Nazar/ Piansh Stories - Page 20

Originally posted by: nushy1995

Thanks dear! 🤗

Tareef Ke Liya Shukriya!!! (In Mohana's style) 😆 😆 😆 I actually logged into Hotstar to see the airing date. 😛

Actually, my basic idea was for a completely different universe where only Ansh will remember everything. They were destined to meet because they were DD. Situations also lead to it. So I changed all the possible incidents. I am thinking, why don't we make them normal human being in this world? What if Mohana wasn't a Dayaan and she and Mridul died in some incident so Ansh was brought up by Bekar? What if this world is completely free of KSs? That way DivNish won't be Reevavanshis, Divya would have never abandoned Piya and she would grow up with a complete family. Guruma can still be their family friend which will explain Naman's presence.

In short, the main issue was Piya pointed out she had been cleaning up Ansh's mess and Ansh was angry and more importantly hurt so he was thinking of a scenario where they won't be burdened by their supernatural duty.

So it would be mostly him, Piya and Naman.

I know. It's becoming emotional. Which is why I need both of your help because you can turn Ansh-Naman interaction into a comic one. 😆 😆 😆

If you get any idea, you can surely write. Or you guys can discuss. but do it in PM. I want to get surprised when I read your versions. 😃

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I am talking about the year... Date to kuch bhi rakh li hoti to bhi chal jata. But, you need to be very particular with the years which the makers of each and every show are not. Like, during that 6 years leap, they separated in 2019. Yet, post leap, Ansh's cellphone's date showed the year as 2019 only!!!

So, here no KS's... Means Ansh is a normal human, Mo is not a Daayan and Pia is not a Daivik? Nice... Means PL is also not a Daayan? So, no supernatural duty!!! Very good...

Although yes, for a second I was confused with Nishant's office disappearing... Principal ka office aise hi gayab ho gaya!!!

Ansh, Pia and Naman... That's great!!!

Well, yes it is becoming emotional.

And yes, I have one idea... It is not much funny. But yes, it is definitely not an emotional one.

I am just waiting for Madhura to tell whether she is continuing it or not... Else, I will start completing the next part today itself. 😊

Nushy, it's written beautifully. Dates and everything changed. Neha was epic and Ansh and Ruby, 🤣.

Ansh remembers stuff and all, which is good but he is literally crying, for Pia. Justified! Also it's interesting how everything has changed.

Nikki - Of course, you can continue! It's your area, plus I have nothing in mind.

So, here no KS's... Means Ansh is a normal human, Mo is not a Daayan and Pia is not a Daivik? Nice... Means PL is also not a Daayan? So, no supernatural duty!!! Very good...

Yes! Everyone is human here. Ruby is just a typical fun-loving girl whom Ansh is dating.

Although yes, for a second I was confused with Nishant's office disappearing... Principal ka office aise hi gayab ho gaya!!!

Nishant to professor that na? Principal kab ban gaya? 😲

And yes, I have one idea... It is not much funny. But yes, it is definitely not an emotional one.

Can't wait for it. 😎

Originally posted by: Madhura..

Nushy, it's written beautifully. Dates and everything changed. Neha was epic and Ansh and Ruby, 🤣.

Ansh remembers stuff and all, which is good but he is literally crying, for Pia. Justified! Also it's interesting how everything has changed.

Thanks dear! 🤗

I was actually going to discuss something, but as Nushy has said, we should not, toh won't do it.😃

Nikki, you too write. It will be an interesting one.

Originally posted by: Madhura..

I was actually going to discuss something, but as Nushy has said, we should not, toh won't do it.😃

Nikki, you too write. It will be an interesting one.

Arre Mana nahi kiya yaar! Bas soch rahi this ki agar open discussion hogi tab to pata chal jayega ki kis direction or ja raha hain. Iss like bola ki chalo PM mein discuss karte Hain. Suspence rahega.

You guys go ahead with discussion. 👍🏼 I'll read once the chapter is uploaded. 😊

Yes! Everyone is human here. Ruby is just a typical fun-loving girl whom Ansh is dating.

Very good...

Nishant to professor that na? Principal kab ban gaya? 😲

I mean I thought he might be the principal or some authority as he had his own office plus Pia had gone to him for giving an application for part-time job.

Can't wait for it. 😎

I am already on it... Will try to complete as soon as possible.

But mind you, it might turn out to be utter nonsense.

I mean I thought he might be the principal or some authority as he had his own office plus Pia had gone to him for giving an application for part-time job.

Oh that! No yaar, he was only a professor. Ab professors ki bhi to office hota Hain na.

I am already on it... Will try to complete as soon as possible.

But mind you, it might turn out to be utter nonsense.

😃

Like Piya told Ansh, Mujhe to tumhara diya dard bhi accha lagta hain. 🤪

In the same way, mujhe to Tumhari nonsense ideas bhi Accha lagta Hain. Itna funny or apt dialogue likhte ho.

So again, can't wait for it. 😃

Originally posted by: nushy1995

Arre Mana nahi kiya yaar! Bas soch rahi this ki agar open discussion hogi tab to pata chal jayega ki kis direction or ja raha hain. Iss like bola ki chalo PM mein discuss karte Hain. Suspence rahega.

You guys go ahead with discussion. 👍🏼 I'll read once the chapter is uploaded. 😊

Yes, true. It's better.

I guess we won't too. I might if I feel it's really needed. Plus am not a lot in writing or seen the show that much.

But this touch of being humans is awesome.

Oh that! No yaar, he was only a professor. Ab professors ki bhi to office hota Hain na.

Oh okay... I was just confused because of that part-time job application thing.

Like Piya told Ansh, Mujhe to tumhara diya dard bhi accha lagta hain. 🤪

In the same way, mujhe to Tumhari nonsense ideas bhi Accha lagta Hain. Itna funny or apt dialogue likhte ho.

So again, can't wait for it. 😃

Well, I will try my level best...

Dialogues ka is baar nahi keh sakte cos I write Naman's dialogues mostly in Hindi, specifically in his own style. Am writing his dialogues in English for the first time...