My pulavs On Miniel - Write ups Pt 34 (28.07.20) on Pg 78 - Page 8

Posted: 4 years ago

I know its been long time... Here we go guys... 


Part 6


Minni and Neil were at the court.... Mr Sisodia was explaining Neil how to appeal the judge for the visitation rights... Soon isha was also there accompanied by her lawyer...After a long time of waiting it was their turn of hearing.. Soon all of them were on the courtroom.. 


J. Please start the process.. 

S. My lord my client Neil oberoi and his wife have filed a divorce case a long time back and they're in the final stages of getting it done but my client wants a visitation rights for his daughter for which ms isha is not agreeing, hence mr Neil have counterd that agreement asking for visitation rights to meet his daughter... 

J. Before proceeding further I want to know why you both are getting divorced.. 

N. My lord, I don't want to stay with her under one roof as we don't share the same relation when we were married... It's mutual divorce sir... 

J. And u ms. Isha.. 

I. Mein kya bolu my lord... He is my husband and if he wants divorce I will give... Bhale mean chahu ya nahi... 

J. Me Neil.. Aapne to kaha tha divorce mutual hai... 

N. Yes my lord divorce is mutual.... I have all the documents regarding it... I backed off bcoz I don't wNt to divorce her without getting visitation rights... 


Sidodia gives those previous documents to the judge.. He goes through the documents and found Neil right and warns isha not to give any false information otherwise she will be punished... 


J. Aap kyun nahi dena Chahti Neil to visitation rights... 

I. Bcoz he is dangerous my lord... He is violent.. I have complained against him for domestic violence... He was violent on me...

N. No Sir, meine kabhi apna haath us par nahi uthaya...

Isha lawyer.  My lord... Yeh aadmi bout violent hai and he is not changing as all... Aaj bhi wo itna hi violent air badtameez hai... Mere paas ek gawah hai jo aapko bateyemge ki he is the same violent man... 

J. Go ahead... 


ISHA lawyer calls Khatri... Khatri explains all of them that how Neil has beaten him up just bcoz he was enquiring about his wife... To which Neil says that Khatri was talking ill about Minni that's why he beat him... And that's when Minni came into light... 


J. Who is Minni... 

N. She is my land lady... 

K. Oh nahi nahi judge Saab... Koi kiraydar makanmalkin nahi... Chakkar hai in dono ka... Mujhe to Lagta hai Neil isha madam ko chod bhi Minni ke liye hoga... 


Isha was all happy that some hoe she got to know about Khatri and was feeling proud to get him here.... She was actually enjoying that the ball is in her court.... Neil will loose everything this time... And here Neil was getting out of control when Khatri was speaking shit about her...minni was really struggling to control Neil there... 


J. Order order... Bina kisi pukta saboot ke agar kisi aurat pe aise ilzaam lagayenge to bohit badi saza hogi... 

I. But my lord that's the truth... 

J. Dekhiya.. I am warning that don't insult any woman here without any proper information. 

S. My lord I want to plead you to reopen the domestic violence case against Neil and investigate in new Way..

J. I order the police authority to reopen the domestic violence case against Neil oberoi and investigate it...i want a proper report  in a week.. The court is adjourned till next week... 


The were returning back to patiala.. Neil was worried as the case which was  shut a long back is reopened again and he have to go through the bitter past again.... And now with him Minni and arya also have bear all that.... 


N. I guess Maine galti ki visitation rights ke liye file karke...

M. Kyun... Aisa kyun soch rahe Ho Neil... 

N. Ab yeh domestic violence ka case reopen Ho raha hai... With me u and arya also have to go through all this... 

M. Neil... Aise kyun bol rahe Ho.... U know that complaint was a wrong accuse... And it has to come out... Aur keya ke liye bhi chahiye na... 

N.tgat case is done... But jo ab uska effect hoga tum dono par... I can't take it... Arya disturb hogi... 

M. Don't worry... Arya trust you... And she will understand you.... 

N.  U sure... Wo mujhe galat to nahi samjhegi na.... 

M. Come on Neil... Don't over think... 


Saying that she rests her head on his shoulder and hold his hand tightly.... Soon they reached patiala and were entering the haveli.... Seeing them coming arya went and hugged Neil.... Even Neil hugged her back.... Minni and Neil were shocked to see dadu beeji at the haveli... 


........


Precap... Mini and Neil spend quality time... 


Hope u all like it... I just wrote it... Donno if u guys find it good or bad.... 

Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by Srilata.Mineil


I know its been long time... Here we go guys... 


Part 6


Minni and Neil were at the court.... Mr Sisodia was explaining Neil how to appeal the judge for the visitation rights... Soon isha was also there accompanied by her lawyer...After a long time of waiting it was their turn of hearing.. Soon all of them were on the courtroom.. 


J. Please start the process.. 

S. My lord my client Neil oberoi and his wife have filed a divorce case a long time back and they're in the final stages of getting it done but my client wants a visitation rights for his daughter for which ms isha is not agreeing, hence mr Neil have counterd that agreement asking for visitation rights to meet his daughter... 

J. Before proceeding further I want to know why you both are getting divorced.. 

N. My lord, I don't want to stay with her under one roof as we don't share the same relation when we were married... It's mutual divorce sir... 

J. And u ms. Isha.. 

I. Mein kya bolu my lord... He is my husband and if he wants divorce I will give... Bhale mean chahu ya nahi... 

J. Me Neil.. Aapne to kaha tha divorce mutual hai... 

N. Yes my lord divorce is mutual.... I have all the documents regarding it... I backed off bcoz I don't wNt to divorce her without getting visitation rights... 


Sidodia gives those previous documents to the judge.. He goes through the documents and found Neil right and warns isha not to give any false information otherwise she will be punished... 


J. Aap kyun nahi dena Chahti Neil to visitation rights... 

I. Bcoz he is dangerous my lord... He is violent.. I have complained against him for domestic violence... He was violent on me...

N. No Sir, meine kabhi apna haath us par nahi uthaya...

Isha lawyer.  My lord... Yeh aadmi bout violent hai and he is not changing as all... Aaj bhi wo itna hi violent air badtameez hai... Mere paas ek gawah hai jo aapko bateyemge ki he is the same violent man... 

J. Go ahead... 


ISHA lawyer calls Khatri... Khatri explains all of them that how Neil has beaten him up just bcoz he was enquiring about his wife... To which Neil says that Khatri was talking ill about Minni that's why he beat him... And that's when Minni came into light... 


J. Who is Minni... 

N. She is my land lady... 

K. Oh nahi nahi judge Saab... Koi kiraydar makanmalkin nahi... Chakkar hai in dono ka... Mujhe to Lagta hai Neil isha madam ko chod bhi Minni ke liye hoga... 


Isha was all happy that some hoe she got to know about Khatri and was feeling proud to get him here.... She was actually enjoying that the ball is in her court.... Neil will loose everything this time... And here Neil was getting out of control when Khatri was speaking shit about her...minni was really struggling to control Neil there... 


J. Order order... Bina kisi pukta saboot ke agar kisi aurat pe aise ilzaam lagayenge to bohit badi saza hogi... 

I. But my lord that's the truth... 

J. Dekhiya.. I am warning that don't insult any woman here without any proper information. 

S. My lord I want to plead you to reopen the domestic violence case against Neil and investigate in new Way..

J. I order the police authority to reopen the domestic violence case against Neil oberoi and investigate it...i want a proper report  in a week.. The court is adjourned till next week... 


The were returning back to patiala.. Neil was worried as the case which was  shut a long back is reopened again and he have to go through the bitter past again.... And now with him Minni and arya also have bear all that.... 


N. I guess Maine galti ki visitation rights ke liye file karke...

M. Kyun... Aisa kyun soch rahe Ho Neil... 

N. Ab yeh domestic violence ka case reopen Ho raha hai... With me u and arya also have to go through all this... 

M. Neil... Aise kyun bol rahe Ho.... U know that complaint was a wrong accuse... And it has to come out... Aur keya ke liye bhi chahiye na... 

N.tgat case is done... But jo ab uska effect hoga tum dono par... I can't take it... Arya disturb hogi... 

M. Don't worry... Arya trust you... And she will understand you.... 

N.  U sure... Wo mujhe galat to nahi samjhegi na.... 

M. Come on Neil... Don't over think... 


Saying that she rests her head on his shoulder and hold his hand tightly.... Soon they reached patiala and were entering the haveli.... Seeing them coming arya went and hugged Neil.... Even Neil hugged her back.... Minni and Neil were shocked to see dadu beeji at the haveli... 


........


Precap... Mini and Neil spend quality time... 


Hope u all like it... I just wrote it... Donno if u guys find it good or bad.... 

Wow it was perfect

Jab tak show start nahi hota hum aise hi imagine karke kaam chala lenge๐Ÿ˜†

Jaldi update karo aage....intezar nahi ho raha๐Ÿ˜†

Posted: 4 years ago

After reading this am missing them more. ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by anjali0111


Wow it was perfect

Jab tak show start nahi hota hum aise hi imagine karke kaam chala lenge๐Ÿ˜†

Jaldi update karo aage....intezar nahi ho raha๐Ÿ˜†


Thanks yaar.... ๐Ÿค—


Pata nahi aur kitne din wait Karna padrga.... 

Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by N_sharmaa


After reading this am missing them more. ๐Ÿ˜ญ


Same here yaar... Isiliye likh ke apna dukh kam kar rahi hoon.... ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Posted: 4 years ago

So guys here is the next part... 


Part 7


Mini and Neil enters the haveli.... Seeing them coming arya jumps on Neil and hug him.... 


A. Kya tum dono ne itni der kardi... 

N. Sorry choti madam.... 

A. It's ok...meri gift.... 

M. Yeh le... Tera no natak Ho gaya hai... Jab bhi Delhi jao madam ko gift chahiye.... 

A. Jealous haa... Neil mere liye hi gift laata hai isiloye.... 

M. Chup oye... Go now open Karo gift ko... 

A. Mein na montu ko dikhake aati hoon... 


Once arya left Minni and Neil noticed that dadu beeji has returned from the village... 


M. Dadu beeji aap log kab aaye... 

B. Hum aaj subah hi aaye... Tu kaisi hai... 

M. Mein thik hion beeji...aap log kaise ho... Pind me sab thik hai na... 

B. Haa... 


All this while. Neil was silent and dad was just glaring at him... Neil can understand that he has lots of questions... 


D. Minni.. Yeh sab kya hai... Mujhe pata laga tum log Delhi kyun Gaye the... 

M. Dadu... Its important for Neil... 

D. Aur tu.... Tujhe anadaaza hai ki is sabka Teri aur arya ki life pe kya asar hoga... 

M. Kaisa asar... Haa humari life me badlav aayenge but we both are ready for it dadu... 

D. Kuch bhi mat bol Minni... Abhi teri umar hi Kya hai... Yeh ladka... 

M. Dadu bas... Aur nahi.... Not a word against him... 


Minni held Neil.hand entwining her fingers with his ...


M. We are with Neil... And we trust Neil.... He needs us now and we will be with him. Now and always.... 

D. Dekha ladke.. Aaj Teri wajah se meri poti mujhse zubaan lada rahi hai... 

B. Bas kijiye Khurana sahab... Neil ko bolne ka bahana chahiye aapko bas...agar Minni ko uspe Barosa hai to mujhe bhi hai... Wo dekh legi... 

D. Karo jo karna hai... Ek baat sun lo Neil... Agar tumne meri potiyo ko hurt kiya to mein kya kar sakta hun tumhe pata hai... 


Neil was about to say but dadu went away... Beeji also followed him but she just nodded to Neil saying its OK... He will understand... Neil knows that dad is just being protective about Minni and arya.... 


N. I told you right it's not gonna be easy... See... 

M. Come on Neil oberoi... I know its not gonna be easy... But I told u right it will be fine... 

N. Bit Minni I want to talk to arya... 

M. What... Kya baat karni hai... 

N. Look mein nahi chahta ki arya ko kahi aur se pata chale... I want to tell her everything... I know use Kuch samajh nahi ayega but... I will have that kind I haven't hide anything from her... 

M. Thik hai Baba... Bata dena... In fact I will also come... 

N. OK then chalo... 

M. Kaha... Wo montu ke ghar Gayi hai.. Aane ke baad bateyenge... 

N. Hmm.. OK... 


After sometime 


Neil is in the balcony thinking about the things happened in court and also about his past... What was that weak moment when he thought of marrying isha... Then he thinks Ki why dint he meet Minni first than isha... Why she have to come to his life first.... His thoughts were broken by a voice and that was Minni... 


M. Coffee... 

N. Yeah... Thanks... 

M. Phir kya sochne lage Ho yaar.. 

N. Kuch nahi... 

M. Tell. Me Neil... What's bothering u... 

N. I was just thinking ki... Why did I meet isha.. Agar mein isha se nahi milta to yeh sab nahi hota.... 

M. May be thats what's was supposed to happen.. 

N. Matlab... 

M. See meeting isha was what was supposed to. Happen... Just like babes aur papa ji ki shaadi hona... Kuch cheezien in life humari bas mean nahi hoti... The just take us through a roller coaster ride and then land is somewhere where we can have peace.... May be that's life.... 

N. I wish I would have met you before isha... 


There was a awkwardness now after Neil wish....


M. Ahh... May be bcoz I was not in need of chef that time... As I had my babes u know... 

N. Ya ya... U just need chef Neil oberoi right.... 

M. Of course.... 


Saying that Neil. Went leaned on the wall and was watching the city to go into darkness but not totally as everyone have their own way of lighting their life.... He was enjoying the scenic patiala... Just then he observed that a pair of hands were snaked on to his chest from back.... He just sa  back and saw that Minni hugged him from back... Holding him tightly.... He kept his hands on her hands and smiled.... 


N. Kya hua... Ab tumhe bhi lagta hai kya that we would have met before.... 

M. No... 

N. Then... 

M. I wish I can hold u like this whole life.... 

N. Then hold me... Kisne Mana kiya hai... 


Minni was silent she dint say anything.... She was just smiling... The were standing like that for long time and then Neil spoke up... 


N. Kya hua.. Chup kyun Ho.... 

M. Kitna bolte Ho Neil... 


Minni backed off and with that Neill turned towards her... 


N. Mein... Agar tum aise chup rahogi to poochunga na... 

M. Kyun chup rehne se kya tax Lagta hai... I was just enjoying our silence.... 

N. Oh... If u wanna enjoy the silence... Aur bhi bohut tareeke hai... Do u wanna know.... 

M. Shut up Neil oberoi... Zyada udo mat... 

N. Tum ho na pakadne ke liye... Phir kaise udunga... 


He said in sexy tone which made Minni blush.... 


N. Oh my god Minni madam u blush.... 

M. Aisa kuch nahi hai ha... 

N. No u do... 


Minni started beating him now to stop teasing her.... The were just running around the terece....soon the were tired and Neil sat on the con the floor resting his back to wall and pulled Minni and Minni fell on his lap.... Now Neil was hugging her...


M. Neil... Koi dekh lega... 

N. Acha jab tumne hug kiya tha tab.... I don't care..... Please let me steal this moments of us.... 


Minni couldn't say anything after that... The were just sitting like this and were enjoying their time... 



That's it guys.... Hope u all like it... I was so excited for this kind I just wrote it today itself....


Precap... Mineil speaks to arya... 

Edited by Srilata.Mineil - 4 years ago
Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by Srilata.Mineil


So guys here is the next part... 


Part 7


Mini and Neil enters the haveli.... Seeing them coming arya jumps on Neil and hug him.... 


A. Kya tum dono ne itni der kardi... 

N. Sorry choti madam.... 

A. It's ok...meri gift.... 

M. Yeh le... Tera no natak Ho gaya hai... Jab bhi Delhi jao madam ko gift chahiye.... 

A. Jealous haa... Neil mere liye hi gift laata hai isiloye.... 

M. Chup oye... Go now open Karo gift ko... 

A. Mein na montu ko dikhake aati hoon... 


Once arya left Minni and Neil noticed that dadu beeji has returned from the village... 


M. Dadu beeji aap log kab aaye... 

B. Hum aaj subah hi aaye... Tu kaisi hai... 

M. Mein thik hion beeji...aap log kaise ho... Pind me sab thik hai na... 

B. Haa... 


All this while. Neil was silent and dad was just glaring at him... Neil can understand that he has lots of questions... 


D. Minni.. Yeh sab kya hai... Mujhe pata laga tum log Delhi kyun Gaye the... 

M. Dadu... Its important for Neil... 

D. Aur tu.... Tujhe anadaaza hai ki is sabka Teri aur arya ki life pe kya asar hoga... 

M. Kaisa asar... Haa humari life me badlav aayenge but we both are ready for it dadu... 

D. Kuch bhi mat bol Minni... Abhi teri umar hi Kya hai... Yeh ladka... 

M. Dadu bas... Aur nahi.... Not a word against him... 


Minni held Neil.hand entwining her fingers with his ...


M. We are with Neil... And we trust Neil.... He needs us now and we will be with him. Now and always.... 

D. Dekha ladke.. Aaj Teri wajah se meri poti mujhse zubaan lada rahi hai... 

B. Bas kijiye Khurana sahab... Neil ko bolne ka bahana chahiye aapko bas...agar Minni ko uspe Barosa hai to mujhe bhi hai... Wo dekh legi... 

D. Karo jo karna hai... Ek baat sun lo Neil... Agar tumne meri potiyo ko hurt kiya to mein kya kar sakta hun tumhe pata hai... 


Neil was about to say but dadu went away... Beeji also followed him but she just nodded to Neil saying its OK... He will understand... Neil knows that dad is just being protective about Minni and arya.... 


N. I told you right it's not gonna be easy... See... 

M. Come on Neil oberoi... I know its not gonna be easy... But I told u right it will be fine... 

N. Bit Minni I want to talk to arya... 

M. What... Kya baat karni hai... 

N. Look mein nahi chahta ki arya ko kahi aur se pata chale... I want to tell her everything... I know use Kuch samajh nahi ayega but... I will have that kind I haven't hide anything from her... 

M. Thik hai Baba... Bata dena... In fact I will also come... 

N. OK then chalo... 

M. Kaha... Wo montu ke ghar Gayi hai.. Aane ke baad bateyenge... 

N. Hmm.. OK... 


After sometime 


Neil is in the balcony thinking about the things happened in court and also about his past... What was that weak moment when he thought of marrying isha... Then he thinks Ki why dint he meet Minni first than isha... Why she have to come to his life first.... His thoughts were broken by a voice and that was Minni... 


M. Coffee... 

N. Yeah... Thanks... 

M. Phir kya sochne lage Ho yaar.. 

N. Kuch nahi... 

M. Tell. Me Neil... What's bothering u... 

N. I was just thinking ki... Why did I meet isha.. Agar mein isha se nahi milta to yeh sab nahi hota.... 

M. May be thats what's was supposed to happen.. 

N. Matlab... 

M. See meeting isha was what was supposed to. Happen... Just like babes aur papa ji ki shaadi hona... Kuch cheezien in life humari bas mean nahi hoti... The just take us through a roller coaster ride and then land is somewhere where we can have peace.... May be that's life.... 

N. I wish I would have met you before isha... 


There was a awkwardness now after Neil wish....


M. Ahh... May be bcoz I was not in need of chef that time... As I had my babes u know... 

N. Ya ya... U just need chef Neil oberoi right.... 

M. Of course.... 


Saying that Neil. Went leaned on the wall and was watching the city to go into darkness but not totally as everyone have their own way of lighting their life.... He was enjoying the scenic patiala... Just then he observed that a pair of hands were snaked on to his chest from back.... He just sa  back and saw that Minni hugged him from back... Holding him tightly.... He kept his hands on her hands and smiled.... 


N. Kya hua... Ab tumhe bhi lagta hai kya that we would have met before.... 

M. No... 

N. Then... 

M. I wish I can hold u like this whole life.... 

N. Then hold me... Kisne Mana kiya hai... 


Minni was silent she dint say anything.... She was just smiling... The were standing like that for long time and then Neil spoke up... 


N. Kya hua.. Chup kyun Ho.... 

M. Kitna bolte Ho Neil... 


Minni backed off and with that Neill turned towards her... 


N. Mein... Agar tum aise chup rahogi to poochunga na... 

M. Kyun chup rehne se kya tax Lagta hai... I was just enjoying our silence.... 

N. Oh... If u wanna enjoy the silence... Aur bhi bohut tareeke hai... Do u wanna know.... 

M. Shut up Neil oberoi... Zyada udo mat... 

N. Tum ho na pakadne ke liye... Phir kaise udunga... 


He said in sexy tone which made Minni blush.... 


N. Oh my god Minni madam u blush.... 

M. Aisa kuch nahi hai ha... 

N. No u do... 


Minni started beating him now to stop teasing her.... The were just running around the terece....soon the were tired and Neil sat on the con the floor resting his back to wall and pulled Minni and Minni fell on his lap.... Now Neil was hugging her...


M. Neil... Koi dekh lega... 

N. Acha jab tumne hug kiya tha tab.... I don't care..... Please let me steal this moments of us.... 


Minni couldn't say anything after that... The were just sitting like this and were enjoying their time... 



That's it guys.... Hope u all like it... I was so excited for this kind I just wrote it today itself....


Precap... Mineil speaks to arya... 

This is so pure and cute

Posted: 4 years ago

So beautifulsmiley42 I was lost .Can we get this in show also smiley42

Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by N_sharmaa


So beautifulsmiley42 I was lost .Can we get this in show also smiley42


Thanks sharma... ๐Ÿค—


Hope. So... We get... Sun rahe Ho na CVS.... 



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