Mirage AdYa SS Thread 2

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Posted: 5 years ago
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The moderators have not even seen my pm.so I opened a new thread

link to the previous thread-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/vish/5126085/mirage-adya-ss-part-2-pg2

Part1-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/vish/5126085/mirage-adya-ss-part-2-pg2

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MiragePart 2

Thank u very much Salley n cuteariya

Flashback...

Arvind Kothari and his wife Mridula led a happy life with their daughter Sabrina.
But destiny played a cruel game with them.Mridula died due to cancer and inorder to look after Sabrina, Arvind married Anushka.Though Anushka loved Sabrina,Sabrinahated Anushka as she couldn't digest Anushka being in Mridula's place.
Once Sabrina threw the lunch box Anushka arranged for her to go to school.
Sabrina:I don't need the food you cooked.Dadi will cook food for me.


Anushka was very upset about Sabrina's behaviour.
She cupped her face in her hands sadly:Sabrina beta...why do you hate me somuch?I really love you.


Sabrina pushed her rudely.
Sabrina:Don't try to be my mother.You are not my mother.You are a witch whotook ovy mother's position.
Anushka was shattered.

Anushka gave birth to a baby boy; Aditya.Both Arvind and Anushka became busywith Aditya.When Aditya became Devayani's pet also,Sabrinabecame jealous of Aditya.The jealousyturned into hatred. Aditya always went after Sabrina calling her:Di...
But Sabrina always ignored him.
Aditya:Di...can I come with you towatch cartoon?
Sabrina:No.
Aditya:Please di.


Sabrina:I told you no.
Aditya became upset.
Sabrina was watching cartoon alone.Hearing the sunds Aditya got tempted and without her permissionhe got inside the room.Sabrina got so angry and

pushed thelittle Aditya down.He got hurt.
Arvind.Anushka and Devayani became upset seeing Aditya crying out of pain when stitches wereput on his forehead.Sabrina got scared whether she will be exposed by Aditya.But Aditya who loved his sister never did that.
Sabrina went to Aditya.
Aditya:Di...
Sabrina:You thought just because you saved me from a punishment I will loveyou?Never.I will never love you.
Aditya cried.His tears didn't move herat all.

Shashi Gupta,Garima and their daughter Aliya were their neighbours and familyfriends.Aliya had noticed Aditya;the shylonely silent boy.Later they became classmates in high school.
Aditya was always isolated by theteachers and the classmtes as he was weak at studies.
That really made him upset.
Once the teacher asked him to solve a problem in Maths on the board.He didblunders and he got scolded by the teacher.All the classmates laughed athim.But Aliya looked at him with pity.


Aditya went upto Sabrina for help.
Aditya:Di....can you please teach meMaths?I can't understand anything.
Sabrina taunted him instead of helping him:You fool...you have no brain.That'swhy you can't excel in maths.So no use of teaching you.


Aditya:But di....please teach me thebasics.I just want pass mark.
Sabrina:You duffer...can't you understand what I am saying?Just get out.
She pushed him out and slammed the door.

Anushka saw Aditya crying alone.
She sat near him: Aditya....
He hugged her and cried:Maa...why does di hate me so much.I love her verymuch.But why can'tshe see that?
She felt upset for him.
Anu:Di loves you Aditya.But she can'texpress it.Don't worry.One day she will shower all her love on you.


Aditya was teased by all the students.
Aliya felt sad.

She went to Aditya's room in the KothariMansion. Aditya couldn't believe it as they were not friends.
Aditya:Why are you here?
ALIYA:Why?I can't come here?
Aditya:Not that.I mean we are notfriends.
ALIYA:How can we be friends if you close your mouth forever?It's because ofyour shy silent nature that you are not able to have friends.You need to minglewith others.
Aditya:But no one likes me talking tothem.Everyone hates me because I am a poor student.
ALIYA:You are having inferiority complex.That's why you feel so.Anyways examsare coming up.Did you start studying?
Aditya:No.
ALIYA:Why?
Aditya:I can't handle studies.Nothing isentering my head.Because I am brainless.
ALIYA:What rubbish!Who said you are brainless?


Aditya didn't say Sabrina's name.
ALIYA:No one is brainless.Devi maiyya has given brain to everyone.You areintelligent.But you need to work more.You need proper guidance.I will teachyou.
Aditya was surprised:Really?
ALIYA:Yes.But you have to be my friend.
He couldn't believe it:Are you sure that you want me to be your friend?
ALIYA:Ya...why not?
Aditya:First time someone approached mefor friendship.
She smiled extending her hand:Friends?
With a smile he held her hand.

Aliya started teaching Aditya.They hadcombined study.Anushka was happy seeing it.
Anushka told Arvind who was watching it along with her:I am so happy to see Aditya smiling.Aliya is his first friend.
Arvind smiled:This smile will remain forever.Aliya is that nice.
They smiled.
Sabrina got irritated seeing that.

Exams got over.The result day came.
Aditya was nervous.
Aditya:Will I pass?I am scared.If Idon't pass Aliya's hrd workwill be a waste and she will be upset.I can't seeher upset because of me.


Anushka:Don't worry Aditya.This time youwill pass as you have put your heart and soul into it.
Devayani:All the best Aditya.
Sabrina said in his mind:However you try Aditya...a fool like you will never pass.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Sabrina was so rude when her stepmother was sweet to her, she even degraded Aditya when he was small, I wonder what she will do to not let him pass, continue soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
#3

thank u so much dear for updating in fan fictions🤗

oh so sabrina & aditya is step brother sister

that's why sabrina hate aditya & his mom

she was always rude to them when both love her😡

i feel really bad for both aditya & his mom💔

glad aliya met with aditya so she was his only friend🤗

she used to even teach him😃

aditya's mom was so happy to see finally aditya got friend😃

plz continue

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Posted: 5 years ago
#4

Thanks a lot Salley n Cuteariya


Mirage Part 3

Aditya was called to give the report card.
The teacher patted him:Congrats Aditya.There is a vast improvement in you.Youwon 70% marks.
Aditya was surprised.He was very happy.
Aliya was very happy for him:Congrats Aditya.


Aditya:Thank you so much Aliya.It's all because of you.
ALIYA:No,it's because you worked hard.

All the Kotharis were very happy.Sabrina was shocked.
She thought:How did this duffer score 70%?
Arvind hugged Aditya:Congrats beta.I am proud of you.


Arvind,Devayani and Anushka smiled.
Arvind:Let's invite the Guptas for dinner to celebrate.
Anu:Nice idea.

Anuskha was in the kitchen.Aditya hugged from back.
Anu:You are so happy today?Because Aliya is coming here for dinner.Right?

Aditya smiled:Yes Maa.She is the only friend I have.Please maketasty food for her.

Anu:Ok beta...agreed.
They smiled.

The Guptas came with Aliya for dinner.Aditya was very happy,so as Aliya.
They sat for dinner.Aliya smiled at Sabrina.Sabrina turned off her face inanger hurting Aliya.
Aditya:Di...didn't you see Aliya?


Sabrina stared at Aliya:Yes.
Aditya-Aliya felt bad.
Aditya whispered:Aliya,don't feel bad about di's behavior.
ALIYA:It's ok Aditya.

A few days later....
Aditya prepared a project.Sabrina who entered Aditya's room in his absence tookhis project.
Sabrina:I will destroy this.Let me how you are going to get internal marks.
Sabrina was about to tear it.Suddenly Aliya held her hand.Sabrina was shocked.
Aliya took it from her.
She stared at Sabrina:Di....I know that you have never loved Aditya though heloves you a lot.But don't be so cruel to him.If so,I may even forget that youare his sister.When I am there don't think you can ever hurt Aditya.


Sabrina was shocked by her boldness.


After a few days....
Aditya was absent in the class.Aliya relly felt sad without him in school.Shewent to RM in the evening.
She saw Devayani.
ALIYA:Dadi...Where is Aditya?
D:Aditya is sick.That's why he didn't go to school.
Aliya went to his room where Arvind and Anushka were forcing Aditya to havemedicine and he was refusing to have it.
ALIYA:Aditya....if you don't have medicine, I will not talk to you.
Aditya:No Aliya.Don't say so.I will have medicine.
Aditya had medicine.
Anushka:Wow Aliya.His parents couldn't make him have medicine.But when you toldhim to have medicine he had it immediately.
Aliya smiled.
Aditya fell asleep.Aliya covered him with the blanket.


Arvind and Anushka smiled.
When Aliya left Arvind told Anushka:Aliya is so mature.She is looking after himso well.It will be so nice if Aliya comes to our house permanently as Aditya'swife.
Anushka smiled:That would be nice.But it's too early to say that.Now they aresmall.
Sabrina who over heard it got angry.

Aditya-Aliya's friendship became stronger and stronger.Aditya's happy days didnot last long.
Arvind-Anushka met with an accident.Arvind died on the spot.
Anushka was bed ridden for days counting her days.Aditya couldn't bear pain.
Anushka:Aditya...don't cry.If I go away from you....
Aditya:No Maa.Don't say like that.


Anu:Even if I go away from you me and your father will watch you fromheaven.You won't be alone.Dadi is there and Sabrina will start loving you.
Sabrina who overheard this smirked:I will never love Aditya.He is only my stepbrother.
Anu:And Aliya is there for you.She will never let your eyes be wet.
Slowly Anushka closed her eyes.Aditya screamed:Maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Aliya and Devayani came inside weeping.Aliya hugged Aditya to console him.
Sabrina smiled:Your mother took over my mother's position taking advantage ofmy dad's situation.God punished her for that.
Aditya was really hurt.
Devayani:Sabrina....stop it please.Aditya is already upset.Don't make him moreupset.


Sabrina:Dadi...you were always worried for Aditya.Not for me.


Sabrina left the room angrily.

Aditya was in heavy depression taking treatment.
Shashi Gupta got transferred to US.Aliya was sad to leave Aditya.
ALIYA:Babuji...I can't leave Aditya alone in this condition.He will be aloneand his condition will worsen.
S:But we can't leave you alone here.

Aliya shed tears:Please babuji..
Sh:Don't worry Aliya.We can take Aditya along with us.
Aliya was very happy.

Devayani gave them the approval to take Aditya to US.
D:I want my Aditya to be happy.Only with Aliya he can be happy.
They flew to US with Aditya making Sabrina irritated.
Sabrina:Why always God is giving happiness to Aditya?

Aditya found the new place strange.
Aliya showed him their house.
ALIYA:Aditya...that is our house.


We will always be happy there.
Aditya smiled slightly.


Aditya got nightmares about his parents and screamed in his sleep.Hearing himscream Aliya came to his room.He hugged him to comfort him.
ALIYA:No Aditya...no...
Aditya fell asleep on her shoulder.

Shashi took Aditya to the psychiatrist and after some months Aditya got rid ofdepression.

Aditya resumed schooling in US.He got admission in Aliya's school.Aditya wasnervous.But Aliya gave him strength by taking him to school and introducing himto everyone.



After schooling they joined the same university also.Aditya did businessstudies.

Aditya got restless not seeing Aliya around him.
Aditya:Where is this Aliya?

He searched for Aliya.
Aditya:Aliyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa...
In the crowd he saw her eyes.


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Posted: 5 years ago
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Good that Aliya scolded Sabrina for thinking to tear the project. Aditya went in depression. It was cute when he slept on her shoulder. last scene was so cute n so realistic.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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awesome chapter

wow aditya got 70% marks😃

all were so happy & aditya thanks aliya for that🤗

awe aditya's parents invite aliya & her parents for dinner😃

aditya wanted his mom to cook testy foods for aliya😉

as always sabrina wasn't happy

her behavior hurt adya so much💔

oh hell that sabrina tried to destroy aditya's project glad aliya came on time & gave her piece of her mind

adya's friendship growing strong with passing day😃

but in car accident aditya lost his parents🥺

poor boy got into depression🥺

glad aliya was there with him all the time❤️

oh god aliya's dad got transfer but glad they took him with them🤗

with aliya & her parents aditya recover from his sadness🤗

finally grown up adya enter😉

continue plz

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Posted: 5 years ago
#7

Thanks to Salley n cuteariiya4 amazing comments


Mirage Part 4




Aliya ran towards Aditya:Aditya...
Aditya was angry:Where were you Aliya?Do you know how tensed I was?


ALIYA:Sorry Aditya...Sindy wanted my help in studies.So I went to help her.

Image result for aditya aliya pics
Aditya cupped her face in his hands:No problem Aliya.I over reacted.But Ireally get restless when I don't see you.
Aliya became upset.


ALIYA:Aditya....very soon our course will get over.After that youwill go back to India to take care of the Kothari Industries.Then how willyou survive?
He became upset:Your course will also get over.Why don't you also join KothariIndustries?
Aliya smiled emotionally.

Life was impossible for them without each other.They watched movies with eachother.

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They went for picnic with each other.

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They pampered their dog Pretty together.


Christmas celebration in College.
Aditya-Aliya dressed like Santa for fun and teased each other.


The US citizen Britto came to Aliya:Hi Aliya...you look cool.
He tried to kiss her.Suddenly Aditya pulled Britto backward.
Aditya burnt with anger:Never try to touch Aliya.Understand?
B:Crazy...
Britto left.
ALIYA:Aditya...What did you do?


Aditya:He tried to kiss you.Bloody rascal.
ALIYA:Aditya....you know how foreigners are.They kiss on the basis off riendship.Britto was just being friendly.

Image result for aliya vish
Aditya:But I don't want him to get friendly with you.Let me be your only friend.
ALIYA:Aditya...
Aditya:I can't share you with others.You are only mine Aliya.
They looked at each other emotionally.


Sashi Gupta and Garima confronted Aliya.
S:Aliya,lots of marriage proposals are coming for you.Can we look for a guy?
Aliya was shocked:So fast?
Garima:Not so fast Aliya.You have reached the marriageable age.
Aliya became upset.
S:Aliya....why are you so upset?
ALIYA:Babuji...I...
S:Aliya...do you love Aditya?If so,we have no problem.
Aliya was confused.
ALIYA:Babuji...Aditya and I are best friends.But becoming a couple...we have not thought like that at all.

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S:Then think about that.Ask Aditya also.Our support will be there.
Aliya was confused.

Aliya went to Aditya.
ALIYA:Aditya....my parents are thinking of getting me married after studies.

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Aditya:Really?But Aliya...Marry and settle in India.Only then I will be able to see you daily.
Aliya thought:Aditya sees me only as a friend.

Aliya went to her parents.
ALIYA:I thought a lot.I and Aditya are just friends.We can't get married.ButBabuji...I want to settle in India after marriage.I want to join Aditya'soffice.
S:Ok.
Aliya went out.
Garima:Sashiji...Aliya is not practical.She wants to marry someone else and bewith Aditya all the time?
S:Garima...don't worry.Aliya and Aditya will realize their love for each other.

Months passed.After the course got over Aditya and Aliya flew to India withGuptas.
Devayani welcomed them happily.
Aditya and Aliya hugged Devayani.
D:I am so happy to see you all after a long time.
Sabrina was angry seeing Aditya-Aliya back.
Aditya looked at Sabrina:Di...

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She turned off her face which hurt Aditya.

Aliya met Sabrina secretly.
ALIYA:Di...you are seeing Aditya after a long time.Still you are so cold with him.How can you be like this to your brother?

Image result for aliya vish


Sabrina:He is not my brother Aliya.He is no one to me.He is someone whosnatched my happiness.


And get lost.


Aliya went out sadly.

Aditya took over Kothari Industries.Aliya assisted him.
Sabrina became insecure.
She thought:Since Aditya joined Kothari industries,I have no importance in the office as well.Everywhere Aditya is taking over my position.

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And that Aliya....how dare she?

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Posted: 5 years ago
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missing Vish serial badly, Aditya sees Alia just as a friend? i dont think so because they both r insecure without each other, waiting for next

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Posted: 5 years ago
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awesome chapter

awe both adya is so close to each other😃

they do everything together😃

aditya is over protective abt aliya & not ready to share her with anybody

now aliya's parents r looking groom for her

they even understand adya love each other just both haven't realize their feeling for each other

now adya went back to india & sabrina isn't happy seeing them🤔

even she is insecure abt adya😡

poor both adya r really hurt by sabrina's behavior

hope adya won't separate

continue plz

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Posted: 5 years ago
#10

Thanks to Salley n cuteariya 4 amazing comments


Mirage Part 5

Aditya came home.
Sabrina:Aditya...I want to talk to you.
He was happy that Sabrina is going to talk to him.
Aditya:Yes di.
Sabrina:Kothari Industries is our family's creation.So I think an outsider like Aliya should be kicked out.

Aditya:Di...how can you call Aliya an outsider?

Sabrina:Because she is an outsider.And we cannot trust an outsider.She may cheat us.

Image result for sabrina aditya pics
Aditya screamed:No Di....never say a word against Aliya.
Sabrina was stunned to see the shy silent Aditya turned into a tiger.Shesweated.


Sabrina:Aditya...What right Aliya has in our business?When you get married yourwife can join our office.But not Aliya.
Aditya:Damn it.Don't think you can kick out Aliya.



He went inside.
Sabrina became upset.
Devayani was dull.
Sabrina:Dadi...Why can't Aditya understand?Only our partners should have a handin our business.Not someone like Aliya.
Without replying Devayani went to Aditya who was frustrated.
D:Aditya...you are sad because you want Aliya with you and at the same time youdon't want to fight with Sabrina.Right?But remember Sabrina doesn't mind yourwife joining our business.Then make Aliya your wife.
Aditya was shocked.
Aditya:Dadi!What did you say?
D:You like Aliya a lot.You always crave for her presence.Then why don't youmake her your life partner?
Aditya was stunned.
D:Think about it and discuss with Aliya.
She left.
Aditya thought about his moments with Aliya.
He thought:Will Aliya accept me in a different way?

Mujhko yeh zindagi, lagtihai ajnabi
Chhaaon bhi, dhoop bhi,har naye pal hai nayee
Chhaaon bhi, dhoop bhi, harnaye pal hai nayee


Aditya went to Aliya.
Aditya:Aliya...I want to tell you some thing.
ALIYA:I need to tell you an important matter Aditya.Yesterday evening a guy came to see me.A marriage alliance.Anuj Sharma.Our marriage is fixed.
Aditya became dull.
ALIYA:Don't worry Aditya.I will be with you only.He allowed me to work for Kothari Industries.
Aditya thought:Why I don't feel happy about Aliya's marriage even though she will continue working with me?

Mujhko yeh zindagi, lagti hai ajnabi
Chhaaon bhi, dhoop bhi,har naye pal hai nayee
Chhaaon bhi, dhoop bhi,har naye pal hai nayee

Days passed...
Before Aliya's engagement Aditya visited Aliya.There were their friends.He gave her a jewellery set.
Aditya:An engagement gift for you Aliya.
ALIYA:Thank you Aditya.

Image result for aliya aditya vish pics



Anuj-Aliya's engagement...
Devayani was very upset.Aditya was happy to see Aliya wearing theornaments he gifted her.Still he was upset.
Aliya introduced Anuj to Aditya.
Anuj:Aliya always talks about her best friend Aditya.Nice to meet you.

Image result for anuj sachdev


Aditya:Wish you all the best.You are lucky to have Aliya as your life partner.
Anuj smiled:Yes I am.
Anuj-Aliya exchanged rings.
Anuj Aliya posed for photographs.


Their togetherness pierced Aditya's heart.
He thought:Why I am not able to see Aliya with anyone else?Why I am so possessive about Aliya?

Jaane kahan se aaya hoon, kya jaane main kaunhoon
Koi yeh samjhaaye mujhe,kaise main yeh gum sahoon
Jaane kahan se aaya hoon,kya jaane main kaun hoon
Koi yeh samjhaaye mujhe,kaise main yeh gum sahoon

Night...

Aliya was restless thinking of her engagement with Anuj.
ALIYA:Why I feel so upset?Even after marriage I and Aditya can remainfriends.We will be together.Still why I feel pain?

Mujhko yeh zindagi, lagtihai ajnabi
Chhaaon bhi, dhoop bhi,har naye pal hai nayee
Chhaaon bhi, dhoop bhi,har naye pal hai nayee

Aditya couldn't sleep.

Aditya:I want to see Aliya.

He rushed to her room.

Aliya was stunned:Aditya...You?

Aditya:I am not able to sit peacefully without seeing you.That'swhy I came here.

Phirse andhere chhaagaye, khoyee ujaale ki kiran
Kal raahon mein phoolthe, ab hai kaanton ki chubhan
Phirse andhere chhaagaye, khoyee ujaale ki kiran
Kal raahon mein phoolthe, ab hai kaanton ki chubhan

ALIYA:Even I was dying to see you.I felt I was going crazy without seeing you.

Image result for aliya aditya vish pics

Both looked at each other emotionally.

Mujhko yeh zindagi, lagti hai ajnabi
Chhaaon bhi, dhoop bhi,har naye pal hai nayee
Chhaaon bhi, dhoop bhi,har naye pal hai nayee(Sailaab).


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