Pranbir ff: Can't get you out of my mind... Part 1 - Page 5

Originally posted by: Marathi_Mulgi

sorry for late comment

awesome update!

liked aryan teasing ranbir and keep reminding him about how different he is when prachi is around or discussed! he knows him in and out! what he feel for prachi and keep reminding him! he is cute pie cupid! and if shahana will join him then sone pe suhaga! among their own fighting they atleast agree on this one same thing! will love to see arhana playing cupid for pranbir

loved these lines

If Ranbir was a cartoon character, he would probably have smoke coming out of his ears and nose right about now, Aryan thought bemusedly.

about ranbir's mind state description! tusi chha gaye ho! ditoo how he is confused and refusing from his own feelings for prachi! love to read fights between his mind and heart! he is unknowingly thinking of prachi and denying it to aryan at the same time! he can't concentrate on his football practicing! think of angel (can't say prachi devil here😉) and she is here! so is some one is calling her! is it shahana or someone else! if any boy will call her then will be again ranbir will bothers and aryan will get once more chance to tease him! poor boy hopelessly in love with prachi unknown to him!

loved it very much from your writing

waiting for next now

Thanks so much for the review. I felt the war between mind and heart was needed for ranbir before really delving into ranbir's attraction further for prachi, which I established in my first ff, and now my upcoming second part to this ff will further focus on ranbir's attraction for prachi and the affect she has on him.

Ranbir was the one who screamed prachi's name at the end.

Originally posted by: Marathi_Mulgi

though its cousin but he can't bear him more times with prachi! will love to see him irritated ranbir with this cousin of prachi! please write on this angle too!

Oh good idea. I could write about ranbir's jealousy further in the office one I'm planning after I have completed the second part of this ff which I'm posting this weekend.

Originally posted by: Marathi_Mulgi

i also like arahana! they are cute and now a days they are giving more offcreen pics n video! so my liking for them is growing! sammy please write on arahana too

there is no match between rishi shahana! girl kicked priyanka too! aryan is right match for her

I'll remember that request for sure. I currently have two pranbir ff's that I need to do, then after that I will write one for arhana.

Originally posted by: sammy17

Thanks so much for the review. I felt the war between mind and heart was needed for ranbir before really delving into ranbir's attraction further for prachi, which I established in my first ff, and now my upcoming second part to this ff will further focus on ranbir's attraction for prachi and the affect she has on him.

Ranbir was the one who screamed prachi's name at the end.

ohh is it so i thought prachi arrived there and some one from his football team mate called prachi it would have fun to watch jealous ranbir! 😉

Originally posted by: sammy17

Oh good idea. I could write about ranbir's jealousy further in the office one I'm planning after I have completed the second part of this ff which I'm posting this weekend.

wow i was also expecting same it will be in office!

Originally posted by: sammy17

I'll remember that request for sure. I currently have two pranbir ff's that I need to do, then after that I will write one for arhana.

thank you so much in advance for arhana🤗

Originally posted by: Marathi_Mulgi

ohh is it so i thought prachi arrived there and some one from his football team mate called prachi it would have fun to watch jealous ranbir! 😉

Hehehe, you gave me the idea at least of making a a pranbir ff on ranbir's jealousy. I'm going to do that set in college but for next weekend, as this weekend I will do the second part of this ff. Also I'll eventually get to arhana ff too.

Originally posted by: Marathi_Mulgi

thank you so much in advance for arhana🤗

No problems. It will probs be end of this month when I do arhana ff as I have two pranbir ones to do still.

Originally posted by: sammy17

Hehehe, you gave me the idea at least of making a a pranbir ff on ranbir's jealousy. I'm going to do that set in college but for next weekend, as this weekend I will do the second part of this ff. Also I'll eventually get to arhana ff too.

Welcome and Thanks😃

Will be waiting for all

Amazing start....can't wait to know what will happen next...