My pulavs On Miniel - Write ups Pt 34 (28.07.20) on Pg 78 - Page 7

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Posted: 5 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: anjali0111

Ek number👏

Yahi chahiye show mein mini to be with neil in every step


Thanks anjali... 🤗


The already started their journey.... I am just waiting when the will resume shoot...

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Posted: 5 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Srilata.Mineil


Thanks anjali... 🤗


The already started their journey.... I am just waiting when the will resume shoot...

Bahut mushkil hone wala hai hum sabke liye intezar😭

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Posted: 5 years ago
#63

This was so good Lata. We need this in show also and Mineil together fighting against guests😳 and that maggi scene was 🔥

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Posted: 5 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: N_sharmaa

This was so good Lata. We need this in show also and Mineil together fighting against guests😳 and that maggi scene was 🔥


Thanks sharma... 🤗


Mineil will fight and will win.....

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Posted: 5 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: anjali0111

Bahut mushkil hone wala hai hum sabke liye intezar😭


Yeah bohut difficult... Donno kaise guzrenge.... 😭

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Posted: 5 years ago
#66

Wow 😍😍

Arya dadi amma🤣

Trio scene chahiye mujhe🤣


Pulav was soo tasty 😍😍

Please update soon!!!!

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Posted: 5 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: Sakshi2104

Wow 😍😍

Arya dadi amma🤣

Trio scene chahiye mujhe🤣


Pulav was soo tasty 😍😍

Please update soon!!!!


Thanks sakshi.... 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: Srilata.Mineil

So here we go with. The next part... In this o have just focused on mineil... Nothing related to the case as of now....


Here we go mineilians... ❤️


Part 4


After isha left... NB also from Haveli....minni and Neil as usual went to restaurant... Minni left for haveli soon as she promised her chutanki that she will be back soon...


M.chutanki I am back....

A. Veer balika tum aa gayi... Wow as promised.. Neil kaha hai..

M. Haw chutanki mean nahi chahiye kya... Neil kana hai... Usko aaj late hoga he has more work today.

A. Tum saara kaam usi se karati Ho na... So sad....

M. Ya ya... U and ur genie love... Kya khaogi Donner pe...

A. Tum banaogi...

M. Of course yes... Neil ko late hoga and he will be tired na isiliye...

A. I want Maggi...

M. Wow it's so easy for me...

A. Isiliye bola... Neil banata to kuch air bolti...

M. Teri zubaan na bohut chalti hai....


Both the sisters had fun playing around... After sometime Minni went up to prepare dinner for them... She switched on the radio and started her work... Neil have come just now and heard Kishore Kumar voice and went up to see and he was just lost in Minni... She was humming the song and was doing the kitchen work... Minni got to know that Neil have gone and is watching her... She became cautious... She started tucking her hair behind her ears... She was seeing him from her eye corner... She saw him coming near her and...


M. Ku.. Kuch chaiye Neil...

N. Haa...


By this time he was just back of her... Minni was between him and the stove platform... She was again getting effected with his proximity...


M. Kkk... Kya chahiye... Neil...

N. Ek jawab...

M. Hmm.. Matlab...

N. Why are doing this Minni...

M. Don't you see why am I doing this... U can sense me right..

N. Yes I can sense you... But ek friend ke liye itna sab... (he stressed on friend more)

M. Minni can go to any extent for her friends Neil... Don't worry..

N. Really Minni...

M. Yes Neil... I want you to have peace with your past...

N. Aisa kabhi hoga Minni...

M. Of course hoga... We will make it happen...


Their faces were just inches apart...


M. Waise Neil oberoi.. I dint knew that tum itne seedhe Ho...

N. What do u mean seedha hun... I am a good man...

M. I know kuch zyada HI ache or phattu Ho...

N. Don't challenge me Minni..

M. I challenge u Neil oberoi... Catch me...


Minni pushed him and started running.. And Neil was behind her...they went to the balcony... And again to the dining area.... Somehow Minni got caught when she bumped into the stove table... Minni and Neil Now were facing each other... There comes a song which turned Neil on...


Roop tera mastana

Pyaar mera deewana

Bhool koi humse na Ho jaye...


Minni tried running away but Neil caged her between him and the table...


M. Neil let me go...

N. Oh Minni madam is blushing... Friend se bhi blush karte hai kya..

M. Neil...

N. Yes I am listening...


Minni was leaning back and Neil leaning forward... At a point she can't lean more back and just stopped... But Neill dint.... Now their faces were just inches apart....


Raat nasheeli mast sama hai..

Aaj nashe me saara jahan hai...

Raat nasheeli mast sama hai..

Aaj nashe me saara jahan hai...

Haa yeh sharabi mausam behkaye...


N. Tell me Minni madam...

M. What do you wanna know...

N. U know what I wanna know....

M. Neil please arya aa jayegi...

N. Choti madam samajh jayegi ki hero heroine romance kar rahe hai...


Minni was shocked in hearing Neil... She was just thinking that... Did she hear that the are romancing..


M. Neil...

N. Haa kuch galat kaha kya....


Minni was speechless with his advances.. She just can blush... Neil leaned more to kiss her... He stopped in between as of asking her if he can... Minni just closed her eyes as permitting him to do... He was just about to kiss her...


A. Uffo veer balika Maggi jala diya tumne....


That's it guys for today... Hope u all like it....


Cute , naughty Mineil 😉

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Posted: 5 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: Srilata.Mineil

Hey minielians....❤️ Missing MiNeil.... Me too...


Here we go....


Part 5


A. Uffo veer balika tumne Maggi jala di na....


This brought mineil out of their land.... Neill in trial of getting off Minni his hand slipped and he lost his balance which made both to fall on each other... It's a second then we're on floor....firat Minni fell and Neil on her....and hiss lips landed on hers....in shock their eyes widened and arya hide her face in her palms..... 🙈


If it was some other time then both would have enjoyed their kiss but arya was standing there seeing them.... Recognising what happened the both composed themselves and got up.... Minni asked Neil to talk. To arya....


N. Arey choti. Madam... Wo Maggi hai na... Wo... Mein bana deta hoon phir se....


Arya was just smiling on what happened just now....


A. Neil tum ghabra rahe Ho na...

N. Haa... Nahi... Choti madam... Dekho abhi jo kuch bhi hua..that was an accident ok....so don't think about it....

A. Accident aisa bhi hota hai... (arya only know one accident which happens on roads)

N. Ah... Haa whichever happens unplanned or achanak se...like surprising you is called accident too.... OK so you will forget it right....

A. OK... Agar wo accident tha to fine.... Ab mujhe bhook lagi hai... Pls kuch bana do... Veerbalika se to maggi bhi nahi banti... Kya karu mein is ladki ka.... Pata nahi shaadi Karke tumhe kya khilayegi....

M. Oye dadi Amma bas ab... Bohut bolne lagi Ho tum....


The trio had big laugh.. And Neil cooked for the sisters and himself and the had a happy dinner.... After dinner Neil made arya sleep and he also slept on arya room... The day was tiring... And Minni also slept....


Next day... Arya again was running all over the haveli saying she won't eat breakfast and Minni was screaming at her to have what she prepared... Which made Neil to get up...


N. Yaar tum dono behne roz ghar me toofan Kyun machate Ho....

M. Oh hello... Koi toofan nahi macha hai OK... Go and fresh we have to go to restaurant early... Lawyer and wale hai aaj...

L. Lawyer ane Wale nahi aa gaye...

M. Lala uncle... Aap ghar aa gaye... Aapne tp bola tha restaurant aaoge...

L. Restaurant me poora staff hoga aur Neil. Bhi comfortable na ho isiliye mein ghar hi leke aa gaya inhe... Yeh hai mr.sisodiya

N. Hello sir...Neil oberoi...

M. Hello sir, bathiye... Rani di arya ko leke jayiye...


Rani took arya to school...


S. To mr Neil tell. Me the whole thing.... Please kuch bhi nahi chipana....


Neil narrates everything to the lawyer...


S. So u had a lawyer in Delhi...

N. Yes

S. Then why me.

N. Mr sisodiya... That lawyer was also. From isha side and if o talk to him about filing a visitation request he will. Only be on isha side that's why I wanted a person who is not even aware of isha...

S. OK... If we prove that ms isha had an affair with ur Frnd rithwik then u will have right to ask anything to the court....

N. But it may have a bad impact on keya....

S. But Neil she have filed a domestic violence case in u and in such case getting visitation rights is very difficult..

N. But sir think about it no keya is a kid what will she have in her mind about her mother when she will get to know about all this...

S. Please inhe samjhayiye....

L. Neil... Sisodiya sir is right... Tumhe is haalat mein visitation rights tabhi milenge if u prove her affair with rithwik... Socho iske baare mein... Hum phir kal. Milenge... Thik hai na ji...

N. Sure.

M. Thank u uncle....

L. Chup kar... Par Minni tujhe use smjhana hoga ki bina isha ke affair ko.prove Kare bagair wo yeh case nahi jeet sakta... Mujhe na Babita behenji ki yaad diladi isne aaj... Wo to phir bhi aurat thi... Yeh mard ho kar aur aisa dhoka khake bhi ek aurat ki izzat karta hai.. Kyunki wo uske beti ki maa hai... Aaj mere sir saab hote na to teri chinta Chod dete is ladke ko dekh ke... Isse acha ladka nahi milega tujhe....

M. Janti hu uncle... (blushing)... Aah... Mein baat karti hun usse... Kal milte hai phir....


Saying that lala left with the lawyer....


That's it guys for now.... Hope u all like it....


Precap...mineil at court


Good one . I would like to see romance and case being balanced in upcoming track

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Posted: 5 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: sub_94


Cute , naughty Mineil 😉


Thanks dear... 🤗

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