MG - Teri Meri Chahatein : updated Part 30 @ Pg 139 || 22 October - Page 17

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: uluvmg

hi!! i'am umaa...lovely teaser... awe maan's revenge for geet's prank but he should be in limit ... excited for update... !!

Thank you Uma....😊

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Posted: 5 years ago

Very nice treaser

Watting for update

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Posted: 5 years ago

Teri Meri Chahatein





part - 5



Maan was pacing to and fro in the corner room of the corridor ....... He was out raged it was all because of his jealousy that made him to face a mockery before all the family members.... he made a fool out of himself just because he was unable to find out the relation between geet and vicky..... and how dare she to not tell him about them being friends that too best friends !! he was getting more furious each second thinking about all the things happened downstairs, just then he heard payal sound from the door and looked upto see geet standing there fidgeting her duppatta......he ran a frustarted hand through his hair and said Leave in a stern voice facing his back to her.She shuddered at his voice..... he knew if she stood there a minute longer, then he will loose all his self control and will hurt her but she was still standing there stumbling “ vo..vo...mai aapko yei...” “Leave before i loose my patience Geet.... just leave” he said in low dangerous tone... which made her shiver more in fear.... but she won’t go from here till she says what she has to say “ vo...vo... mai apko sorry kehena chahthi thi! Actually it’s no fault of mine phir bhi mai sorry boll rahi hoon and ....” but her words struck in middle when she felt herself pinned to the door by a pair of two strong arms

Maan was furious when he heard her say it’s no fault of her !how dare she when she was about to continue He took her off guard by suddenly grabbing her arms tightly and pinning her to door thus closing the door in the process! his hands wrapped around her arms tightly, his eyes Furious....he was burning in rage !!

She gasped as she felt the air knockout off her system due to sudden pinning.... She closed her eyes tightly as she felt scared to open them and see his eyes red shot eyes..... she was breathing heavily and so was he but due to different reasons she because she is scared of him and he due to his anger and something else unknown to him...... may be her strawberry smell was invading his senses!!!!!

“Chup chup ho jaovarna

She opened her eyes slowly at his voice.... his breath caressed her face he was standing so close to her, too close for her fragile heart....his eyes red, Jaw clenched... A shiver ran down her spine by their proximity. he was barely inches away from her, she was afraid! Never was she this close to someone else before! it's making her shiver in fear

She whimpered in pain as his fingers pressed her arms tightly "Ma...Maan" ... Her eyes filling with tears.....

Maan loosened his hold when he heard her whimper in pain but he didn’t move away from her. his name from her lips made him somewhat calm down his nerves.... she took his name for the first time !!!..... he looked at her almond eyes which were now filling with tears, her nose red, lips trembling... her smell.... it was driving him to loose his senses..... but it’s not the time, he had to show her what messing up with Maan singh khurana is !! ”you did what no one ever tried to do till now...you made me a fool out of myself before all my family members.... i just thought you were innocent but No, you are so full of yourself !! and how dare you to deny me when i asked you to say what’s vicky to you!” he said it in a low dangerous voice folding her arms behind her back pulling her to himself. Geet’s eyes were now full of tears and they were sliding down her cheeks “voo..voo..muje dard....” she started wriggling her arms to free herself “Stop moving.....jab tak meri baat khatam nahi hoti tab tak chup chaap yaha kadi raho....Samji tum”!! she nodded her head fearing his anger “don’t you dare try to insult me again..... and if you do the consequences will be beyond this “ saying this he pushed her off him and turned his back towards her.. .....she moved backwards due to the sudden impact nd this made her lose the balance and she fell backwards resulting in cutting of her wrist due to the sharp edge of a table near by. The cut was not that deep but blood started oozing out..... she hissed in pain “ouch..” hearing her he turned towards her to see her wrist bleeding his eyes widened in horror and he quickly moved towards her saying “GEET what happened....Are you Mad... can’t you see the table beside you ...dyaan kaha hai tumara?..... lagii tho nahii ” he took the bandage and rushed towards her to stop the bleeding but she moved backwards not letting him do “this is all because of you...door rahiye mujse....mere paas matt ayiye” she said in a hoarse voice... her tears flowing continuously because of his words and her cut....Maan closed his eyes in guilt... his heart pricked to see her in pain nd now her continuous tears were hurting him.... but he can’t say a sorry because his ego never allows him to say those words !!

Geet straightened herself and walked past Maan to head into the washroom but stopped as maan holds her other wrist stopping her “ I didn’t do it intentionally “ he said and took her to the bed and made her sit on it and started cleaning her cut with antiseptic liquid.she hissed in pain as liquid touched her cut .... Maan blowed air to cool down the burning sensation !.... she looked at him as he completed doing her bandage kaisa aadmi hai dard bhi deta hai aur malam bhi lagata ha hai ! he just then looked at her to see her looking at him in disbelief ! He knew what she was thinking but went off downstairs silently without saying her anything !! after reaching downstairs he went off to KM saying her mother that he has an urgent work !!

When he reached his room,he directly headed into the washroom in need of a cold shower. He stripped and stood under the cold shower.... the cool water calming his nerves he sighed and thought she is making me loose my sanity !I can’t seem to control myself around her whether its about anger or the that pricking feel when i had seen her in pain or the jealousy...,,,or that he wanted to just grab her in his arms and kiss her senseless when he had seen her in that peach coloured lahenga choli looking like an innocent angel!. WHAT THE HELL !! KISS where did this thought come from? when did he become such a despo!!! ...NOO this isn’t helping at all.... i have to stay away from her! He was determined to ignore her.




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Edited by Kuttisri - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Nice update..

Continue soon..

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Posted: 5 years ago

toh maan is feeling something fr geet n loosing himself..........maan babu sambhal ker..................



lovely update.................



loved it very much................

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Posted: 5 years ago

thanks for the pm!

Part 5

intense update! well written!

of cos Maan is angry but at least Geet went to apologise.

hate that Maan was hurting her! sad that he accuses her.

he needs to control his anger!

oh no Geet got hurt! she is upset with Maan which is reasonable.

as expected Maan was shocked and worried!

liked that he tended to the injury!

Geet awed seeing his care! Maan is indeed an enigma for Geet.

Maan's thoughts well portrayed!

sad that he has decided to ignore Geet.

will he be able to?

update soon

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Posted: 5 years ago

Nice update.

Maan was so jealous.

He want to stay away from her.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Hai kutti Sri I like very much.Really cute like Geet,Ma'am.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Thanks for PM.

Lovely update. Maan hurt Geet unintentionally. His behaviour is so confusing. He is attracted towards Geet, jealous, worried, angry and what not all at one time. Plus his ego didn’t let him say sorry.

Waiting for their next encounter. Update soon.

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Posted: 5 years ago

very nice update .waiting for next

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