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Posted: 5 years ago
#21

Sabrina arranged a man to destroy Aliya's image but her plan backfired.. So Sabrina wrote a chit in Aliya's handwriting when actually Aliya was kidnapped by her planning but sadly she died. Eager for next update.. Why no one's commenting on this sweet ff?

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Posted: 5 years ago
#22

oh hell this sabrina is so evil😔

she tried to trash aliya's dignity😔

glad aditya didn't believe he believe aliya more then anythingšŸ¤—

but 1 day aliya got lost & sabrina took again chance to make aditya hate aliya😔

once again her plan backfired aditya still believe aliyašŸ¤—

oh god those bloody goons kidnapped aliya but she escaped but died in accident🄺

plz don't kill aliya bring her back to aditya want adya together😭

now sabrina regret for what she did to adya😔

glad supriya gave her piece of her mind to sabrinašŸ‘

now the hardest part is how to convince aditya that aliya is not with her🄺

plz continue

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Posted: 5 years ago
#23

Thanks a lot 4 the lovely comments Salley n cuteariya


Mirage Part 9

Jeev:Yes,true.Aliya is no more.
Aditya screamed:How dare you all say Aliya is dead?
Jeev:It's true.Aliya did not elope with anyone.She was kidnapped.
Devayani was shocked.
D:Kidnapped by Sabrina?
Supriya couldn't say anything more.
Jeev:Come on Supriya...Tell the whole thing.They deserve to know the truth.
Supriya struggled hard to say the bitter truth.
Surpriya:Aliya was kidnapped by Sabrinaji only.Yes,Sabrinaji was behind Aliya's death.


Aditya stared at Supriya for a few seconds.He was numb.

Devayani was shocked.
Sabrina cried:Yes.Aliya was innocent.It was all planned by me to separate her from Aditya.
Aditya lost his control.
Aditya:You bloody witch...

Image result for aditya angry vish pics


He tried to squeeze her neck.Jeev freed her from Aditya.
Aditya fainted.
D:Aditya!
Jeev carried him and placed him on the bed.
Devayani stared at Sabrina:I never thought that your anger and jealousy towards Aditya would make you go to this extent.
Sabrina:Please forgive me Dadi.
She cried.
Devayani was very angry:How can I forgive you?You poisoned us against Aliya.Because of you Aditya lost his mental balance.


Sabrina:You are right.But the truth is that I have changed and I am willing to do anything to bring back Aditya to life.That's why I confessed the truth.Dadi...I have decided to punish myself.



D:What?
Policemen came and arrested Sabrina shocking them.
Sabrina:I called police.I have to suffer.


Seeing Sabrina being carried away Devayani cried.

Aditya opened his eyes after some time.
D:Aditya...
Supriya:Aditya....
Aditya did not respond.
D:Dr,what happened to my Aditya?
Supriya and Jeev looked at each other.

Supriya-Jeev at home....
Supriya cried:We did it to save Aditya.But his condition became worse than before.He doesn't even move or talk.
Jeev:No Supriya.I am sure that through treatment Aditya can be cured.
S:But I lost my hope Jeev.

After 2 months....

Jeev went to Supriya.
J:Still dull because of Aditya's case?Supriya...Aditya is not your only patient.There are others too.
S:I know that.So I am very careful and is trying not to put others in danger.But still Aditya Aliya are haunting me.
J:Because you are guilty about not being able to cure Aditya.Right?Then cheer up.You will win.God has shown us a way to cure Aditya.
S:How?
J:A miracle has taken place.


S:Miracle?
J:Yes.I enquired about Sashi Gupta and Garima Gupta;Aliya's parents.Last week my trip to US was not only a medical trip,but also an investigative trip.I found out their location and met them.From there I came to know that Aliya is with them.
Supriya was shocked:What?
J:Yes.The goons lied to Aliya.Aliya was hit by a bus.But they escaped without burying her.She got hospitalized.The hospital owner was Sashi Gupta's friend and he informed them.They took her to US for her safety.
S:Aliya?Can she live without Aditya?
J:No.But after that accident she slipped into coma.
Supriya was shocked:What?Aditya Aliya in almost the same condition.
J:I told them what happened between Aditya Aliya.They kept silent thinking that Aliya tried to commit suicide as she was not happy with Aditya.They felt sad hearing the true story of Aditya Aliya.Yesterday a miracle happened.Aliya recovered from coma.Now she is enquiring about Aditya.But they can't bring her back as she has just recovered from coma.After 2 weeks she may travel.They are bringing back Aliya.
S:But how will Aliya bear Aditya's present condition?
J:I am sure that God made this miracle happen to cause another miracle.Aditya will become normal seeing Aliya for sure.We will be successful in making Aditya normal.So now my darling...please smile.
Supriya smiled.




Jeev-Supriya collected Guptas from the airport.
J:Hi Aliya..I am Dr.Jeev.We have heard a lot about you.
Su:I am DR.Supriya.We are Aditya's doctors.
ALIYA:Doctors?What happened to Aditya?Is he alright?


Why no one is telling me anything?Not even my parents are revealing anything.

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J:Come with us.


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Posted: 5 years ago
#24

Good that Sabrina decided to punish herself

thank God Aliya is alive

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Posted: 5 years ago
#25

starting was really heart breaking🄺

aditya couldn't handle aliya's death news🄺

dadi got really shocked to know it was all sabrina's plan to separate adya😲

glad sabrina get herself arrested

supriya was really sad for adya😭

i'm so happy that jeev found out abt aliya & also got to know she is alivešŸ¤—

yippee aliya is alive

it was miracle & adya's true love that aliya came out of comaā¤ļø

now only she can bring aditya backā¤ļø

continue plz

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Posted: 5 years ago
#26

I really thank you guys 4 giving me detailed comment.Now this SS is ending.plz give detailed comment as usual n plz write ur fav character,fav scene ,fav jodies n y u liked them




Mirage Part 10



Aliya was brought to KM by Jeev-Supriya.
Devayani cried seeing Aliya:When Dr.Supriya told me that you are alive I thanked God and requested him to give me a chance to apologize to you.Sorry for misunderstanding you Aliya.
Aliya shed tears:No Dadi.It's circumstance which made you think so.But where is Aditya?
Devayani kept silent.
Aliya went inside.She saw Aditya sleeping.She smiled calling him.
ALIYA:Aditya...wake up.Your Aliya is back.
She shook him.But he didn't get up.
Supriya:Due to medicines he is sleeping.
ALIYA:Medicines?For depression?Whenever Aditya is too sad he goes to heavy depression.
S:This time things became worse.
Supriya explained everything.
Aliya was shattered.

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She held the wall tightly for strength.

She burst into tears.
Supriya looked at Jeev painfully.
J:Aliya,we are sure that your come back will make Aditya normal.
Aliya continued crying.

After some hours...
Aliya came to Aditya's room holding a plate.She looked at him sleeping innocently.

She caressed his face emotionally.
Aditya opened his eyes feeling a breeze around him.He looked at Aliya.
She looked at him tearfully.



She made him sit.She suppressed her emotions.
ALIYA:Aditya...
Aditya had no reaction seeing Aliya.It pained Aliya.
ALIYA:Aditya...you didn't recognize me?I am your Aliya.
No reaction from Aditya.
ALIYA:Ok...you don't know how to eat food without dropping it down.So I am going to feed you.
He looked at her with wonder.


Aliya started feeding him.After some time he felt strange.
Her tear drops fell on his palm.He stared at her.
His vague memories with Aliya flashed.
Unknowingly he touched her face.
Emotionally Aliya looked at his eyes:Aditya....I really exist.It's not your illusion.It's not mirage.If you doubt look at my eyes.Even in the crowd you identify me seeing my eyes.Right?Then why don't you identify me now?Can't you see my eyes?
Accidently Aditya saw Aliya's eyes...her teary eyes.


Unknowingly his eyes became wet.
Losing hope Aliya cried.
Slowly he held her hand shivering and moved his lips:Aliya...

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She looked at him unbelievingly:Aditya!
Both of them embraced each other shedding tears.


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Devayani became emotional seeing it.Jeev-Supriya smiled happily.


J:We won Supriya.I told you...Aliya can bring back Aditya to life.
She smiled.
Seeing Jeev-Supriya-Devayani Aditya-Aliya became shy and broke their embrace.
ALIYA:Thanks a lot doctors.You all gave us our lives back.
J:No need to be thankful.We did our job and it's God who made a magical pair like you guys.So he united you guys.Anyways all the best.One more thing...The coming 18th is our wedding.You guys should definitely attend it.
Aditya:Sure,we will.

Wedding day....
Aliya wore a beautiful lehenga and jewellery.Aditya was lost in her beauty.
She was struggling hard with her dhori.


Aditya held her dhori and started tying it.



Both controlled themselves.
ALIYA:Aditya...let's go fast.They will be waiting for us.

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They went for Jeev-Supriya's wedding.
ALIYA:Supriyaji,you look very beautiful. Dr.Jeev will be flattered seeing you.
Supriya blushed.


Aditya whispered in Aliya's ears:I am also flattered by your beauty.
She blushed.
Jeev-Supriya got married happily.


Aditya-Aliya reached back home.
Suddenly Aditya pulled her towards him.
ALIYA:Aditya...
Aditya:I controlled a lot.Not anymore.


She blushed.


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She smiled giving me the approval to love her.He looked at her deeply.She was blushing continuously.


He untied her dhori sensuously.

His fingers rubbed her skin.A lovely sensation passed through her and she closed her eyes.


Years passed....

Kothari Mansion is filled with happiness now.
Aditya-Aliya are happy with their twin daughters Aashka and Antara.


And other than Devayani there is one more person who loves the twins a lot.She is none other than Sabrina.She is truly Aditya's elder sister who loves the family wholeheartedly.She was released from the jail by Aditya-Aliya as it's been proved that she has not murdered Aliya.Ever since her release she has been taking care of her family.Sabrina is not alone now.Aditya;her loving brother united her with her ex-lover Shyam.

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All the Kotharis live happily loving each other.

The End

Edited by jasminerahul - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#27

Sabrina is just so full of poison. she creates all the unhappiness for herself.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Aliya breaking down on hearing about Aditya was painful

Aditya recognizing Aliya and embracing her was passionate

Jeev n Supriya.. cute couple

Romance of AdYa after so much time was nice

nice daughters

is that zain imam with Sabrina?

My favorite scene was Aditya and Aliya's reunion

favorite character is Arnav who gave away his heart for Aditya

favorite jodi jeev n Supriya because they reduced the tension between the scenes n r very lovey dovey

will miss this ff

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Posted: 5 years ago
#29

The longest comment from u.Thanks a lot.

It is Gurmeet with Sabrina.He played Maan in Geet hui sabse parayi.He is Debina's real husband.I think u got confused.In this SS there is no Arnav.It was in my last TS Jeevan saathi that Arnav gave his heart to Aditya.So can u plz tell me which was your fav character in this SS?


Originally posted by: salley145

Aliya breaking down on hearing about Aditya was painful

Aditya recognizing Aliya and embracing her was passionate

Jeev n Supriya.. cute couple

Romance of AdYa after so much time was nice

nice daughters

is that zain imam with Sabrina?

My favorite scene was Aditya and Aliya's reunion

favorite character is Arnav who gave away his heart for Aditya

favorite jodi jeev n Supriya because they reduced the tension between the scenes n r very lovey dovey

will miss this ff

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Posted: 5 years ago
#30

my favorite character is Jeev who didn't gave up hope when there was no hope, he was hopeful

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