//Chale Jaise Haawaiyen//FF- Pt. 2: pg 3

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sonia

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Posted: 18 years ago

#11

hmmm...i liked it....seems interesting...do continue....n yea write longer pts if possible

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Yamini

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Posted: 18 years ago

#12

Sonds really good and kuuchikooo i mean cute and sooo cweet , but same arrogant Angi, continue sooooonn.. 👏 👏

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prerna

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Posted: 18 years ago

#13

hey ur ff is really nice n ya what abt the other characters when will u introduce them????n ya update the next part asap 👏

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mimi/aditi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#14

'Mysterious figure'

"Oh, if it isn't…" the mysterious figure began. He was tall, a good few inches taller than Ridhima, and his muscles were easily visible through his polo t-shirt.

"Brand. New. Meat." he finished with a flourish, smirking wickedly. Ridhima's eyes widened to the size of…I don't know…the moon, and she didn't know whether she was mad or scared. But she did know one thing, that Anjali…oops, Angie, told her the night before. Never disagree with the 3rd and 4th years. And looking at his size, he was at least a 3rd or 4th year. Looking around, Ridhi saw that a crowd was gathering around them.

"Waise bhi, can't you watch where you're going?" he said. At this point she started panicking. He walked closer to her. Ridhi was glued to her spot. He came so close that she could feel his breathing. He could probably feel hers.

"I…don't…like…clumsy people. Got it, fresh meat?" he whispered into her ear. Ridhi couldn't stand it anymore. She wasn't liking this boy, and she wasn't liking his closeness to her. A few of what seemed to be his buddies were laughing behind him.

"Just shut up! Bewacoof!" she yelled. Everyone around them went quiet.

"Tsk tsk tsk." one of the boys who were laughing said. Suddenly, one of the loudspeakers stationed outside announced 'all new students please head to the auditorium'. She started storming off, but he stuck his foot out in front of her. She was halfway to the ground when two hands caught her by her shoulders…

His hair was greased down and he wore a collared shirt with a vest. The thing that she noticed the most was his spectacles which took up half the size of his face ((Rahul in his college days 😉!)). By this point, she felt as if the crowd around them, especially the bewacoof's buddies, were about to die of laughter. Wouldn't that be great? she thought. Her cheeks were red from embarrassment and anger.

"Look who's trying to get lucky!" Mr. Bewacoof yelled between bursts of laughter. The bespectacled, vested boy just stared down at the ground with his hands stuffed in his pocket. Ridhi, now turning into Ziddi, looked like she was about to explode. She pointed her index finger at him in warning just as some nasty words were about to pour out of her mouth…

'All new students to the auditorium now.' the woman's voice on the loudspeaker announced again. Ridhima walked off in anger, taking each step as if she wanted to cause an earthquake. She tried to take in deep breaths but all she could think of was galiyaan for Mr. Bewacoof next time she met him. She hoped she never did. But she could dream of the scene, couldn't she?

Mr. Bewacoof on his knees begging Ridhima.

"Mujhe maf kardo, Almighty Ridhima!"

"Kabhi nehiiiiiiiii!" Slap.

At this she smiled and shook it off. It was the first day and she did not want to make a bad impression on the staff and her peers, especially not because of some big-headed idiot, no matter how much he angered her with every word he said.

"Hey! Hey, wait!" she heard. She looked behind her to see the same chashmish ladka running after her. He stopped as soon as he reached her, out of breath. He pulled out an inhaler and took a few puffs.

"Sorry. I've got asthma. Anyway, I'm Rahul. You new here?" he said, all in one breath.

That's it for part 2. Next part will be longer!
Thanks for the comments guys! Would love to hear your thoughts on part 2!

@ Prerna di -- characters will be posted as they are introduced to the story 😊

Edited by *Mimi* - 18 years ago

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tia ahuja

@tia_ahuja2007

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Posted: 18 years ago

#15

hey,i guesss im the first to comment...well,my good luck😊

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tht's really cool stuff u hv written....
so light n peppy...like the feel n mood.....just for us....but seriously keep up the mindblowing work n keep on pming me....luv u...for writing such cool stuff 😊

Edited by tia_ahuja2007 - 18 years ago