Pranbir ff: Can't get you out of my mind... Part 1 - Page 4

Originally posted by: Bee222

It is, absolutely! The ladka is a total pagal 😆😆

Yep! He loses all sense when prachi crops up in his mind.

Originally posted by: sammy17

This weekend 😳

Prachi will be injured so ranbir will be there for her 😳

Omg can't wait. Dm me when you update!

Originally posted by: Sociopath

Omg can't wait. Dm me when you update!

Will do for sure.

Love it...this is far far better than show.

After watching yesterday's episode i am glad that they make ranbir to take stand for prachi. Hope so story will move forward now.

Plz update soon❤️

Originally posted by: ....pratu....

Love it...this is far far better than show.

After watching yesterday's episode i am glad that they make ranbir to take stand for prachi. Hope so story will move forward now.

Plz update soon❤️

Thank you so much dear for the great feedback. Updating this weekend.

sorry for late comment

awesome update!

liked aryan teasing ranbir and keep reminding him about how different he is when prachi is around or discussed! he knows him in and out! what he feel for prachi and keep reminding him! he is cute pie cupid! and if shahana will join him then sone pe suhaga! among their own fighting they atleast agree on this one same thing! will love to see arhana playing cupid for pranbir

loved these lines

If Ranbir was a cartoon character, he would probably have smoke coming out of his ears and nose right about now, Aryan thought bemusedly.

about ranbir's mind state description! tusi chha gaye ho! ditoo how he is confused and refusing from his own feelings for prachi! love to read fights between his mind and heart! he is unknowingly thinking of prachi and denying it to aryan at the same time! he can't concentrate on his football practicing! think of angel (can't say prachi devil here😉) and she is here! so is some one is calling her! is it shahana or someone else! if any boy will call her then will be again ranbir will bothers and aryan will get once more chance to tease him! poor boy hopelessly in love with prachi unknown to him!

loved it very much from your writing

waiting for next now

Originally posted by: Bee222

I love this! Both Ranbir and Aryan's characters are so on point here 😂💯 Can't wait for the next part, you're a great writer! 💖

yeh ranbir and aryan bonding is beautiful! and sammy is great writer!

Originally posted by: Bee222

I love Aryan, he's such an adorable sweetheart! ❤️ He's probably my favourite among all the newgen characters 😍 I already love how he calls Prachi his favourite and advocates for her in front of Ranbir, and I really wish to see a nice strong warm bond between them (Prachi and Aryan) once she gets together with Ranbir 😳

i also liked him from first epi! his bonding with ranbir! friendly and sisterly bonding with prachi! cute fights with shahana! i love arahana! and his cool n positive attitude towards his parents! in young i like him most and in old i like vikram

Originally posted by: sammy17

But then wouldn't ranbir again have to be shown forgetting rishi is prachi's "cousin"? 🤣 Ab kitni baar bhoole ga woh. 😆 Imagine though him seeing the two of them together and he goes to them and greets them with the most smug smile and says "Hi Prachi! Hi Prachi's cousin Rishi!" 🤣 You know, just to show his smugness further that he's only her "cousin". 😳

though its cousin but he can't bear him more times with prachi! will love to see him irritated ranbir with this cousin of prachi! please write on this angle too!

Originally posted by: Bee222

Umm I really really hope they never show Prachi and Ranbir in a brother-sister bond lol 🤣

Well, I like how she compliments Aryan (and he smiles sweetly 😳) and keeps telling him not to become like his brother 😆 I think they could form a very lovely brother-sister bond 😳 Hope the CVs show it happen!

I know, I've seen a few snippets of Aryan-Shahana before and I always found them quite cute. I find Rishi-Shahana very dull and boring 🥱

i also like arahana! they are cute and now a days they are giving more offcreen pics n video! so my liking for them is growing! sammy please write on arahana too

there is no match between rishi shahana! girl kicked priyanka too! aryan is right match for her