Akdha Dark ff Game of Destiny chapter 43 on page 136 - Page 60

Originally posted by: Germanina

Wunderschön !!!!

(danke dir🤗).

Ich habe mit meinem inneren Auge diese beiden Liebenden gesehen und das Lesen dieser Fortsetzung genossen.

(Ehrfurcht, vielen Dank🤗).

D.ie Menschen auf der ganzen Welt sehnen sich nach Liebe , heute, wie vor 400 Jahren und deine Geschichte verleitet mich zum Träumen. Danke!!

(oh mein "! Wirklich"?😃 Ich bin so froh, es zu lesenDies ist ein sehr schönes Kompliment an den Autor durch den Leser, und ich bin davon berührt😳).

Ich glaube auch , dass beide noch eine schwere Zeit ,verbunden mit persönlichen und gesellschaftlichen Zwängen und nicht immer beliebten Entscheidungen, vor sich haben.

gut gesagt👍🏼sie kommen näher, aber das beendet nicht das Problem, das sie beide haben,😊 aber jetzt werden sie zusammen das Hindernis ihres Lebens bekämpfen😎 Wenn du auf einen angreifst, wird dich der andere auseinander reißen😈und das wird passieren, weil sie näher als zuvor sind

Ich bitte um Entschuldigung, ich bin noch eine Idee gekommen und ich bitte sie nur als Idee zu sehen und nicht als gehört Bevormundung, wie wäre es, wenn Rukaya und / oder Maanga Jodha entführen lassen und sie durch Sklavenhändler auf einen Markt verkaufen lassen wollen. Durch Zufall oder Sklavenmädchen-Einkäufer oder Boten oder Jalal selbst, wird sie gehört oder für seine Haremfolgen.

ich hoffe, ich habe dich nicht zu sehr zum Lachen gebracht und du kannst nicht mehr weiter schreiben.🤗

Um ehrlich zu sein, gibt es in dieser Geschichte vorerst viel zu tun😊

Es gibt noch viele Geheimnisse zu enthüllen, viele Schlachten warten auf sie

Ich hatte das von Anfang an im Kopf, ich will sicher nicht, dass Ruk Charachter wie Vamp 😆

Ihre Idee scheint cool,😉aber in dieser Arbeit umzusetzen wird es kompliziert machen 😆

Es war wieder ein wunderschönes Vergnügen, diese Fortsetzung zu lesen.

Um ehrlich zu sein, kann ich nicht aufhören zu lachen, wenn ich die Idee lese 😆 Vielen Dank, 🤗ich bin wirklich froh, dass Sie es erneut gelesen haben und es wie zuvor als bemerkenswert empfunden haben.😳

ich danke dir sehr,🤗

für deinen herzerwärmenden❤️ Kommentar zu meiner Arbeit "!.Vielen Dank,🤗🤗 dass Sie es noch einmal gelesen und mit Begeisterung genossen haben

Hello Rashmi,

I was hell busy thats why i was not able to read the updates. I will read them soon.

Within 1 -2 days will reply.

Thanks.

Originally posted by: divyaJA

Hello Rashmi,

Hi Divya di 🤗how are you"? Only busy then it's ok just take care 😳

I was hell busy thats why i was not able to read the updates. I will read them soon.

That's completely fine Divya di 😊 you just take care and have your time

Within 1 -2 days will reply.

Will wait then😃 just read it and enjoy 😒you drop your reson that's itself enough for me to know you didn't forget it 😆

Thanks.

Take care 🤗

Hi,

So i m back🤣

Ok so let me start with the reviews

Oh my god, rashmi you surprised me or ypu can say i am very shocked by the updates😆🤣

Soooooooo many things happened in these 2 updates

Jo ja SR part😳(Most shocking but romantic at the same time❤️😳)

JO to become Mallika-e-hind👏(Again a shock, but she deserve it)

Conspiracy against jodha

Maan wedding😆 jo is going amer (oh i am waiting to see avantika and jo's meeting)

Hamida again negative😡

Ruk as always jealous😡

Maham, adham, sharif, bakshi all are evil person😡

Sujamal i like this character in serial but ekta mata ne sahi se portray nhi kiya.

Jo ja relation is getting stronger thats good.

Amer track waiting for it

Thanks for the update rashmi, it was really worth reading. I was really missing your story in my busy schedule too hihihi.

😉

One of the best consummation I have ever read .How gracefully, beautifully You have created this scene veiling their dignity, as a royal couple it was needed. I don't like vulgarity in love making scene. It was so sensuous.

Love the way he declared her Malika-E-Hind..She deserve it and earned it herself .I am falling for this strong minded ,self respecting Jodha day by day.Your command on History is appriciable..

Keep writing .As a writer you have tremendous potential .Thanks for this amazing blissful story.🤗

Originally posted by: divyaJA

Hi,

So i m back🤣

(Hi Welcome😃 back Divya di 🤗).

Ok so let me start with the reviews

(Sure sure 😆).

Oh my god, rashmi you surprised me or ypu can say i am very shocked by the updates😆🤣

Soooooooo many things happened in these 2 updates

(Oh I feel thrilled by the confession it's truly hitting a jackpot situation for me then 😎 if I happen to shock you by the updates thank you so much 🤗).

Jo ja SR part😳(Most shocking but romantic at the same time❤️😳)

(Most awaited moment of this story☺️ I am glad I happen to pull it out well enough to impress you 😳. Honestly I always feel shy mostly uncomfortable in writing scene as such,☺️ first because I ain't truly exposé to this phase😳, second I don't really know the reason well 😆perhaps like my dad say I am little bird🤣).

JO to become Mallika-e-hind👏(Again a shock, but she deserve it)

(Yes yes 😎 @underline 👏well said Divya di shocking surely but she deserved it Authoritively ).

Conspiracy against jodha

(Futile attempt of enemy 😆).

Maan wedding😆 jo is going amer (oh i am waiting to see avantika and jo's meeting)

(Wanted to see his wedding in JA alas 😒 gonna fulfil this wish here 😆 (I mean to ask what you will truly wish to see in sister meet"? Like them breaking the ice between them"? Which build because of her marriage"! if you clear then it's will help me to really penned down their scene more coolly😳).

Hamida again negative

Ruk as always jealous

Maham, adham, sharif, bakshi all are evil person😡

(Oh my 🤣 it's like you don't sympathies with Ruk an ounce of it 🤣 oh my dear Divya di don't hate her so much Yaar, 😆 I pity her because of JA series the way they shaped her up made us hate her as hell 🤣. Anyway yes all are bad but they have their reason, which doesn't help to justify their deed at all. They're still wrong will pay dearly 😎).

Sujamal i like this character in serial but ekta mata ne sahi se portray nhi kiya.

(One of my favourite character more than Bhagwant Das, because of the stunt he pulled at the wedding time,😳 he knew he's getting in lion den, he knew she hates him, won't believe him 😒yet he sneaked in to inform her about her father treachery😎 I believe if anyone truly loved her in Amer clan it was him no else. This I say watching him in JA 😊. Henceforth going to work on his character here more 😃. But now knowing you like him to I will make him favourite one here like Maan ,Rahim , Mainavati,😳).

Jo ja relation is getting stronger thats good.

Amer track waiting for it

(Yes they're gotten closer, stronger with each passing moment of their lives😎, @ underlined - waiting for more Akdha scene without disturbance"? Or for entire set up there 😉 even I am excited to write😆).

Thanks for the update rashmi, it was really worth reading. I was really missing your story in my busy schedule too hihihi.

😉

(Awe 🤗thank you 🤗 so much for your ❤️ warming review your words you missed the update even being busy woo me truly ☺️ thank you Divya di for your support for your encouraging word taking time to drop your view over my work and specially notifying me about your busy schedule😃 for all your effort).

Originally posted by: amitaprasad

One of the best consummation I have ever read .How gracefully, beautifully You have created this scene veiling their dignity, as a royal couple it was needed. I don't like vulgarity in love making scene. It was so sensuous.

(thank you 🤗 so much you don't like reading it, while I don't feel good while writing it 😆 scene as such are so high level type for me that I try to keep short as much I can ☺️ I am glad you find it worth reading and appreciable thank you so much for your lovely appreciable words 🤗🤗 )

Love the way he declared her Malika-E-Hind..She deserve it and earned it herself .I am falling for this strong minded ,self respecting Jodha day by day.Your command on History is appriciable..

(Again thank you🤗 I am glad no one find it odd, or to shocking when she got this title😳, the words she deserve it or truly earned it by readers make me know I had wrote her character worth praising and this make me feel extremely good about myself thank you 🤗).

Keep writing .As a writer you have tremendous potential .Thanks for this amazing blissful story.🤗

Awe 🤗thank you 🤗so much for your lovely review I am truly thrilled by your review it's highly encouraging for author like me thank you🤗keep reading and enjoy 😳

Originally posted by: Rashmisingh9151

(Wanted to see his wedding in JA alas gonna fulfil this wish here (I mean to ask what you will truly wish to see in sister meet"? Like them breaking the ice between them"? Which build because of her marriage"! if you clear then it's will help me to really penned down their scene more coolly).

I would say you should write according to your perspective, bcz then only i would love to read it and then only i can appreciate it as well (as i know you will do your best). I believe as a writer only you can write your story in a better way. As a reader everyone has their own expectations from story, but this is not our imagination, its yours fully and i really enjoyed it the way you write.
so i want you to write what you want and thats the thing i will love to read.
but yes can give some ideas like - breaking the ice between both will be good one, as jo suffered alot now its her time to get loved)😊

Also wanted to add - i want to write a long long review for this update, but i couldn't bcz i was not having words to explain what i felt after reading the update, i was actually shocked by all the things that happened in just 2 updates. I liked when i feel surprised like this...truly entertaining and awesomely written.

Originally posted by: divyaJA

I would say you should write according to your perspective, bcz then only i would love to read it and then only i can appreciate it as well (as i know you will do your best). I believe as a writer only you can write your story in a better way. As a reader everyone has their own expectations from story, but this is not our imagination, its yours fully and i really enjoyed it the way you write.

so i want you to write what you want and thats the thing i will love to read.
but yes can give some ideas like - breaking the ice between both will be good one, as jo suffered alot now its her time to get loved)😊

Also wanted to add - i want to write a long long review for this update, but i couldn't bcz i was not having words to explain what i felt after reading the update, i was actually shocked by all the things that happened in just 2 updates. I liked when i feel surprised like this...truly entertaining and awesomely written.

My your faith over my work in this, your encouraging words and then your simple yet effective answer to my query Divya di you're awesome I am glad truly thrilled by how well you think about my ways to write and how much faith you have over it thank you🤗take a 🙏🏼 for your encouraging words, and effort to really answer me

Actually I was worried about one thing as you see it's historical fiction, and I cannot go round and round with twist, so I wasn't sure how the story here going forward so I make situation sudden or unexpectedly as I don't gave preacap or teaser, however I try best to make it look like no it's not unexpected but it was coming and it's proceedings with flow and i am truly thrilled to know🥳 how I happen to shock you so much that's it's make you speechless for while but again your review was worth waiting for me 😎 thank you🤗

@Underline - thanks for that,😊 this is what I wanted to clear it, so now the next update will be full of many things 😊even though it's not coming soon because of my exam which even cause Cornavirus not going to be delayed and happening back to back 😡after Friday I will start writing cause that's when my exams are going to finish

Thank you Divya di 🤗

Stay safe🙏 and take care 🤗

Originally posted by: Rashmisingh9151

My your faith over my work in this, your encouraging words and then your simple yet effective answer to my query Divya di you're awesome I am glad truly thrilled by how well you think about my ways to write and how much faith you have over it thank you🤗take a 🙏🏼 for your encouraging words, and effort to really answer me

Actually I was worried about one thing as you see it's historical fiction, and I cannot go round and round with twist, so I wasn't sure how the story here going forward so I make situation sudden or unexpectedly as I don't gave preacap or teaser, however I try best to make it look like no it's not unexpected but it was coming and it's proceedings with flow and i am truly thrilled to know🥳 how I happen to shock you so much that's it's make you speechless for while but again your review was worth waiting for me 😎 thank you🤗

@Underline - thanks for that,😊 this is what I wanted to clear it, so now the next update will be full of many things 😊even though it's not coming soon because of my exam which even cause Cornavirus not going to be delayed and happening back to back 😡after Friday I will start writing cause that's when my exams are going to finish

Thank you Divya di 🤗

Stay safe🙏 and take care 🤗

All the very best for your exams rashmi,

And you too take care.