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Posted: 6 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Aurtika

I just noticed the FF yesterday and finished all the parts in one go. It's so well written.👏

Though I am against the Sneha track but if the CVs can follow your lead then I am game for it..😆

I am really curious to know how Anurag will overcome the ever present hurdle of their life called Mohini Basu.

I have some reservations about Bajaj and Komolika returning in their life..Hoping you will make their presence bearble unlike the Cvs. 👍🏼


My apologies for not seeing this sooner. I don't mind the Sneha track if it is handled well - and thank you for the heads up on the typo/spelling.


Mohini will always be an issue as she is the main antagonist in the story and without her they will have no one to truly 'battle,' even I hang onto her in the fic because she is a more rounded villain.


I can see Bajaj return, because even as a writer I can see the value of his presence (not just for ratings) but as the story as a whole. Especially since his presence will jerk Anurag out of the rut the creatives have created.


Thank you for taking the time to read.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: grace4317

Bold - Why? Are the latest episodes the reason that she thinks so?


This fic was originally started on the idea of the pain Anurag's memories would cause him, should they come back out of sequence and without proper understanding. That over and above the fact that I did (and still don't like) the way the story is going.

While I have a generally calm muse when I allow her to do things her way, upsetting the apple cart is akin to declaring war. The injustice to Prerna the creatives metered out with the start of the whole SR track just was totally unfitting.

So, yes, instead of playing nicely, my muse now wants to torture and burn Anurag in retaliation.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Fabulous Update ......


Writers should take a lead out of this and see how Dirama can be created by highlighting Mohini’s faults and making Anurag take action....


That strike of Moloy saying your son is doing same what I did years back was interesting ....👍🏼



Loving this one , please keep going !!!!


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: K-Shandra


This fic was originally started on the idea of the pain Anurag's memories would cause him, should they come back out of sequence and without proper understanding. That over and above the fact that I did (and still don't like) the way the story is going.

While I have a generally calm muse when I allow her to do things her way, upsetting the apple cart is akin to declaring war. The injustice to Prerna the creatives metered out with the start of the whole SR track just was totally unfitting.

So, yes, instead of playing nicely, my muse now wants to torture and burn Anurag in retaliation.

Bold - Whatif it was an attempt by the CVs to let Prerna realise the pain Anu had to go through in the last track, when a distressed Anu had to witness the HM suite being readied in Swiss & Pre caring for Mr.B's wounds after coming back from the court. Because, in the first Komolika track, though Pre had to witness Anu's room readied for SR, that time she was filled with revenge and so, she couldn't understand the amount of pain Anu was going through at that time. But this time she might have experienced the pain & disgust Anu would have felt in the last track.


Coming to your latest update, i should say this was such a perfect one especially the angle you brought in Moloy showing Mohini the mirror on what she had done years back. And i am sure that there will be more showdowns coming up between Anu & his Mom.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Great update. Two things that stood out to me, they still have lots unresolved issues between them which they acknowledge but are willing to work through them together. Second, Moloy reminding Mohini about history repeating itself. What you sow is what you reap

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: K-Shandra


My apologies for not seeing this sooner. I don't mind the Sneha track if it is handled well - and thank you for the heads up on the typo/spelling.


Mohini will always be an issue as she is the main antagonist in the story and without her they will have no one to truly 'battle,' even I hang onto her in the fic because she is a more rounded villain.


I can see Bajaj return, because even as a writer I can see the value of his presence (not just for ratings) but as the story as a whole. Especially since his presence will jerk Anurag out of the rut the creatives have created.


Thank you for taking the time to read.

Thanks. It's my pleasure reading your FF.😊

I also love to hate Mohini. That's why It's feels really great to see her tasting her own medicine.. 😁

Now that they are including another third wheel instead of Bajaj, Do you still think he is needed to trigger Anurag's memory?

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Anurag placed everything in his vehicle. On settling behind the steering wheel, he pulled out his phone and hit Prerna’s speed dial without needing to think about it. The argument with his mother had upset him but just the thought of speaking with Prerna lifted his mood. Her phone rang a few times before it was cut. He pulled back his phone to check the screen and then again hit her speed dial. He lifted the phone and waited. Again it was cut. Frowning, he again looked at the screen and wondered as to why she would be cutting his calls. He noticed the time and wondered whether she was not busy feeding Sneha, and realized that he had no idea what their routine was.

A few moments later his phone chimed. He checked the message form her, ‘With mom, can’t answer.’ He quickly typed his response, ‘We need to talk, things happened at home.’

He waited a few moments for her response, but when it did not come immediately he started the car, knowing she would reply once she had the chance.

Anurag entered the noisy renovation site Sharma Nikwas had become. Everywhere he looked someone was busy doing something, it was enough to send anyone’s head spinning. For a moment he thought that it might have been best to call ahead, however the foreman was quick to greet him admits the organised chaos.

“How are things here?” Anurag asked, gesturing to the area in general.

“It is going well. The bathrooms are almost fully installed and the roof will be completed by the end of the week, so the décor team can move in some time next week. It was not quick enough for Anurag’s liking, but he knew better that to try and rush things. “Just make sure everything is done properly and let me know if you need anything.”

“Yes, Sir.”

After a short tour of the house Anurag left but came to a standstill next to his vehicle. He checked his messages, thankful to find that whilst his eardrums had been assaulted with the thumping and hammering inside the house, Prerna had replied. ‘We can talk later, let me know when you will be available.’

“For you, I’m always available,” Anurag said more to himself, but then frowned on noticing a vehicle. It had been parked in the same position on his arrival, more than an hour previous. But it was not the presence of the vehicle that concerned Anurag as much as the fact that its positioning provided it’s lone occupant an unobstructed view of the Sharma residence. He knew that if someone was keeping an eye on Prerna’s house, then whoever was responsible for arranging it would be looking for Prerna and her family. But with Komolika’s release, it would not surprise him if she again attempted to target Prerna. And even with only his father and him aware of their current address, he knew it would not take a determined person very long to discover where they were…

An unwelcome and uncomfortable sensation crawled along his spine. Immediately his heart raced at just the thought of someone attempting to hurt Prerna and Shena. Pocketing his phone he turned towards the vehicle and started to make his way over to it. He was about halfway there, when it started and pulled out of its parking spot. Anurag made a note of the vehicle’s registration number, and then returned to his vehicle. However, the sensation of unease only grew more intense with the passage of time. He could not take that risk. He had to move Prerna and Shena somewhere safe.

He fished out his phone and was about to hit Prerna’s speed dial only to remember that she was not his secretary anymore, at least not until they had settled matters between them and she returned to work. He called Anupam instead.

“Yes, tell me,” Anupam answered, but from the background he could hear Nivadita issue orders to the house servants.

“What was the name of that friend of yours that has that showroom?”

“Kasim?”

“He’s the one who knows about all the apartment complexes?”

“Oh, you mean Sachiin?”

“Sachiin, yes, him.”

“You looking for somewhere? He might know of a penthouse.”

“A penthouse, no, that would be too obvious. The first place they would check in any building is the penthouse.”

“Why? What are you up to?”

“I need to move Prerna and Sneha somewhere safe,preferably with access control, twenty-four hour security and a surveillance system.”

“Don’t you think that’s a bit much?”

“Someone was parked outside their home today, and with Komolika…”

“Say no more,” Anupam quickly replied adding, “I’ll get hold of him and find out if he knows of anything”

While you’re there, speak to Debu as well and find out if he knows of anyone, I’ll need to find some help for Prerna around the house.”

“Will do,” Anupam replied then added, “Oh yes, how big do you want the apartment to be?”

I don’t know, two, maybe three bedrooms, it’s temporary and depends on what is available. I need to move them as quickly as possible.”

“I’ll tell him it’s a rush.”

“Thanks Anupam. Oh but tell him I want to have a look at it first though.”

“Will do.”

With that Anurag ended the call and made another to the security company they used.

The sun was lowering on the horizon when Anurag finally stopped his vehicle in front of the Sharma’s temporary residence. He looked at the doorway, remembering only too well his reception the day before,and knew there was still a long way to go before they would once again welcome him with the warmth they used to bestow on him. He not only felt bad about that fact but also missed it. It had been a time when his friendship with Prerna was less complicated, their relationship promising and their worlds had not come collapsing down around them.

He pulled out his phone, knowing only too well that without her assistance he would not even make it past the threshold. He quickly composed a message, well aware that what he was doing would place her in a difficult spot, but he would have to manipulate things in his favour. He waited several long moments after firing off the message before his phone chimed. He checked the message and then got out of the vehicle.

Again looking at the house, brew in a deep breath,to steady his nerves, for there was nothing he could do for his racing heart.

He did a quick scan of the area, having been weary ever since visiting their home that morning, but nothing appeared to be ominous. Feeling a little more relaxed, he made his way to the door and knocked.

Mrs Sharma opened the door and from the look on her face, he braced himself for a hostile reception. He was not wrong as she outright demanded, “What are you doing here? Did we not make it clear enough that you were not to return!”

Anurag placed his hands together in greeting,something Veena automatically reciprocated, allowing him to calmly reply, “Mrs.Sharma, mother-in-law…”

Her composure however only lasted for a moment before she angrily lashed out, “Don’t you dare call me that! Because not once have you acted like a son-in-law towards my daughter. And if you had, we would not be needing to sort out this mess.”

Lifting his hands slightly, in hope that he could appeal to her, Anurag replied, “Please, just hear me out. I am here to discuss important matters with you and your family.”

Veena squared her shoulders, looked Anurag right in the eye and demanded, “Important to whom? You? Your family? Then I definitely don’t want to hear it.”

Prerna moved into view, her presence immediately easing the sense of apprehension that filled him. She touched her mother’s shoulder and calmly said, “Mom, please, just hear him out. He would not have come here if it was not important.”

Veena turned to face Prerna, visibly angry as she requested, “You knew about this? You knew he would come here.”

“Mom, please, just hear him out.”

“And how will this be different to all the other times. He has made so many promises but fails to keep any of them.” Veena then turned her attention back to Anurag as she stated, “Neither do I have any desire to listen to any half-hearted apology on behalf of his family, or how he didn’t know and how he’s sorry for the insults his family has inflicted on ours. Please. Spare me.”

“Mom, please,” Prerna pled, holding her hands together when her mother turned to look at her, “He is here for a reason, please hear him out.”

Veena turned to face Anurag again, then fixed him with a stern glare as she said, “Fine. But this is only because Prerna asked me to listen.” She pointed her finger at him in warning as she continued, “But that does not mean that I am going to change my mind about what happened yesterday.”

“Please, Madam, all I ask is for you to listen. You can then decide if my interests are genuine.”

Maintaining her stance in the doorway, not allowing him to enter the house, Veena demanded,“So tell me.”

“Please, Mrs. Sharma, this is not a matter that should be discussed in the door.” Anurag implored.

Veena gestured for him to enter the house and closed the door behind him

Anurag placed his hands together and greeted both Suman and Shivani before looking towards Prerna, wishing he could spend a few moments with her, before once again upsetting her life anew. He moved his head slightly in their familiar enquiring gesture, and was rewarded when Prerna replied, “She’s asleep.”

Anurag instantly became aware of Veena’s scrutiny of their interaction and turned towards the woman. No hospitalities were extended, not that he had expected any. He fully understood the stance they had taken, and knew what he intended to ask would be far more than he actually had a right to, given their past. He hesitantly stared, “I was hoping that Shukar would also be able to join us.” Shivani looked at Anurag in surprise. However Anurag continued, “I had initially hoped to discuss the arrangements around Sneha’s naming ceremony,” he held up his hand to calm Veena and then continued, “But after this morning’s events, There are more pressing matters.”

“What happened?” Prerna demanded.

“When I checked up on the renovations to your house,“ Anurag started, “I noticed someone watching. When I approached him, he simply drove off, but with Komolika’s release and considering her past actions, we cannot be too careful. So for now I think it is best if we acknowledge the fact that both Prerna and Sneha are in danger.”

“What?” Shivani and Veena simultaneously demanded.

“The most reasonable assumption we can make is that she is trying to establish where Prerna is at the moment, so they will be watching all the places you usually frequent. At the moment it is for the best that you have taken up residence here. The renovations should be done within the next month, but I want to move Prerna and Sneha elsewhere before that.”

“No!” Veena outright opposed, “Prerna will not return to that house, I will not allow it, and that is final!”

“I was not intending to take her back there. Especially since it would be the first place other than your home Komolika would look for her.”

“Where then?” Veena demanded.

“This has not been established yet but I’m looking at several apartments in newly built complexes, that offer access control and twenty-four hour security.”

“Prerna cannot live alone, that is unheard of.”Veena said.

“I am also arranging for a servant to help her with Sneha and the house. I know it is not ideal but doing things this way will make it more difficult for Komolika to find them.”

Veena shook her head but said nothing else, while Shivani looked at Prerna and said, “I’ll stay with sister.”

“No!” Anurag was quick to counter, “You can’t do that. Both Ronit and Komolika are aware of the close relationship you share. Youwill lead them straight to Prerna. No. It is better if you don’t know where she lives.”

“Are you crazy! You want to separate sister Prerna from us?” demanded Shivani.

“I have not finalized everything yet and at the moment only Anupam knows of the plans. But until we have found a suitable apartment and arranged everything, I have arranged for someone to observe this place. He will also accompany Prerna whenever she leaves here.”

“What?” Prerna demanded.

“Not with you,” Anurag quickly countered, “He will maintain a distance, his tasks are to follow you and ensure your safe as well as capture any footage that could help with convicting Komolika, even if we can just get her committed to a mental asylum. Her father has helped wipe her slate clean and provided her with a clean identity so we have to be very careful as to how we go about things.” Anurag looked at everyone present and then continued, “The man outside will report to me if there is any strange activity,or if any of you were followed, but please,” Anurag held his hands together, “I beg of you not to leave unless it is absolutely necessary. I should have everything arranged in the next few days.”

“I still don’t like the fact that Prerna will be on her own.”

“I can well understand your concern,” Anurag started, “But I have spoken with Anupam and sister Nividita, they will assist wherever they can to throw off anyone showing any interest in the place. They will, if needed, approach the developers or owners with an offer to purchase one of the units.”

“You seem to have thought of everything.” Veena concluded before turning to look at Prerna, “Everything except what Prerna would think of such arrangements.”

Anurag looked at Prerna, instantly recognizing her resistance.He had asked her to be willing to go with him, he just hoped she still trusted him enough to follow through on the request. “My intentions are to safeguard Prerna and Sneha, and I’m asking only to be permitted to do that. I want no trouble with your family.” Anurag again turned to Veena and said, “I promise that I will select the most suitable place for them and that they will be looked after.”

Veena looked at Prerna and said, “Preu, you would have a better idea as to what this entails, and because it will be your life from now on you will have to decide for yourself. Technically he is your husband and has the right, but here, under this roof, you have a say in the matter.”

Prerna looked over everyone in the room before finally stating, “I have to think of your safety as well. We all know the lengths Komolika can go to when she’s angered, and none you do not need to be placed in danger, just because of us.”

Anurag for a moment breathed easier.

“We are your family, it is our duty,” Shivani insisted.

“Just as it is my duty to look out for you.” Prerna countered.

Veena looked at Anurag and said, “I can understand your reasoning in this, but know I’m very reluctant to allow my Preu to leave the house in this manner.”

“If there was another way, I would have taken it.”Anurag assured.

“That I also understand,” Veena said and turned to look at Prerna before continuing, “But you will have to make arrangements with Prerna and let her know what she will need to take with her.”

Anurag looked at Prerna as Veena started to usher the others from there. But before he could move closer to her she held up her hand to stop him, she gestured with her head that she was not in the mood to discuss matters before flipping her hand in gesture.

He knew better than to push Prerna when she was in such a mood.

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Originally posted by: grace4317

Bold - Whatif it was an attempt by the CVs to let Prerna realise the pain Anu had to go through in the last track, when a distressed Anu had to witness the HM suite being readied in Swiss & Pre caring for Mr.B's wounds after coming back from the court. Because, in the first Komolika track, though Pre had to witness Anu's room readied for SR, that time she was filled with revenge and so, she couldn't understand the amount of pain Anu was going through at that time. But this time she might have experienced the pain & disgust Anu would have felt in the last track.


Coming to your latest update, i should say this was such a perfect one especially the angle you brought in Moloy showing Mohini the mirror on what she had done years back. And i am sure that there will be more showdowns coming up between Anu & his Mom.


Right, long answer it is…

If I look at both of the characters at the point where Anurag went missing, then there is a lot of scope for debate.

Remember that with Anurag’s initial marriage to Komolika he did not disclose his reasons for marrying her (Komolika) and he outright rejected Prerna in an attempt to push her away. Anyone will tell you one can stomach a lot in life, but rejection by a loved one causes indescribable pain. And,yes, Prerna was vengeful because of the broken promises, because she knew of

the baby and because she thought she knew him better. But at no stage did Anurag deny that he had married Prerna – and that point is important.

During this “marriage” track, Prerna was accepting of it at first – for Anurag’s welfare and because he does not remember (one can easily forgive a loved one’s ignorance). She only turned rancorous when Sonalika turned out to be Komolika. And she has reason enough to hate Komolika without Anurag – because Komolika was the mastermind behind Rajesh’s murder/death. (We’ll overlook the whole drugging, attempted murder and desperation tactics for now)

There is no place for pain in this now as Prerna is instinctively trying to protect Anurag, because this time he does not know it’s Komolika. He also does not remember what he has/d with Prerna. Prerna’s mindset here is also very different than the first Komolika marriage track.

Initially, on Anurag’s return, Prerna would have been hurt by events because Mohini was in cahoots with everything, but the fact that it is Komolika makes all the difference here for Prerna now. She knows that Anurag does not love Komolika, and watching or knowing that someone you love is about to be drugged and raped – well that will do a number on anyone psychologically.

That was why that track was beyond inexcusable to me. While I understand the whole Komolika torturing and taunting Prerna angle the creatives are using – the whole rape double standards does not gel with me. Don’t impose limitations on other’s creative work but put it on national TV for all to see(Not that I’m inclined to use rape as a subplot for anything creative. It is,and remains, a destructive and inexcusable action.)

Right back to the storyline…

Remember Komolika’s motivation for some time now has been to break Anurag’s obsession with Prerna and make him hers (Komolika’s). She is still in pursuit of this challenge, which has distorted her view; in that she now believes herself to be in love with him. Here is where I felt Hina Khan was better at being Komolika - because throughout she maintained that incredulous and spoilt brat image which is missing now. Only the manipulation and evil remained.

Coming to Bajaj, there never were any such underhanded intentions. Yes he did in the end fall in love with Prerna, and yes he even tried to kill Anurag, but it was done out in the open. He was the one driving the car/holding the knife – it was a crime of passion. If you have ever read up or understand the psychological aspects behind crimes and murder, you will understand that statement better.

Bajaj was possibly one of the best-rounded characters to date, love or hate him. His motives and actions were easily understood, as you saw both sides of him. He also showed considerable growth as a character. Komolika has only show regression and paranoia.

Coming back to the pain Anurag had felt during the Baja track. It is similar to what Prerna experienced initially with the Komolika track.

Both love deeply, both were hurt deeply, so in that they are equal.

Granted Anurag could never understand the pain Prerna experienced with Bajaj (knowing Anurag loves her, wants her, that she is pregnant but cannot go to him even thought she wanted to.) It in no way lessens the pain Anurag experienced while with Komolika, (feeling the same way Prerna felt while knowing that Prerna could become, and became, Komolika’s target). Anurag was however more expressive of his pain since he did not understand Prerna’s reasons and was appealing to Prena, his love and friend, to return to him. Anurag did not have society and his family to face up to, in fact everyone supported him – this Prerna did not (and does not) have.

This is why viewers are more likely to empathise with Anurag,since he appears to be the victim – forgetting he inflicted as much pain on Prerna. His method of vengeance also differed to hers.

With both instances, both Anurag and Prena forgave each other when the reasons for their actions were revealed. Given they had not fully resolved the repercussions between the Komolika and Bajaj tracks,especially the emotional damage suffered by both Prerna and Anurag. Before the Bajaj track was started, Anurag only voiced his fear of losing her, while Prena only voiced that she was reluctant to simply embrace their happiness - because it had been snatched from her before. They needed more time to resolve the exposed issues and insecurities – but never gotit.

Between the Bajaj and Komolika 2.0 track they had not even absorbed the fact that they were to be together again, before it was again ripped from them.

It is that pause, that breather, my muse felt they needed –just to get back onto the same footing. Because every new incident the creatives are throwing at them is driving them farther apart – physically and emotionally. And pretty soon even the viewers will, on a subconscious level,realize that there is no believable way the creatives could bring them closer again. That is when the audience will again disengage from the story as they did with the first one and the ratings will spiral.

As viewers and fans we expect more from characters than we did in the 90’s, we are also less patient.

Getting back to the fic: the Mohini-Moloy aspect. As I said before, my muse makes unobvious connections and brings them to light. This will also go some way in explaining the absolute absence of Anurag’s dada and dadi. And if I look at Moloy’s character, at this point, it is just another reason for his relationship with his wife to sour.

As for the Mohin-Anurag arguments, the outline has 3 such arguments spaced throughout.

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Originally posted by: K-Shandra


Right, long answer it is…

If I look at both of the characters at the point where Anurag went missing, then there is a lot of scope for debate.

Remember that with Anurag’s initial marriage to Komolika he did not disclose his reasons for marrying her (Komolika) and he outright rejected Prerna in an attempt to push her away. Anyone will tell you one can stomach a lot in life, but rejection by a loved one causes indescribable pain. And,yes, Prerna was vengeful because of the broken promises, because she knew of

the baby and because she thought she knew him better. But at no stage did Anurag deny that he had married Prerna – and that point is important.

During this “marriage” track, Prerna was accepting of it at first – for Anurag’s welfare and because he does not remember (one can easily forgive a loved one’s ignorance). She only turned rancorous when Sonalika turned out to be Komolika. And she has reason enough to hate Komolika without Anurag – because Komolika was the mastermind behind Rajesh’s murder/death. (We’ll overlook the whole drugging, attempted murder and desperation tactics for now)

There is no place for pain in this now as Prerna is instinctively trying to protect Anurag, because this time he does not know it’s Komolika. He also does not remember what he has/d with Prerna. Prerna’s mindset here is also very different than the first Komolika marriage track.

Initially, on Anurag’s return, Prerna would have been hurt by events because Mohini was in cahoots with everything, but the fact that it is Komolika makes all the difference here for Prerna now. She knows that Anurag does not love Komolika, and watching or knowing that someone you love is about to be drugged and raped – well that will do a number on anyone psychologically.

That was why that track was beyond inexcusable to me. While I understand the whole Komolika torturing and taunting Prerna angle the creatives are using – the whole rape double standards does not gel with me. Don’t impose limitations on other’s creative work but put it on national TV for all to see(Not that I’m inclined to use rape as a subplot for anything creative. It is,and remains, a destructive and inexcusable action.)

Right back to the storyline…

Remember Komolika’s motivation for some time now has been to break Anurag’s obsession with Prerna and make him hers (Komolika’s). She is still in pursuit of this challenge, which has distorted her view; in that she now believes herself to be in love with him. Here is where I felt Hina Khan was better at being Komolika - because throughout she maintained that incredulous and spoilt brat image which is missing now. Only the manipulation and evil remained.

Coming to Bajaj, there never were any such underhanded intentions. Yes he did in the end fall in love with Prerna, and yes he even tried to kill Anurag, but it was done out in the open. He was the one driving the car/holding the knife – it was a crime of passion. If you have ever read up or understand the psychological aspects behind crimes and murder, you will understand that statement better.

Bajaj was possibly one of the best-rounded characters to date, love or hate him. His motives and actions were easily understood, as you saw both sides of him. He also showed considerable growth as a character. Komolika has only show regression and paranoia.

Coming back to the pain Anurag had felt during the Baja track. It is similar to what Prerna experienced initially with the Komolika track.

Both love deeply, both were hurt deeply, so in that they are equal.

Granted Anurag could never understand the pain Prerna experienced with Bajaj (knowing Anurag loves her, wants her, that she is pregnant but cannot go to him even thought she wanted to.) It in no way lessens the pain Anurag experienced while with Komolika, (feeling the same way Prerna felt while knowing that Prerna could become, and became, Komolika’s target). Anurag was however more expressive of his pain since he did not understand Prerna’s reasons and was appealing to Prena, his love and friend, to return to him. Anurag did not have society and his family to face up to, in fact everyone supported him – this Prerna did not (and does not) have.

This is why viewers are more likely to empathise with Anurag,since he appears to be the victim – forgetting he inflicted as much pain on Prerna. His method of vengeance also differed to hers.

With both instances, both Anurag and Prena forgave each other when the reasons for their actions were revealed. Given they had not fully resolved the repercussions between the Komolika and Bajaj tracks,especially the emotional damage suffered by both Prerna and Anurag. Before the Bajaj track was started, Anurag only voiced his fear of losing her, while Prena only voiced that she was reluctant to simply embrace their happiness - because it had been snatched from her before. They needed more time to resolve the exposed issues and insecurities – but never gotit.

Between the Bajaj and Komolika 2.0 track they had not even absorbed the fact that they were to be together again, before it was again ripped from them.

It is that pause, that breather, my muse felt they needed –just to get back onto the same footing. Because every new incident the creatives are throwing at them is driving them farther apart – physically and emotionally. And pretty soon even the viewers will, on a subconscious level,realize that there is no believable way the creatives could bring them closer again. That is when the audience will again disengage from the story as they did with the first one and the ratings will spiral.

As viewers and fans we expect more from characters than we did in the 90’s, we are also less patient.

Getting back to the fic: the Mohini-Moloy aspect. As I said before, my muse makes unobvious connections and brings them to light. This will also go some way in explaining the absolute absence of Anurag’s dada and dadi. And if I look at Moloy’s character, at this point, it is just another reason for his relationship with his wife to sour.

As for the Mohin-Anurag arguments, the outline has 3 such arguments spaced throughout.

Wow.....Thanks Shandra for such a deep & detailed reply and update. And i should say I agree completely with all you have said, especially the bolded lines. And the underlined one has enhanced my hope that, this time with the new entry, CVs will not play it bad and go for character butchering of either Anu or Pre, an easiest way they have resorted to till now, to accomodate their illogical creativity.


Now, waiting eagerly for the next update to see how your muse is going to take the plot further.

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Originally posted by: Cute_Virgo

Great update. Two things that stood out to me, they still have lots unresolved issues between them which they acknowledge but are willing to work through them together. Second, Moloy reminding Mohini about history repeating itself. What you sow is what you reap


Very true, although my motto is: What you do onto others you invite onto yourself.

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