Originally posted by: Himalaya10
You are telling just the plain kidie-kid story, ther's no evaluation here,.... What did you deduce from so and so happenings, why it happened according to you,...and what will happen in future,... that should be portrayed,.... ( say smthg which viewers, missed the point after that and this happenings,..... rest, all have seen the show,..., ) using yr own sense and thought process,... and what did you feel.... ! No ?
Nonetheless,.. as a beginner it's still a good attempt, flow of speech, and useful for those, who are interested in show and somehow have not provision to watch it,...
Aah, A lot to ponder over. This really helped me a lot.
I just started reviewing this week, and this was my second video. It really helped me a lot. Generally people are a little kind here and they feel shy to criticize so I don't get to know how I can improve.
But your pointers gave me a lot to work upon which I will :)
