yeh pyaar hai (fanfic)question on pg9

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi guys this is the first time i am writing a fanfic plzz do comment if i should countinue.

i am gonna countinue with the story whats happening now days with all the fights and etc.

Part1

Morning

Like always Ridz goes for her jog when she was passing the BB court she saw Armaan playing basket ball. Ridz saw him and remembered all the time they spent together all the loving moments they had. She came out of her dream when the ball hit her.

Armaan turned around and saw her first he was happy to see her but then remembered what she said to him and got mad.He went up and took the ball from her feet and turned to walk away but Ridz called him.

Ridz: Armaan stop i want to talk to you.

Armaan: I dont. tumhe jo kehena tha vo tum kehe chukee ho.(and walked away)

Ridz:(looked sad and walked home with a broken heart)

Gupta house

Ridz came ran to her bed and cried she couldnt take it anymore she knew it was her fault Armaan is acting so cold with her and she wanted to say soory to him but he doesnt even want to look at her.After she was done crying her heart out she went and got ready for sanjeevani.

Sanjeevani locker room

Ridz enterd and saw Armaan was the only peron there. She went to her locker but kept looking at him. Armaan saw her enter but ignored her and kept doing his work.Ridz was going to go talk to him when Muskaan enterd so she though she will talk later and continued doing her work.

Muskaan enterd and saw Armaan there and went toward him to say hi.

Muskaan: Hi Armaan❤️

Armaan: Hi

Muskaan: (looking at him and dreaming 😍)

Armaan: (snaps his finger in front of her) Hey are you ok

Muskaan:😳 yeah

Armaan turns to leave not before giving a glance in ridz direction.

Hey guys do tell if i should continue or not.

Plzz leave a comment if you want me to countinue.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey please continue! I really like the intro! Can't wait to read more! 😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hye plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn like today plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue today
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey its really good
do continue
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey wow yaar it ws vryy nce yaar
plz cont soon now armaan ignorng her nd
ridz tryng 2 say srry bt armaan to armaan hi hai
bt wo bhi kya kare dono ek hi kashti ke alag kinare pe khare hai jaye to kaha jaye wow yaar too oo
cont soon
luv yachna
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey i guys i will try to continue ASAP. Thanx for the comments.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part2

Whole day Armaan ignored Ridz even when she ask for his help in a case or anything.Ridz was getting mad because now she thought Armaan is acting like a kid.

Ridz:(to herself)what does he think of himself. If he can ignore me so can i.(walks to the locker room in anger)

Locker room (after work)
Every body is present in the locker room (but not atul because he is gone)

Angie- guys arent u excited kal Holi hai.

Muskaan-i know kitna mazza ayega na Armaan.

Armaan:(looking confused) ya

Rahul:hai Ridz tum bhi aa rahi ho na.

Armaan:(looking at rahul in anger)

Before Ridz could answer Rahul Angie answerd him.

Angie- Ofcourse she is coming. Why wont she come.

Rahul:Bas ase hi poocha.

Muskaan: Tu poochna bund kar samghe.

Rahul: hey mane terse to nahi poocha na.Toh chup kar jub dakho apna bada sa mouth khol ti hai.

Muskaan:Kya bola kan khajurai.

Rahul and Muskaan started to fight.

Angie: you guys remind me of Armaan and Ridz they were just like you but now they are friends.

Armaan And Ridz looked at each other and recalled all the moments together.

Suddenly they were broken from there daydream by the loud speaker.

Loud Speaker: Dr. Muskaan chadha Please come to the front desk there is a call for you.

Muskaan: Mera phone. Ok guys i talk to you later bye.

Everyone says bye to her.

Front desk

Muskaan: Hello Kaun hai.

Voice: Beta apni ma ko bhil gaye.

Muskaan: Ma app. Kase caal kiya.

Muskaan mom:(says something we cant hear)

Muskaan:(shoked)

Ok guys this was the second part do comment on it thanx
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ah that was really great... do continue soon.... 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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heyyyy WOW!!!!YAR!!
its really gud!!!!
plz cont asap
n cud u plz pm me wen u do .......thx
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashprincess

heyyyy WOW!!!!YAR!!
its really gud!!!!
plz cont asap
n cud u plz pm me wen u do .......thx

sure will and thanx for the comment.

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