Nazar/ Piansh Stories - Page 21

Good Luck Nikki! You will do well

Originally posted by: Nikki_srk

Well, I will try my level best...

Dialogues ka is baar nahi keh sakte cos I write Naman's dialogues mostly in Hindi, specifically in his own style. Am writing his dialogues in English for the first time...

Okay! All the best! 👍🏼

But if you feel the touch is missing, then I would suggest you to write in Hindi.

Writing Naman's dialogue in English would be really difficult if we have to keep the humor itact. 🤔

Originally posted by: Madhura..

Good Luck Nikki! You will do well

Thank you so much... 😊

Nushy I have one doubt, in first chapter. Where is Pia? Cos both came to take care of Dafli right? So Ansh was with Dafli..

Originally posted by: nushy1995

Okay! All the best! 👍🏼

But if you feel the touch is missing, then I would suggest you to write in Hindi.

Writing Naman's dialogue in English would be really difficult if we have to keep the humor itact. 🤔

Thanks... 🤗

But won't it look wierd?? I mean the first two chapters have all the dialogues in English and all of a sudden the dialogues are switched to Hindi?

I agree... Keeping the humor intact in Naman's dialogues will be difficult.

So, should I give more dialogues to Pia rather than Naman??

Originally posted by: Madhura..

Nushy I have one doubt, in first chapter. Where is Pia? Cos both came to take care of Dafli right? So Ansh was with Dafli..

Well, I guess she wrote that he had an ugly fight with Pia in the morning and had left the house in rage...

Originally posted by: Nikki_srk

Thanks... 🤗

But won't it look wierd?? I mean the first two chapters have all the dialogues in English and all of a sudden the dialogues are switched to Hindi?

I agree... Keeping the humor intact in Naman's dialogues will be difficult.

So, should I give more dialogues to Pia rather than Naman??

Actually it won't cos Naman isn't there much. Plus you have come in history, so you could do anyways.

Infact both Naman and Pia can have Hindi dialogues. Pia can have a blend of both.

It's all your take.

Originally posted by: Madhura..

Nushy I have one doubt, in first chapter. Where is Pia? Cos both came to take care of Dafli right? So Ansh was with Dafli..

No! Naman called Ansh to ask whether they could babysit Dafli or not. But then the fight ensued and in his rage, Ansh didn't inform Piya and left alone. So only Ansh was present in Nishant's home.

Originally posted by: Nikki_srk

Thanks... 🤗

But won't it look wierd?? I mean the first two chapters have all the dialogues in English and all of a sudden the dialogues are switched to Hindi?

I agree... Keeping the humor intact in Naman's dialogues will be difficult.

So, should I give more dialogues to Pia rather than Naman??

Well, writing in English is better in a sense that anyone can read that. There were some FFs that I wanted to read but couldn't because the writers wrote in their native language. 🤔

But if you really feel that the essence is getting lost then you should go with Hindi. Otherwise if it's only minor, then we both should continue in English.

About Piya and Naman - your wish. After all, you know how you want to proceed. So whoever needs prominance, you should focus on them.

Piya heroine Hain iska Matlab thodi na Hain ki saara dialogue use he de denge! 😆

Originally posted by: nushy1995

No! Naman called Ansh to ask whether they could babysit Dafli or not. But then the fight ensued and in his rage, Ansh didn't inform Piya and left alone. So only Ansh was present in Nishant's home.

Sorry for the confusion. Thanks for mentioning. Yes, he slammed the door, and left. Got it.