RoNakshi OS: A New Beginning [Rohit's guilt after divorce] - Page 2

I loved it!!! And I love you!!! Amazzzing writing, amazzzing portrayal of Ronakshi. You are simply amazzzing...❤️👏

Loved this so much. Beautifully written 🤗🤗

As always, you lived up to my expectation and how! beautifully written. i wish the writers also handled their marriage with the same kind of sensitivity and depth. I wish you added a bit more ronakshi romance to the story. i was craving that big time since it's far fetched in the show. please do write more, always wait for your stories eagerly

Originally posted by: Naynaa

Mushfika! This was so beautiful :)🤗

Initially I thought that Rohit was all alone in the farmhouse but then he wasn't! Sona was with him. This gave me so much sukoon I can't even put it into words.❤️

I love your take on this. It was so well written and I enjoyed every bit! (Although I was secretly hoping for Sona to slip into the pool🤡)

I hope you come up with more soon! Can't wait.

Love❤️,

Naina

@bold- omg me too😆

Originally posted by: malarmia

They are together after all 👍🏼 loved it.

Are they divorced?

Them meeting each other secretly is fine as long as they stick together ☺️

I also want Rohit to leave the Sippys & be selfish for once.

I want them to live for themselves. Migrate to a new country & live happily ever after.

Loved your story of how they both support one another.

Kudos 👏

@bold: That;'s exactly what I want them to be... I truly Rohit finally sees who actually cares for him and who is ready to give up her life for him...and that, is definitely not veena. it's high time he changes his priority list.

Thank you so much! So glad you liked it, and found it worthy enough to comment on🤗

Originally posted by: LoveAnushka

You know Mushifika! You should have sent this shot to stupid writers, maybe they would have got some brains to show not sufferings but smart moves!

Literally this is so good yaar! Beautiful shot! 🤗The way you showed Rohit's turmoil first but then showed how Sona tried to dispel that -ve & depressing thoughts, even though a bit, but just worth a try! And fake divorce, kaash even in show they would had been faking divorce thing but... Saddening reality is what we are dealing! 😭

Well! I loved the bit humor touch at end too... Maybe you should write one more part to show more of them working on plans & some cute yet emotional bonding ya? But I loved this one!

Do write more dear! 😳

Awwwhhh!!! Come here

You made me soooo happy. thank you so much for reading my work and commenting. Also, I don't think I would write a part two to it but I did write another OS just today on Sonakshi's accident. do check it out if you have some spare time 🤗

Originally posted by: docalan

It depicted the turmoil they are going through beautifully. I want them to live for themselves for a change.

Beautifully written do continue with writing, at this point in time we need these OS to get through.

Thank you so much my love! ☺️

Originally posted by: Naynaa

Mushfika! This was so beautiful :)🤗

Initially I thought that Rohit was all alone in the farmhouse but then he wasn't! Sona was with him. This gave me so much sukoon I can't even put it into words.❤️

I love your take on this. It was so well written and I enjoyed every bit! (Although I was secretly hoping for Sona to slip into the pool🤡)

I hope you come up with more soon! Can't wait.

Love❤️,

Naina

Nainaaaaaaaa!!!🤗

Haye always a pleasure to read your comments. Thank you so much, so glad you liked it.

PS. I was actually thinking of including sonakshi and rohit in the pool together but then i got tired and ended it there 😆 my lazy ass to be blamed

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Amazing os

Thank you!❤️

Originally posted by: Blackwind

So beautifully written❤️...only if the ongoing track gets replaced by this piece of yours😳

P.S: what about your FF 'the storm'?...was looking forward to it ....did u stopped writing on that?

Awww So sweet, thank you so much! My pleasure to be able to write something that y'all enjoy.. thank you for commenting🤗

and Oh god, I have written only half of that story. I can't get myself to finish it, idk why i'm not getting the same motivation i did when i wrote the first part. I'm sorry :(