FIGHT AGAINST DESTINY-PreRishFF Thrd2 Part 27 Pg-122 Updt. 24th May - Page 5

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

Knowing that I will always get to read the updates before anyone else makes me

This is when I wait for your reviews on my drafts

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

new thread means many more new updates back to back yayaya

I have so much more to write

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

Bonus blessing your thread with

a) Taalli Bajaj i mean Asad :P

b) Naughty Karan who is picking up pakodes without anyone's notice, just like I do all my shaitaniya here haha

talli Bajaj/asad is so cute.. kaise pagal jaise he smiling .. full talli..

And why is he churaoing the pakoda when he can eat it aram se🤣

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

Also

Meenu 🤗🤗🤗

Congratulations on the new thread. 😃😃

Will the read the update before sleeping tonight 😎

Originally posted by: MishtyShona

Meenu 🤗🤗🤗

Congratulations on the new thread. 😃😃

Will the read the update before sleeping tonight 😎

Hellooo mishty again 🤗

Thank you so much.. read when you have time..Its always a pleasure reading your comments and connections ..so intezar ka phal meetha.. and I replied to all your posts and Menaka wala super long post bhi bhi isi thread pe

Hello,

Good one and liked the timeline chart...

RB's A2 has come back to him.

These 3 so workaholic, they have turned hospital table into mini office...

And amra is all set to take off...

Kukki was so excited to see Rishab office. But he disappointed her. No issues he wI'll surely make it up for her...

Prerana arrived at mumbai. And showing kukkie the beach which she already saw with her papa...

For adi it was so easy to just leave and patch up with RB. Other side menaka is not willing to come infront of RB.. this sounds interesting?!

Mumbai has only 2 weeks time to impress or change prerana mind so that she stays back... Let us how it happens?!

Continue soon

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

talli Bajaj/asad is so cute.. kaise pagal jaise he smiling .. full talli..

And why is he churaoing the pakoda when he can eat it aram se🤣

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

Hellooo mishty again 🤗

Thank you so much.. read when you have time..Its always a pleasure reading your comments and connections ..so intezar ka phal meetha.. and I replied to all your posts and Menaka wala super long post bhi bhi isi thread pe

Soul sistaaaa🤗🤗

I am going to read your replies now. In the meanwhile, here is my review of the current chapter.

After 14 Chapters, Alea iacta est meaning "the die is cast (thrown)" for Prerna to come to Mumbai, her destiny is leading her to the right path. RB unknowingly is the reason Prerna will find her her way back to him and hopefully, this time she will forever become an indisputable part of it.

Thank you for the timeline, that makes things easier.

Clever of you to get Bandana to suggest Prerna's name for AMRA foundation and not Adi, to not leave any scope for Prerna or anyone else to later imply that RB pulled the strings to get her to Mumbai.

Adi-RB reunion was emotional and cute. Loved how Adi is taking care of RB. He finally realized his mistakes in targeting Rishabh jeopardizing his business and his making him stay away from his daughter. RB is after all a single parent and his daughter needs him more than ever.

The moment between Adi and Kukki is so touching and realistic. Him finding physical traits of RB and Menka in her is believable. Looking forward to Adi-Kukki bonding. Mama-Bhanji have a very special bond and I think Adi will be a good mama to his cute bhanji.

I truly appreciate how you are integrating Mehra in the story, it is really easy to do away with him, especially in FF's having so many protagonists. RB-Mehra are love. Mehra is always there for RB like a father would be for his son and the best part is RB knows this very well and appreciates and cherishes Mehra in his own way.

You managed to keep RB in character, with him starting to work from hospital once he got and mended fences with Adi. Mehra is shrewd enough to clear the paper work knowing very well he would get an earful if caught. The doctor giving instructions to RB and him being busy with Kukki is cute and relatable in equal measures. Further, the three workaholics in Office sequence was funny and cute in equal measures. Waiting for a sequence where RB will give Kukki a tour of his office.

Menka-Adi dynamics is slowly changing and I am loving the route I think it is taking. Conflict ahead for them is what I forecast. Very soon Menka will be jealous of Adi thanks to his renewed friendship with RB and his proximity to both RB and Kukki. She was disappointed at not being made part of AMRA foundation, considering she was one of its founding members too during its inception. Further, I feel the RB-Menka split happened under the shadow that Adi's betrayal of RB cast on them. Menka may have finally sided with her brother over her husband and that may have been the final nail in the coffin!

I am loving the way you are slowly and steadily developing Prerna's character arc. For the first time in her life, Pre took a decision after consulting her family. Finally thodi akkal aa rahi hai ladki mein! The rusted gears of her brains have slowly started turning. Good good. Her family being excited for her is a welcome change as well, especially Shivi being happy for Prerna is rare when it does not involve Anurag!

Prerna carrying the photo frame with her to Mumbai is a good sign. She taking out the Bajaj family portrait and caressing Kukki it in is great. I think soon the family picture will adorn the photo frame and will not be a hitch-hiker!

Prerna thinking of how Kukki will enjoy the beach and her acknowledgement that RB is the best dad is pure LOVE.

Eagerly waiting for the next update.

PS: I don't mind some PreRish hit and miss scenes in the next update wherein they would feel the presence of each other but will not be able to meet, creating some confusion and odd behavior on their part that people around them will take notice. This will amp the excitement for PreRish meeting as well.

PPS: Congratulations on becoming an IF Rockerz. You truly are a rockstar babe and I wish many more IF promotions for you.

Originally posted by: MishtyShona

Soul sistaaaa🤗🤗

I am going to read your replies now. In the meanwhile, here is my review of the current chapter.

After 14 Chapters, Alea iacta est meaning "the die is cast (thrown)" for Prerna to come to Mumbai, her destiny is leading her to the right path. RB unknowingly is the reason Prerna will find her her way back to him and hopefully, this time she will forever become an indisputable part of it.

Thank you for the timeline, that makes things easier.

Clever of you to get Bandana to suggest Prerna's name for AMRA foundation and not Adi, to not leave any scope for Prerna or anyone else to later imply that RB pulled the strings to get her to Mumbai.

Adi-RB reunion was emotional and cute. Loved how Adi is taking care of RB. He finally realized his mistakes in targeting Rishabh jeopardizing his business and his making him stay away from his daughter. RB is after all a single parent and his daughter needs him more than ever.

The moment between Adi and Kukki is so touching and realistic. Him finding physical traits of RB and Menka in her is believable. Looking forward to Adi-Kukki bonding. Mama-Bhanji have a very special bond and I think Adi will be a good mama to his cute bhanji.

I truly appreciate how you are integrating Mehra in the story, it is really easy to do away with him, especially in FF's having so many protagonists. RB-Mehra are love. Mehra is always there for RB like a father would be for his son and the best part is RB knows this very well and appreciates and cherishes Mehra in his own way.

You managed to keep RB in character, with him starting to work from hospital once he got and mended fences with Adi. Mehra is shrewd enough to clear the paper work knowing very well he would get an earful if caught. The doctor giving instructions to RB and him being busy with Kukki is cute and relatable in equal measures. Further, the three workaholics in Office sequence was funny and cute in equal measures. Waiting for a sequence where RB will give Kukki a tour of his office.

Menka-Adi dynamics is slowly changing and I am loving the route I think it is taking. Conflict ahead for them is what I forecast. Very soon Menka will be jealous of Adi thanks to his renewed friendship with RB and his proximity to both RB and Kukki. She was disappointed at not being made part of AMRA foundation, considering she was one of its founding members too during its inception. Further, I feel the RB-Menka split happened under the shadow that Adi's betrayal of RB cast on them. Menka may have finally sided with her brother over her husband and that may have been the final nail in the coffin!

I am loving the way you are slowly and steadily developing Prerna's character arc. For the first time in her life, Pre took a decision after consulting her family. Finally thodi akkal aa rahi hai ladki mein! The rusted gears of her brains have slowly started turning. Good good. Her family being excited for her is a welcome change as well, especially Shivi being happy for Prerna is rare when it does not involve Anurag!

Prerna carrying the photo frame with her to Mumbai is a good sign. She taking out the Bajaj family portrait and caressing Kukki it in is great. I think soon the family picture will adorn the photo frame and will not be a hitch-hiker!

Prerna thinking of how Kukki will enjoy the beach and her acknowledgement that RB is the best dad is pure LOVE.

Eagerly waiting for the next update.

PS: I don't mind some PreRish hit and miss scenes in the next update wherein they would feel the presence of each other but will not be able to meet, creating some confusion and odd behavior on their part that people around them will take notice. This will amp the excitement for PreRish meeting as well.

PPS: Congratulations on becoming an IF Rockerz. You truly are a rockstar babe and I wish many more IF promotions for you.

Mishty.. you ARE MY SOUL SISTER.. I don't know how but you can read my mind.. this is a beautiful post, and I am simply amazed by how beautifully you have worded your thought that too in response to something I wrote- this means a lot seriously..

I have already read it 4 time in last 10-12 minutes ekdam pyaar pyaar se.. and I am still thinking how to reply .. there are things which you have mentioned, exactly the way they are supposed to happen in the story ahead and there is a tiny little twist as well, which I am not going to disclose at this point in time :) ... I hope you'd be okay with that..

you are so right, things have taken a turn that no one can reverse now.. I learnt a new phrase today thanks to you.- Alea iacta est meaning "the die is cast (thrown)

I am glad timeline looks helpful, because we will be going back a few more times in in coming updates, so I thought it will help. I have the completed timeline that I refer to while writing. This one is missing a few crucial events, which I will update as when they happen. Yeyy. mehnat kaam ayaa

Bandana it is and no one else, as this made more sense to me.. though you have shared an interesting take that nobody will be able to put it on Rishabh, so thank you for giving it a different perspective (abhi batti jail meri).. when I wrote it, Bandana looked the best person as Rishabh can't do it.. If Aditya directly asked for her, it would have been odd coz he barely knows her.. he knows she is good but he trusted Bandana and agreed when Bandana suggested her name..

RB needed a friend, he had one but lost him..And when Aditya came back to attack on BI, Rishabh knew it is the time to act and he did.. finally he got all he wanted.. not just his friend but gave him his long lost passion.. I am so glad to know you found is realistic.. yohoooooo.. ek aur mehnat safal

Adi-Kukki will surely have a deep bon.. Adi and Rishabh have been more like brothers, so that also adds to that extra love and care for Kukki..

Mehra is ❤️. He is the only one who has stuck by Rishabh's side unconditionally even of he had his disagreements.. you rightly said he is more like his father figure, who may not act like one, but is always there for Rishabh.. I love exploring their connection.. lets see aur kitna meaningful I can keep it

RB is RB, he is workaholic and people he associates with don't help either. chup chup ke did all the work.. but they made sure they did.. Kukki is getting an office tour for sure very soon..

I am so happy with the fact that you've noticed, rather predicted the shift in Menaka-Aditya dynamics.. now one has resolved everything and entered the safe space of Rishabh, where he belonged initially whereas his own sister is nothing more than a mere spectator at this point in time. Also as soon as Prerna enters the picture, it will further complicate things for her; her ride won't be an easy one.. some shift will happen, wo kya hoga we are yet to see..

I am soooo happy to know that some shift in Prerna's character is visible, because while writing I am constantly thinking if she is relatable or not? Is it too early or too late? etc etc.. thank you for sharing this, as this gives me a bit of assurance that its okay to now take her character as one who is a bit detached from and ready to explore more, instead of being stuck in the memories of Anurag. I can take breathe a sigh of relief :)

picture will take it right and deserved place for sure..

RB is best Dad is a FACT.. no one can deny, not even Prerna.

Hit and miss is what's on mind and you read my thoughts already …

Thank you soo much for your lovely wishes.. truly appreciate and cherish this little journey meeting with amazing people like you.. it has been a pleasure sharing this journey with you.. SO thank you again🤗