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Posted: 4 years ago

Ugh hate Geet jumping about Akhil. Woman you shairng a bed with Maan and having dreams about him not Akhil ! Sigh when will this girl open her eyes.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Oh no yeah Geet se khuch nahi hone wala. 

Morning me kissi kissi Maan ke sath or Saadi karne wali hai Akhil se. ðŸ˜¡

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 55

outstanding update! 

wow Maan knows he is going to marry Geet! hate that Geet still wants to marry Geet!

oh no they fight! 

but he still cares about Geet!

update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

New update coming in 24 hours

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Posted: 4 years ago

Pandit is 👌,he tells wt will happen,geet misunderstood that it is about Akhil,but maan confirms that he will be the only one in her life

Then they get into fight..she is hoping Akhil will be love her now also,when will she understands

Waiting for further...

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Posted: 4 years ago

Maan enjoying listening praising word's about Geet would be husband from pandit bz he is confident that he will b hr husband

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice update..

Continue soon..

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Part 56

 

M-Pasta khaogi saath mein?

 

G-Nahi, jao

 

Andar se zara si awaaz aayi

 

M-Topping?

 

G-Nahi khana, kaha naa

 

M-Cake?

 

Geet doesn’t reply

 

M-ok then I'll order cake and a garlic bread for you

 

Maan kehkar chala jaata hai

 

He makes the order

 

Bahar tv chala kar baithta hai

 

Geet toh nikli nahi

 

Khana aaya

 

Maan goes and knocks again ki uska khana aa gaya

 

M- Geet bahar aao. Nahi toh gate kholo aur apne kamre mein khana lejakar khalo, merishakal nahi dekhni to

 

G-Mujhe nahi khana...main so rahi hoon

 

M-Khaali pait mat so

 

G-Tum meri maa nahi ho

 

M-Of course nahi hoon. Gender mat change karo

 

G-Please leave me alone Maan...I request

 

M-Fine. Bahar rakha hai kitchen mein khana. Khana ho to kha lena

 

Maan kehkar leaves Geet alone to wallow in her misery and corrode in her toxic love

 

Subah hot ihai

 

Maan as usual uthta hai

 

Ready hokar bahar aata hai toh dekhta hai Geet chup chap kitchen mein breakfast bana rahi hai

 

She kept the breakfast on table

 

Maan ne bhe chup chap baithke breakfast kar liya, kuch nahi kaha

 

Kha peekar utha, apna office ka saaman liya

 

M-Kuch kaam ho toh call me

 

She nods

 

Maan kehkar chala gaya office his mood appropriately glum

 

Geet feels she isn’t angry at Maan but she is hurt…really hurt

 

First time she actually shared what she felt for Akhil and she expected him to understand

 

She counted on him and he didn’t and ulta uspe hi chillaya, usse samjha nahi

 

She never expected this from Maan

 

She expected him to stand by her, just be with her…like he always does…like she has started counting on him at everything

 

Maan hota hai office mein

 

Poore din chup chap kaam karta hai

 

Aas paas ke log pochte hain ki kya hua

 

Maan ne kaha kuch nahi…wo bas thodi tabiyat kharab thi…mausam galat chall raha hai

 

Maan sham ko ghar pohonchta hai toh Geet darwaza kholti hai

 

Geet isn’t complaining types ki maine expect kiya tumne nahi kiya; as if uske expectation meet hote hai harr baar

 

So Geet bhi usko lekar zyada issue nahi karti hai

 

She is like kya farak padta hai, as if its new to me

 

Par agar kuch farak na pad raha hota toh Geet would have welcomed him back with a smile

 

But smile andar se nahi aayi bhi toh koi nahi, she can still smile. She thinks

 

Maan andar aaya

 

He holds out a bouquet of lilies for her

 

Its nothing extravagant but simple and sweet with all colors of lilies in the bunch

 

Geet ne bhi aaj tshirt and pajama ki jagah, salwar kameez pehen rakha hai (looking a little biwi types)

 

She looks at the lilies and a grin comes over on the corner of her lips

 

G-Faltu mein paise kharch karna band karo

 

She keeps the flowers in the vase

 

M- I shouldn’t have said some things I said last night. I am sorry

 

She looks at him and gives a deep sigh

 

G-Hmm, I am sorry too

 

M-So are we cool? You aren’t angry with me anymore?

 

Maan gives Geet a little of his puppy face look

 

She shakes her head

 

Geet looks at the lilies then at Maan and smiles

 

G-Thanks. Aise kitni ladkiyon ke saath kiya hai?

 

Geet haste hue kitchen mein chali gai

 

He follows her

 

M-Lilies toh sirf tumhe hi diye hain

 

G-ohh..baakiyon ko roses diye hain?

 

M-hmmm bakiyon ko toh main jungli wale ukhad kar de deta hoon. Bol deta hoon ki exotic species hain

 

G-Chii...khd bhi jungli ho

 

Maan smiles broadly at her

 

M- Toh aaj ka kya plan hai?

 

G-Kuch nahi. Kal ka plan hai picnic. Kal weekend chutti hai naa

 

He nods

 

M-Kahan jaa rahe hain hum?

 

G-The woods near the lake?

 

M- You in woods? Kaafi daring ho gai ho...

 

He says in a teasing voice

 

G-Jungli ke saath reh rehke...junglon se kya darna

 

M-Aye haye meri jungli sherni !

 

Maan wink sat her

 

G-Aye hye Mr Flirt

 

Dono ne khana khaya saath mein TV dekhte hue

 

Aur poore ek din ke baas Maan aur Geet ek kamre mein phir soye

 

Bechari Geet ko  kal neend bhi nai aayi thi naa hi Maan ko aayi thi, ye soch ke ki Geet ko akele neend nahi aa rahi hogi

 

Next day jaldi se picnic basket mein saamaan thus lete hain

 

Geet picks a nice knee length dress to wear and lets her hair down too

 

Geet bike pe one side legs karke baithi thi aur beech mein saaman bhi tha toh Maan ko aur ache se jakad ke pakad liya

 

As Maan bike chala raha hai, Geet ke baal hawa ke saath udh rahe hain

 

Woh pohoche lake ke paas, raste bhar chilla chilla kar baatien karte hue bike aur hawa ki awaazon ke beech mein

 

Geet ne mat lagaya, saaman rakha

 

Sab kuch karne ke baad realize kiya ki Maan kahan gaya

 

Maan ne Geet ko surprise diya in form of a jhoola he made for her

 

M-Baitho. I’ll give you a push

 

Jhoola bandha tha branch se, jo lake ke upar thi zara paani ke upar. So when Geet would sit on the jhoola her feet would get the tingling sensation of the cool and soothing lake water

 

Geet ne zara dress upar kari, cautiously darr darr ke walking towards it

 

M-C'mon don't worry. You'll be fine

 

Maan tugs the rope to how her its safe


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Posted: 4 years ago

If Geet doesnt see his love for her she needs bigger glasses. They are so cute. Akhil needs to disappear from the pic. 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Kkiran

If Geet doesnt see his love for her she needs bigger glasses. They are so cute. Akhil needs to disappear from the pic. 

Hahahahaha... good one