#Friends to #Partners KuKu AT 2 - Page 39

Originally posted by: Nikki_wanderer

Yes please I would love to read it and I am sure everyone else would want to read it too 😃

I am going to bed now but if you post it in few hours, tomorrow morning, instead of the news I will get to read your HC 😆

Btw I loved your analysis of Bekhudi. Will try to respond in detail tomorrow.

The news!🤢 Mood off hi ho jaata hai aajkal. I come here to take a break from reality.

Now, on to the story! This is set somewhere between kal and aaj ke episodes. I have tried to keep it as close to canon as possible. Let me know if I missed something.

As soon as the Maheshwari family left, Kuhu ran towards the stairs to go check up on her Abir bro but she was so scared and worried that her feet took her to the terrace garden. It took her almost 10minutes before she was able to get her breathing under control. When she felt that she could breathe again, she decided to take another shot at checking up on Abir. She walked into his room hesitantly, hoping against hope, that he might've regained consciousness but alas! There he lay on the bed, unconscious, in an empty room, no Mishti in sight.

As she sat down beside him, tears streaming down her face and the events from the past 24 hours running through her head, she could feel her head throbbing. Thoughts were racing inside her brain at lightning speed and all she could catch were faint echoes of "....bali ki bakri...meri dawaaiyaan...koi secrets nahi...saazish...Abir!..". She put one hand over her ear and the other clenched the bedsheet as she squeezed her eyes shut and whispered over her sobs, "I am sorry! I am sorry, Abir bro!"

She slowly opened her eyes as she felt her thoughts slowing down. She gently took Abir's hand in her hands and said, "Kaash maine sabko coffee peene se rok diya hota to aaj aap iss haal me nahi hote. Sab meri galati hai! Sab meri galti hai! Pata nahi mujhe kya ho gaya hai? Mai kisi ko hurt karne ke baare me soch bhi kaise sakti hu? Meri wajah se aap aaj pooja nahi kar paaye. Meri wajah se aap itne ghanto se iss bed pe hai. I promise, Abir bro, maine ye jaan boojh ke nahi kiya tha. Wo to mujhe dhakka laga aur pills gir gayi. Mujhe to pata bhi nahi tha ki pills coffee me hai bhi ya nahi. Par mujhe chance nahi lena chahiye. Mujhe wo pills nikalne ke baare me sochna bhi nahi chahiye tha. Pata nahi gusse me mujhe kya ho jaata hai but I swear! Mai wo pills nahi daalne waali thi. Wo galti se gir gayi. I am sorry! I am so so sorry, Abir bro!! Please uth jaaiye! Please!"

"Kuhu?!"

Kuhu left Abir's hand, wiped her tears and stood up in a hurry as she saw Mishti standing at the door.

"Mishti! Mai bas Abir bro ko dekhne aayi thi. Mai neeche jaa kar dekhti hu baaki sab theek hai ya nahi", and with that she ran out the door, confirming Mishti's suspicions. Mishti decided to leave the matter till Abir was conscious and well and she sat down beside him urging him, or rather threatening him to open his eyes lest he wanted to be subject to her amateur poetry skills.

What neither of the two sisters had realised was that Abir had been semi-conscious for a while now. He just didn't have the strength to move his body. As sore as his body felt, his brain was picking up speed, trying to comprehend Kuhu's apology when Mishti started threatening him about how she wouldn't let him tie the haar around her neck and all he wanted in that moment was to somehow make his Angry Chorni realise that he was okay, that he was awake but his body was in no mood to listen to his demands.

[Insert MishBir scene, kitchen scene and rest of the episode]

So, this is my first ever story. I know have been writing descriptive stuff till now but this is the first properly written thing. Please please please tell me if it was alright or not. What are the points I could improve on?? Any and all criticism is welcome. I really do want to improve🥱

Originally posted by: PureDrivenSnow

Aatma ki tarah yahan bhatkungi, so I read all your posts coz you guys write so well.

You can add me to the list of bhatking aatmas as well! 😃

The show has become too hard to keep up with at this point, but I am finding it so hard to let go of Kuku (despite my resolution to consider the divorce paper burning the end of their story). I'll just keep up with Kuku scenes until we reach a resolution to this whole rigmarole!

Our posts getting shifted to the LU thread (of all places) was an interesting call 😕

Originally posted by: Samanalyse

You can add me to the list of bhatking aatmas as well! 😃

The show has become too hard to keep up with at this point, but I am finding it so hard to let go of Kuku (despite my resolution to consider the divorce paper burning the end of their story). I'll just keep up with Kuku scenes until we reach a resolution to this whole rigmarole!

Our posts getting shifted to the LU thread (of all places) was an interesting call 😕

I thought so too. Why the LU thread of all places??

Me too!! I am unable to leave KuKu. Their scenes are 🔥!!

Sam, do you have any KuKu HCs to share?? If so, please do!

Originally posted by: aquaHP

The news!🤢 Mood off hi ho jaata hai aajkal. I come here to take a break from reality.

Now, on to the story! This is set somewhere between kal and aaj ke episodes. I have tried to keep it as close to canon as possible. Let me know if I missed something.

As soon as the Maheshwari family left, Kuhu ran towards the stairs to go check up on her Abir bro but she was scared to see him that her feet took her to the terrace garden. It took her almost 10minutes before she was able to get her breathing under control. When she felt that she could breathe again, she decided to take another shot at checking up on Abir. She walked into his room hesitantly, hoping against hope, that he might've regained consciousness but alas! There he lay on the bed, unconscious, in an empty room, no Mishti in sight.

As she sat down beside him, tears streaming down her face and the events from the past 24 hours running through her head, she could feel her head throbbing. Thoughts were racing inside her brain at lightning speed and all she could catch were faint echoes of "....bali ki bakri...meri dawaaiyaan...koi secrets nahi...saazish...Abir!..". She put one hand over her ear and the other clenched the bedsheet as she squeezed her eyes shut and whispered over her sobs, "I am sorry! I am sorry, Abir bro!"

She slowly opened her eyes as she felt her thoughts slowing down. She gently took Abir's hand in her hands and said, "Kaash maine sabko coffee peene se rok diya hota to aaj aap iss haal me nahi hote. Sab meri galati hai! Sab meri galti hai! Pata nahi mujhe kya ho gaya hai? Mai kisi ko hurt karne ke baare me soch bhi kaise sakti hu? Meri wajah se aap aaj pooja nahi kar paaye. Meri wajah se aap itne ghanto se iss bed pe hai. I promise, Abir bro, maine ye jaan boojh ke nahi kiya tha. Wo to mujhe dhakka laga aur pills gir gayi. Mujhe to pata bhi nahi tha ki pills coffee me hai bhi ya nahi. Par mujhe chance nahi lena chahiye. Mujhe wo pills nikalne ke baare me sochna bhi nahi chahiye tha. Pata nahi gusse me mujhe kya ho jaata hai but I swear! Mai wo pills nahi daalne waali thi. Wo galti se gir gayi. I am sorry! I am so so sorry, Abir bro!! Please uth jaaiye! Please!"

"Kuhu?!"

Kuhu left Abir's hand, wiped her tears and stood up in a hurry as she saw Mishti standing at the door.

"Mishti, mai bas Abir bro ko dekhne aayi thi. Mai neeche jaa kar dekhti hu baaki sab theek hai ya nahi", and with that she ran out the door, confirming Mishti's suspicions. Mishti decided to leave the matter till Abir was conscious and well and she sat down beside him urging him, or rather threatening him to open his eyes lest he wanted to be subject to her amateur poetry skills.

What neither of the two sisters had realised was that Abir had been semi-conscious for a while now. He just didn't have the strength to move his body. As sore as his body felt, his brain was picking up speed, trying to comprehend Kuhu's apology when Mishti started threatening him about how she wouldn't let him tie the haar around her neck and all he wanted in that moment was to somehow make his Angry Chorni realise that he was okay, that he was awake but darn it! His body was in no mood to listen to his demands.

[Insert MishBir scene, kitchen scene and rest of the episode]

So, this is my first ever story. I know have been writing descriptive stuff till now but this is the first properly written thing. Please please please tell me if it was alright or not. What are the points I could improve on?? Any and all criticism is welcome. I really do want to improve🥱

I really wish this happened in the episode 😭 I think this story needs a solid KuBir scene like this to set things right!

Originally posted by: aquaHP

🤣

I am sad that they are taking the hypocrisy route. I so didn't want that to happen. I already like FL and ML. I don't need to hate another character to like their characters.

@bold: I don't.

But if the attempt is to try and convert us, I'm not sure they're going to be successful because I've simply stopped watching the show altogther. I'm sure I'm not alone either.

Originally posted by: Samanalyse

You can add me to the list of bhatking aatmas as well! 😃

The show has become too hard to keep up with at this point, but I am finding it so hard to let go of Kuku (despite my resolution to consider the divorce paper burning the end of their story). I'll just keep up with Kuku scenes until we reach a resolution to this whole rigmarole!

Our posts getting shifted to the LU thread (of all places) was an interesting call 😕

@bold: That's the only problem but they way things are going it doesn't seem like we'll get anything substantial so I'd rather not waste my time being invested.

Originally posted by: PureDrivenSnow

@bold: I don't.

But if the attempt is to try and convert us, I'm not sure they're going to be successful because I've simply stopped watching the show altogther. I'm sure I'm not alone either.

Not even in the nicer episodes?? What about Abir??

It feels like I might stop too but I am hopeful for KuKu scenes in upcoming episodes. I'm gonna give it a go till the Holi episodes. If there's still no hope, I might stop watching.

The sole reason for me watching the episodes is you guys.

I'm really looking forward to the Holi episodes. If we're keeping up the predictability of ITV plots, Kuhu will get drunk unintentionally and spill the truth to someone. If there is any dhamaka I want to see, it is that. These days, I find myself coming to this forum straightaway to read the episode analyses on this thread so that I feel better about how bad the track is.

Quick sidenote: I just updated my KuKu fanfiction after a LONG time. Please give it a read and let me know what y'all think. I value your feedback a lot!

Originally posted by: journalgirl321

I really wish this happened in the episode 😭 I think this story needs a solid KuBir scene like this to set things right!

Thank you for reading, Meera!!❤️ I am so glad that you liked it. I am really hoping that this track doesn't take away Kuhu and the KuBir bond from me. I really love these two!! And I love the way Kunal adores them! I am so dreading the reveal😵

Originally posted by: journalgirl321

I'm really looking forward to the Holi episodes. If we're keeping up the predictability of ITV plots, Kuhu will get drunk unintentionally and spill the truth to someone. If there is any dhamaka I want to see, it is that. These days, I find myself coming to this forum straightaway to read the episode analyses on this thread so that I feel better about how bad the track is.

Quick sidenote: I just updated my KuKu fanfiction after a LONG time. Please give it a read and let me know what y'all think. I value your feedback a lot!

I want this negative track to be over by Holi but that remains to be seen. Your theory seems plausible. I do the same. I check the forum first and then go see the episode. And episode dekhne se pehle, I move the cursor over to check if there are any KuKu scenes.

Okay! Imma run to read your story!! Super excited!