MG - Teri Meri Chahatein : updated Part 30 @ Pg 139 || 22 October - Page 5

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part 2





khurana mansion


It was evening time in the khurana mansion nd all the members of the family daadi,rajiv singh khura his wife naina were seated in the hall and were discussing about the hustle bustle going on their neighbours house

"jii whats with this sound beside our house ! " asked naina looking at her husband who was watching the news on tv . he had just arrived from office. usually he arrives at 6 because he loves to spend his time with family. so he will wrap up the any important work before 6 and heads to KM.

"the new neighbours ! i had seen the renovation work going. nd needless to say its a beautiful mansion nd also i heard they were handas "

" so you know handas " asked daadi who was enjoying her tea with her bahu.

"No maa but i heard about the handas who lived in hosiyapur ! they were quite famous over there nd had a construction company named handa constructions ! but i dont know they are these same handas " said rajiv tilting his head to see that his younger son has arrived so early from college that was not so him he thought because he has so many important works like partying,chilling ,dating nd what not!!!!.

"HEYYY DAADI " squealed Vicky singh khurana entering in with his oh so cool ,charming smile and hugged his daadi who was still enjoying her tea but has spilled it over once hearing his squeal.

"Badmash dekh kar nahi chal sakta ! dekh kya kiya saara chai gira diya " said naina holding his ear in a twisted way.

"Areyyyy maa AHHH chodo !its paining" said vicky. naina released his ear quickly hearing his scream nd vicky rubbed his ear to sooth the pain.

" vicky my son you are so early today whats up !! !"asked rajiv in a fake surprising manner.

"ahhh dad you are here too ! how come you are so early from office " asked vicky surprisingly.

"mai office roz jaldi hi aata hoon mr vicky singh khurana par aapko parties se fursat mile tab aap dyaan denge na !!!! said rajiv in a sarcastic manner. vicky looked embarassed nd quickly said to cover up his embarassement " dad....vo ...ummm..... do you remember my school friend vo they had a grih pravesh today nd she invited me to come...".he was about to continue but was interrupted by a voice " so my younger brother is so interested in attending a party that he forgot to tell his brothers about his absence in the college " said dev entering in the mansion along with maan.

" what the hell vicky where were you and why were you not lifting your phone we all were worried about you nd here you are !!" yelled maan making vicky gulp in fear. looking at his elder brothers glaring form he added " vo .... bro.... when...did ....you....come!...i mean vo mai apko batane vala tha but you were not available in the college and aadi said you were busy in dancing hall" all the three khurana brothers are studying in same university. and maan hearing about the dance hall he was lost in some hazel coloured eyes petite form who was looking at him with fear nd nervousness filled eyes nd was lost in his and her moments in clg..... but was brought back by his daadi and mom asking him how his day was !

"it was fine daadi! "said maan hiding his lost look."and how are you doing! did you take your medicine" to this daadi nodded and asked all of them to freshen up nd come for dinner. and all of them headed towards their rooms.



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HANDA MANSION


Handa mansion was decorated with orchids and bright yellow coloured lights it was looking no less than a palace. it was 6pm in evening . mohinder handa was moving from here and there to look at all the arrangements because it was their griha pravesh today.

handas were arrived in delhi few weeks ago, before they used to stay in hosiyarpur ,they had their construction company shifted from hoshiyarpur to delhi. and it become quite a popular construction firm . so mr handa decided to put up both the success party and the griha pravesh of his mansion same day.

"jiii suniye " said rano handa looking at his husband who was looking after all the arrangements. " Haan bolo" said mohinder handa looking after food arrangements

"areyy suniye tho vo sab chodiye !!! comes here once, i have something to say did you invited all our neighboours !said rano handa to which he replied "i forgot to invite them but yeah now we will go" said mohinder handa in a cool manner. rano got tensed hearing her husband nd said him that we will invite all of them now!!!! or else they may not come because of late invitation . saying this they left to invite their neighbours handling all the look after arrangements to his son rahul handa.



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kurana mansion



TRING ! TRING ! the ringing of the door bell disturbed naina singh khurana who was cutting the vegetables for dinner nd said his home servant nakul to open the door and she will come in a minute to see who has arrived.


all of the khurana members looked towards the door to see the middle aged man and woman arriving KM. "jii namaste hum mohinder handa aur yei meri patni rano handa " mr handa introduced himself to rajiv singh khurana. he was elated to see the owner of khurana constructions. " jii namaste aap handa contructions mai... "

"jii haa hum vahi handa hai.... its great to meet you as a person mr khurana...... i didnt quite get the chance to meet you professionally but yeah we are neighbours now! im here to invite you all to our griha pravesh nd also the succes party of our company " saying this mr handa smiled and shaked his hands with mr khurana who in turn returned his gesture.


They all were now seated in the living room expressing their gratitude to see each other. naina nd rano got well along with each other after a few momemts . they are now discussiong about their sons nd daughters

"vo our geet is also same university" rano said surprised to hear that khurana sons are also from delhi university.

" ohh its great ... im quite intested to see your daughter now "said naina who was equally surprised . " we have a daughter as well ......annie but she is continuing her studies in london now "

"acha !! now im quite elated to see yous sons....... please bring them to the party too " after exchanging some conversation with naina Rano got up from the sofa and said "ab hum chalte hai ... " and gestured her husband that we take a leave now. both hugged nd shaked their hands with mrs and mr khurana respectively before leaving KM.

Mr and Mrs khurana were quite surprised to see their customes nd their respect towards them. the hanads already made their place in khuranas hearts in their first meeting itself !!!!!



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maan singh khurana was never a party person !!!!! that too a family and pooja function a big NOOO !!!!! but his mother was hell bent on making him go to a party or say a pooja function........ he knew his mother a little too well ! if it was a professional party function then she may have not pestured him this much to go, but if it was the pooja or a family function then she is not going to leave him till he had accepted to attend the party. so now here she is pesturing nd pleasing maan to come to the party.....

"please maan i promised the handas that all my sons will attend the party"

"so take vicky and dev to the function"

"but"

"maa aap kuch bhi kahiye !! im not going to come to a family function and thats final " maan said in a final voice leaving no room for discussion ....

"tho hum bhi apne BP ki davai nahi lenge " said daadi entering maan's room

"WHATT but why" said maan with a shock expression

"hum tabi davai lenge jab aap kahenge ki aap party mai ayenge"

"par daadi its a pooja function.....

"of course not its a success party of their company along with griha pravesh of their new mansion..... so are you going to come or.... " said daadi smirking to which he groaned nd said

"AHHH FINE !!!but only for 1 hour " glaring at his daadi he went to washroom to get ready for the party oblivious to the sweet surprise he was going to get in the party!!!


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HANDA MANSION


Geet was getting ready in a peach coloured ghagra choli with a red coloured embroidery work on it. she was feeling nervous as it is her first time to be there in such a huge party of his father because she did her high school studies in London and was not used to such parties but now thinking of it she is a bit scared that she may ruin the party with her clumsiness and that's the reason she called her best friend VICKY to attend the party nd to be there with her to boost her energy but that Monkey is not here yet! HUHHH Vicky I'm not going to leave you! Thinking about this she headed downstairs to help her mother in getting required things for pooja....oblivious to who had just entered the mansion ¡!!!!!!!




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Edited by Kuttisri - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Here is the part 2 so give your thoughts on it!!

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Posted: 5 years ago
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thanks so much for updating!!

Part 2

Incredible update! amazingly written.

wow the Handas are the Khuranas' neighbours.

of cos Rajiv is surprised that Vicky is home early.

wonderful that Geet and Vicky are friends.

of cos Maan is thinking about Geet.

glad that the Handas came to introduce themselves to the Khuranas.

nice that they invited them to the grihpravesh and party.

hmm Naina is interested in Geet....

great that Naina convinced Maan to attend the party. I am asure that Maan will be pleasantly surprised when he sees Geet there.

liked Geet cursing Vicky!

looking forward to Maan's reaction seeing Geet

update soon

Edited by khwaishfan - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Sruthi... wishing you and your family a lovely New Year! 😊

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Congratulations on your 1st Maaneet story

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Posted: 5 years ago
#47

Prologue


Such an Interesting and Fabulous start


So Maan and Geet are in college

and wow that is just great

Maan seems to like Geet a lot as she is always on his mind

and now he has a chance to chance with her too

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Fascinating Character Sketch



Geet's brother Rohan and Maan are friends


Sameera is Maan's ex girlfriend


Maan's brother Vicky is Geet's friend

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Part 1


Maan has Geet in his thoughts all the time

yet when he told her he will be her dance partner

he did seem serious

but perhaps because Geet told Sameera she is not interested

in Sameera's boyfriend

this probably made Maan to also reject the fact of dancing with Geet


Maan was lost in Geet's talks which shows he does admire her

he notice her expressions and also makes it known to her that

Sameera is not his girlfriend

but yes Maan has this arrogance and he gets angry when Geet

denies or shows no interest in him

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Posted: 5 years ago
#50

Part 2


The Handa family now has moved and are neighbors

to the Khurana family

Mohinder and Rano meet the Khurana elders and invite them

to their party

Maan had no option but to attend the party

and I guess both Maan and Geet will be sweetly surprised

to see each other at the same party

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