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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 34


Awesome and Emotional Update



Maan always felt that it was just attraction between him and Geet

but now he has realized he loves her , yes their first time together

Maan did realize there was some kind of connection with Geet but at that

time he was hurt by Sameera's actions but now I realize that Geet was in his thoughts

though Maan love Geet and it would have been easier if she too would agree but the great

fact is that he realizes just how broken she is , she has no trust in people especially after what Dev and Meera did to her .

Geet has no confidence in her self knowing her mother distance herself and rejects Geet

she feels to love or to be dependent on someone will cause further damage and hurt

as that person will leave .

Maan cannot tell Geet he loves her so instead he tells her he cares for her and all he just wants

from her is friendship but it also seems like Geet is having a tough time to accept friendship

Maan has a very long way to travel if he truly wants Geet in his life as his partner , because

he will have to make Geet whole again before she can love and trust



oh I felt bad for Vicky but I guess if he truly loves Annie and she is confused with her feelings

then the right thing for himself and Annie to let her go

yes it painful but its better to end a relationship that is not growing

I'm hoping that Annie takes this time for herself

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Posted: 5 years ago

thanks for the pm!

Part 34

phenomenal update! well written.

liked Maan taking care of Muskan.

Geet's feelings are reasonable.

Maan shut her up with a kiss.

great that he realises his feelings but will take things slowly as Geet needs time.

Maan has a tough road ahead of him.

nice that he assures Geet.

feeling for Vicky. but Annie was right!

Vicky is a wonderful person.

update soon

take care

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: aditi_2010


Maan is the type of man you dream about. I am lucky i met few men like that but alas none as a potential life partner.....ha ha

Well one reaction is going to be in the coming update. Thanks a lot dear!! smiley1

Lucky you...till now I have only heard or read about such man...only few pieces made by god themself....

Well its really feel nice to atleast read about such admirable characters

I am waiting that too eagerly...update soon

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Posted: 5 years ago

Maan lovingly taking care of muskan Annie was in hurry to tell Geet his feelings but he knows Geet well enough

Geet is too shattered that she accept anyone cate fr hr Maan help making hr restless bz she don't want to feel anything bz she think at the end everyone leaves hr and so do Maan so she not ready to accept hr feel or what Maan feel he get hr so he told hr he cares fr hr like friends and if they remain friends and if she is ready than they will think about b more

Geet is totally lost trust on relationship and fr that she not ready to accept hr own feelings Maan having hard time to convince hr on friendship and telling hr about attraction but it's tough to hide his on feelings he want to shout he love hr from the very first time he feels something fr hr she never leave his mind but fr now he have to settle on friendship

Annie breaking with Vicky it's very hard fr Vicky to let hr go but fr hr he get ready

It's painful fr Vicky but Annie doing right when she can't fully his than better let hr go if she come back than he is lucky but once he have to let hr free

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Posted: 5 years ago

Nice update. Why did Annie give hope to Vicki and now she is breaking up. I hope geet goes counseling and comeback to Maan. Maan loves geet and is willing to help her out. Waiting for the next update.

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Posted: 5 years ago

So beautiful updates. You have turned this story of ordinary people with flaws into an extra ordinary story. Very few writers are capable of expressing emotions so brilliantly. Sorry for late reading.

Waiting for next part.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Nice update. Geet lost her confidence. She suffered a lot. She doesn't have a courage to move on or believe people.

Annie and Vicky are emotional .she took a great decision not choosing anyone of them.

I think it will be Time that heal them and help them to move on in their lives

Maan and vicky are really good and will stand for them when they need them

Continue the story and update as soon as possible.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Maan is in loveFinally he accepted his feelings to himself all the while it was visible to all like brij annie et al ...yet the very dear maan and geet kept themselves aloof....I am at lil bit peace now...

For geet I can empathise the poor soul here...how it would have been felt to child unloved by her very own mother...well the troubled family ensues such child no wonder...let maan take away all the insecurities

Loved it

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Posted: 5 years ago

Maan and Vicky are both awesome!!!

Maan is truly selfless and a gem of a person! Loved the scene between Maan and Geet. I hope that there’s more to their friendship soon enough!

Annie is doing the right thing by letting Vicky go but I hope that he’s the one she chooses when she gets over her heartbreak.

Hoping and praying that you and everyone stays safe in these unprecedented times and desperately hoping for that normalcy to be back!


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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: nishamna

Great part. The best thing is that maan knows geet very well now. He knows geet's set of mind and know what is right for her. Though he loves her ,he preferred to give importance to geet's wishes. I really hope geet also realizes that maan is her soul partner.

I felt bad for Vicky but what aniee did was necessary. She really needs to come out from the both relationship so that she can take best decision for her own life. Waiting for next dear


Thanks a lot dear 😊 I am sure you would enjoy the journey of Geet's realizations. I am sure you would enjoy Annie's journey as well.

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