humsafar si load hegi jo tenu smbhale tere har ache bure vkt vich…


Geet said while crying - Daarji please mai iss bare me koi baat ni karna chaundi tussi jaande ho naa mere th nai hoyegaa aee mai ni kr skdi ae daarji ae ek bahaut he wadaa decision honda ae kissi di vi life vich mai es trah he ta haa ni kr skdi naa mai hale taiyaar naii aa in sab cheeza de waaste tussi menu force na kreyo daarji pleasee… and she left from there without listening to anyone…


Daarji knew this would be going to happen that's why he took nandini's help.He went to nandini and said -Puttar tenu pata hai na tenu ki karna hai…


Nandini said- Ji Daarji tussi chinta na kro mai hune jaakr geet didi naal gal krdi aa.. tussi ao mere peeche peeche and winked at him…


Geet went to her room directly and closed the door and started crying. She was thinking - Pata ni ye sbko kya hogya hai sb mere shaadi ke peeche kyu padh gayee hai phle tayi ji or ab daarji bhi… mai kya karu ab mujhe kuch samajh nai aara babaji kyu ap meri itni pariksha le rahe ho mai aur barsaash nai kar sakti itna bada dil bhi nahi hai meraa ki kissi se bhi shadi krlu kitni pagal thi na mai jo apne rajkumar ke sapne dekhne chali thi babaji apne bilkul theek kia mere saamne firse hoshiyarpur ka zikr karkar or jo kch bhi hoshiyarpur me hua tha vo sab kaise bhul skte hai sb log or kaisee mujhe shadi ke liye pooch sakte hai...😭 Hey babaa ji kya kaaru mai… ye sach hai ki mai apne rajkumar ka intezar kr ri hu ye jaante hue bhi ki pta nahi mera sach jaanne ke baad vo mujhe apnayega bhi ya nahi aakhir hu th mai unlucky he naa th kyu babaji mere liye kissi rajkumar ko bhejege kyu bhejegee pr fir bhi dil me ek aas hai ki koi toh hogaa jise bhagwan ne mere liye banaya hogaa aaj mai khud se ek promise karti hu jab bhi shadi karugi toh usse puri zindagi nibhaugi fir chahe mujhe pyaar ke badlee aansoon he kyu naa mileee or mai janti hu ki sach jaane ke baad koi mujhse pyar ni karegaa par sbki nafrat sehne ke liye bhi taiya hu mai or aj jo kuch bhi priya ne kaha tha bilkul sahi keh ri thi aj ki life sapno pr nai balki paso se chlti hai islie mai independent banna chati hu independent bnkr apne maa papa daarji sabka naam roshan karna chati hu kyuki ajtk badnami ke siva maine une diya he kya hai babaji meri madad karna pleasee.... mai shadi ke liye ha nahi karugi bilkul bhi nahi maine decide karlia hai shadi karugi par time aane par or apna sach batakar karugi.....


Her thoughts broke when she heard a knock on her door and a voice which calmed her down because she thought - Koi mujhe samjhe ya na samjhe nandini mujhe zaroor samjhegi and she hurriedly opened the door and took nandini inside and closed the door again so that no one listens what they will talk.


Nandini said - Geet Didi apne door kyu lock kardiya..


Geet said- Kyuki mujhe tujhse akele me kuch baat karni hai..??


Nandini said- Ji didi bat toh mujhe bhi karni hai aapse..


And they both said at the same time - Apki / Meri Shaadi..


Geet asked making her eyes wide and keeping her one hand at her waist- Tujhe kaise pata chala…


Nandini gulped her saliva down and said hurriedly- Vo didi maine na bade logo ko baate sunn li thi mai apko vahi btaane aa ri thi…


Geet said thinking something- ohh achaa.. theek hai..


Nandini said- Waisee didi mujhe lagta hai ap shaadi ke bare me soch sakte ho ab…


Geet said being angry totally in sherni mode - Kya soch sakte ho nandini mujhe shadi nahi karni hai abhi samjhi tu or zadaa bholi mat bann mere saamne sab janti hu tujhe yha pr kisne bheja hai or kyu bheja hai…😡


Nandini knew this would come because geet knows everyone very well.

Nandini said- Geet didi please aap shnt hojaao i knw ap abhi shadi nahi karna chate ho pr atleast ek bar soch toh sakte ho na…


Geet cut her in between and said- Kya soch sakti hu nandini tu jaanti hai na Hoshiyarpur mein kya hua tha.. mai toh sab kuch bhul chuki thi or apne sapno ke rajkumar ke sapne dekhne lagi thi ek normal ladki ki trah pr mere babaji ne mujhe sachai dikha di vo sachai jisse mai bahaut peeche chod aayi thi vo sachai jisne meri puri zindagi ko badal kr rkh diya jo kuch bhi 5 sal phle hua tha usse you ubhar chuki thi mai lekin mere baba ji ne mujhe reality check dediya ki geet tujhee sapne dekhne ka koi haq.. nai smjhi tu.. she said while crying.


Nandini came forward and hugged geet tightly and said- nahi didi asa nahi aap bhi normal ladkiyo ki trah sapne dekh sakti ho aap bhi muskura kar zindagi ko apna sakti ho didi… 5 sal phle jo kch bhi hua tha usme apki galti nahi hai.. apne ap ko dosh dena band karo.. Didi.. please.. aree ap th itni achi ho ki koi bhi ladka asani se mil jyega apko or didi agr sach me apke liye koi rajkumar ayega na toh vo apko vse he apnayega jse aap ho and vo apko apke past ke sth apnayega.. ase kitne log hai didi iss duniya me jinke sth asa kch hua toh kya vo zindagi jeena chod degee nahi naa… or ap toh itni himmat wali hoo ap ase nai tut sakti didi… ap toh meri sherni hoo.. yad hai jb mai college me thi or ek ladke ne mere sath badtameezi ki thi kaise apne uski dhunai ki thi… bhaga bhaga kar maara tha apne usko… yad hai naa.. she said smilingly.


Geet controlled herself and broke the hug and smiled to nandini's small story.. and the good old memories.. and said- Ha yaad hai mujhee.. agar abi bhi kahi dikh gaya na vo toh abi bhi uski ase he band bajaugi mai… himaat kse hui thi uski tujhe chedne ki koi bhi meri bhn pr gandi nazar daalega naa toh uski aankhe noch lugi mai she said being angry..


Nandini laughed on geet's comment- ha.ha..ha.a.. kya didi ap bhi na vo beechara apke darr ke maare college se transfer lekr chla gya..😂😂 or ap ab bhi uske peche padhe hoo… and they both bursted into laughter.. and after a while nandini said- Geet didi vse how is your office going hmm.?

As nandini mentioned office maan's thought came to geet's mind and she started remembering their first meet their nok jhok… her encounter with maan at office their small challenge which maan won by cheating her encounter with shasha maan fireing shasha.. and maan's caring nature towards his employees everything came to geet's mind.


Nandini saw geet is lost somewhere so she said being all confused - Geet didi ???


Geet came out from her thought and said - ha Nandini bol..

Nandini said- kaha kho gyi thi ap.. hmm.


Geet said - aree nai kahi ni vo bs ase he tu bol na kya puch ri thi..


Nandini said- Office???


Geet said being meldramatic - Office mat puch yaar kya btau tujhe kaha se shuru kru.. mera khadoos boss.. oh god ek pal me bahaut he irritating hai yr pr dusre he pal bahaut understanding mujhe toh smjh ni ata vo hai kya cheez😂😂


Nandini said being confused- Geet didi ap kya keh re ho mujhe kuch samjh nahi aara hai..


Geet said- acha sun mai tujhe strt se btati hu and she narrated all the story of their first meet and their ladai…


Nandini started laughing and said- oh god didi hahaha.. kya bacho ki trah lad re the aap donoo… my godd. Vo bhi beech sadak pr…


Geet said pointing finger at nandini cutely- Nandu tu zadaa hass mat jaa mai ni bata ri tujhee tune aage sunaa th pta ni kya karegi… huh..


Nandini said- acha sorry sorry btao na didi fir kya hua..


Geet said - fir kya honaa tha.. mujhe nai pta tha ki jis insaan se mai beech sadak pr khade hokr ladh rahi thi vhi mera boss niklega phle toh mujhe lga ki vo mera peecha karte karte yha agya lekin baad me pta chala ki ye th vhi khadoos hai and then hmari shart lg gayi..


Nandini was listening to geet patiently and said being confused - shart konsi shart.. didii


Geet than narrated the whole story till the late working hours to nandini and she was laughing very hard that she sat on bed and started laughing keeping one hand on her tummy and said- oh godd… didi apki or apke boss ki story bahaut he funny hai mere pait dard hogya has has kar… and then she controlled herself and said- pr ha jo kch bhi unhone apke character ke baare me bolaa vo bahaut galat tha or vo shasha badii ayu delhi ki mame banne mere saamne aajaye ek barr.. mai bhi seedha kardugi usko toh… after all mai bhi sherni ki choti shernii hu kyu didi..


Geet said- ha ha meri choti sherni…


Nandini said- vo geet didi prr ab ap late working hours ka kya kaorge.. vse mere pass ek idea hai..


Geet said- idea hmm kaisa idea..


Nandina said- Geet didi dekho ap shadi ke liye ready nahi ho right..


Geet said- haa


Nandini said- toh apko shadi karne ke liye keh bhi kon rha hai vse bhi apse puche bina daarji ya tayiji koi bhi shaadi tai nai kr skta toh ap na bas ladka dekhne ke liye ha krdo Konsa apko usse shadi krni he hai.. koi na koi bahana bnakr h. Usse taal degee kyu didi kaisa laga idea she said proudly..


Geet said sternly- ji nahi bilkul nahi…


Nandini said - hadd hai didi fir th ban gayi ap independent jb tk ap ladka dekhne ke liye ha nai krogi daarji apko late working hours ki permission nai dege toh soch lo ab iss baar aap..


Geet started thinking while slowly slowly moving her head as if talking to her babaji and she thought - vse Nandini ke idea me koi burai nai hai ladka dekhna he th hai.. agr psnd hoga tbhi aage bat badhegi abi ke liye th 7 days ke liye late working hours ki permission chahiye vrna vo dusht danav meri jaan lelegaa.. abi th yhi important and pr agree krne ke liye mai bhi ek shart rkhug ki 7 days baad he ye sb shuru kre warna mai kam me dhyan nai de paugi… and fir ek ya do ladke dekhne baad kch sochlugi or taal dugi.. ha yahi sahi rahega hainaa babaji..


Nandini said - Geet didi bolo na kya huaa chup kyu hogi aap bolo naa..


Geet said smilingly - haa


Nandini said- kya haa


Geet said - mai taiyar hu tere iss idea ke liye and ladke dekhne ke liye lekin sirf ladke dekhne ke liye uske alwaa or kuch nahi.. smjhi tu..


Nandini said- sachi didi wow aap maan gaye yes..


Geet said- being confused - maan gaye matlab


Nandini said being shocked - vo.maan gaye matlab mere idea ke liye maan gaye didi…


Geet said- haa maan th gayi hu lekin nandini ek shrt pr tujhe daarji or sabko convince krna hoga ki ye sb kch vo log 7 days baad kare quki abhi 1 week mujhe office me bahaut kaam hai….ok


Nandini said- ha ha didi zaroor chaliye hum darji ko btadete hai


Geet said- haa chal.. nai ruk ek min ek promise or karr ki tu iss idea ke baare me kissi ko ni btayegi smjhii...


Nandini said- Kya didi apko lagta hai ki mai apki bahen kissi ko btaugi chill karo didi... and in her mind she said- Geet didi I am sorry pr ye apke bhale ke liye he hai or ye th daarji ka he plan hai phle hme apke late working hours ka nai pta tha lekin jb apne btaya th hme chance mil gya apko convience krne ke liye pr ye sb kuch sirf or sirf apki khushi ke liye he hai...


And they went to daarji and told them about the situation and daarji agreed whole heartedly as geet is finally ready to see the grooms and he also agreed for the late working hours of geet. And geet nandini came back to their room.


Geet said- huh.. finally daarji maan gaye...lekin abi ek aur badi mushkil hai...kya karu mai..


Nandini said- Ab kya dikkat hai didi??


Geet said - aree yr vhi dusht danav yarrr..


Nandini said- dusht danav😂😂 Geet didi ap bhi na ye funny funny words kha se dhoondh leti ho ap oh god..


Geet said faking anger- yha mai itni problem me hu or tujhe mazak sujh rha hai😡


Nandini said- ohohh didi calm down btao ab kya problem hai apki why to fear when nandini is here..

Geet said- apni dialogue bazzi band karr nandu yrr.. vo actually maine na maan sir ko bola tha ki mai sham tk unhe bta dugi ki mai late working hours ke baare me..


Nandini said- acha toh bta do dikt kya hai??


Geet said- dikkat ye hai ki mere pass unkaa number nai hai😔 mai unhe kaise btau ?? Or agar maine nai btaya toh vo dusht danav das baate suna dega mujhee 😩..


Nandini said-ohoo ab kya karee..


Geet said - vhi toh soch ri hu mai yrr nandu


Nandini said- Idea


Geet said- kya idea jldi bol


Nandini said- geet didi apke dusht danav urf maan sir itne bade business men hai toh google pr unka number toh zaroor he hoga mai arjun veerji ja laptop lekr aati hu or hum usse number nikal lenge or ap unse baat karlena..


Geet said- wah nandu yr tu toh badi intelligent hai yrr..


Nandini said- thank you thank you mai laptop lekr aati hu… and she went to take the laptop.


Geet was waiting for her nandini in her room patiently and her mobile started ringing she took it from the bedside table and saw an unknown number calling.. geet said- ye kiska number hai?? And she picked the call up and said-hello..


On the other hand maan thought he will call geet and ask her about the late working hours himself. Although he could have asked adi also to confirm from geet but he chose to call himself because he heard her crying so he called her and when she said hello he also said- ummm hello…


Geet said- Ji aap kon??


Maan said- Itni jldi meri awaz bhul gyi miss handa..??


Geet was shocked to beyond after knowing about the caller she was about to fall but she held the bedside and said- voo sirr voo aap…


Maan said- ha tum itni shocked kyu ho as if kissi bhoot ki awaz sun li ho??


Geet said- nai nai sirr vo asaa kch nai hai??


Maan said - vo actually maine ye puchne ke liye call kia tha ki vo tumhare parents and family late working hours ke liye maan gaye naa ??


Geet was about to answer his question but at the same time Nandini came into the room with laptop and said- Geet didi chalo aaj apke uss khadoos boss 10 sir wale ravan ki history geography nikaalte hai laptop se 😂😂😂


Geet gulpped her saliva down and made her eyes bigger and she made her o shape mouth kept her hand on her mouth and said - oh lee geet ab toh tu gayi maan sir mujhe nai chodege ye nandini ke chakkar me sab gadbad hojyega babaji madad karo na please… geet signalled nandini to shut her mouth but nandini being nandini does not understand what geet is trying to say and she started blabbering and said while opening laptop - ohoo didi kya name btaya the apne uss dusht danav kaa haa haa maan singh khurana ruko abi google krti hu mai 😂😂


Geet was shocked and was gulping her saliva down again and again thinking about what maan will do now?? She quickly kept her hand on the speaker and said to nandini - oye nandu chup kr ja yrr tu toh mujhe marwakr he maanegi ja yha se mai baad bat krugi tere se abi ke liye tu jaa and she told nandini to leave but nandini was confused at why geet did this coz she only wanted her boss's number but she thought to leave geet alone as she wanted so she went from there.


On the other hand maan was listening to all the blabberings of the sisters and he was smiling whole time listening to geet's cute banter and talking with babaji and dadi ma who came to outhouse for having her dinner with maan stopped at the door and was shocked to see that maan was smiling and she got tears in her eyes seeing him smiling wholeheartedly after a long time and she took the help of the door to keep standing by making a little bit noise and Maan's trance broke with this noise and he turned back seeing him turning dadima hide behind the wall and he found no one there and he turned back and became again the angry young man and said to geet- Miss handa ye sb kya hai haa??


Geet hearing maan's voice quickly took the reciever to her ear and said- vo sirr vo kya h vo mai.. vo..


Maan said angrily- Tum ye ksi ajeeb si language me bat krti ho haa or ye kyaa tumhari dost ya bhn jo bhi thi kya bol rahi thi 10 sir wala ravan dusht danav haa kya h ye sb Miss handa tumnee mere ye kaise ajeeb se naam rakhe hue hai hmmm or tum mere baare me google pr kyu search kar rahi thi haa??


Geet said- vo sirr vo actually mujhe apko btana tha ki meri family late working hours ke liye maan gayi hai issliee apko call krna tha pr mere pass apka number nahi tha toh nandini ne kha ki vo laptop se apka number dhoondh kr mujhe dedegi or fir mai apko call krlu pr usse phle he apka call agya or fir vo sab gadbad hogyi..


Maan said in strict tone- hmm theek hai tomorrow sharp 8 am at Khurana Constructions.


Geet was about to apologise to him but before that he cutted the call and she said- oho syappa maine toh sir ko sorry bhi ni bola kitne ache hai na vo mujhse khud phn krkr pucha ki mere gharwale maane ya nai or mai ullu di patthi pta ni uss nandini ki bachi ko kya zaroorat thi ye sb bolne ki hey babaji please kal bacha lenaa or kal office pahuchte he maan sir se maafi maang lugi hainaa and she prayed to babaji.


Precap- Geet's apology ya fir koi aur bawal 😂 + Shasha Re-entry at office.



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