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Posted: 6 years ago

Lovely update

Stupid Geet still thinks Akhil is her love and shuts up Maan.

Hope she comes to her senses soon.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Geet still seeing akhil's dreams she can't see love in Maan care and poor Maan have bear this

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Posted: 6 years ago

Part 57

Jhoola bandha tha branch se, jo lake ke upar thi zara paani ke upar. So when Geet would sit on the jhoola her feet would get the tingling sensation of the cool and soothing lake water

Geet ne zara dress upar kari, catiously darr darr ke walking towards it

M-C'mon don’t worry. You'll be fine

Maan tugs the rope to how her its safe and also extends his hand

Geet holds his hand

Maan pulls her to safe land

Geet ko baithaya jhoole par

Her feet are touching the water

Maan gives her several pushes to get her momentum going and helping her swing while smiling at her seeing her enjoying

He takes out the digi cam and clicks her pictures

Geet was smiling and giggling with happiness laughing happily

She doesn’t remember last time she was so happy, jab wo itna khulke hassi thi

She felt happy like a baby

Maan laughs with her

He is glad Geet came up with such a fab idea

Maan ne Geet ko khoob jhoola khulaya

Fir finally Geet utri jhoole se

Dono pani mein gaye chai chapa chai karne and they took lot of wacky pics too

Ek doosre par pani udaya, tedhe medhe mooh banake, uchalke kundke khoob sari pics khichi

Haath pakad ke zara chotta sa steep hill tha wahan gaye nazara dekhne

Dono wapas aa rahe the hill se utaarke

M-Race you back

Keh kar jogs ahead

Geet wahin khadi rahi, ghabrai si as hill bohot steep thi and she was unsure and afraid that she might slip

She managed to utter a worried “Maan”

Maan zyada aage nahi gaya tha

He hears her squeak and jogs back to her

M-Are you ok?

She pouts hitting his chest lightly

G-Gande kahin ke...mujse baat mat karo. Mujhe akela chod diya. Hate you

M-Oh? Mujhe laga you would be interested in a race...can’t come down?

Geet takes a step…which is wrong...and slips down and falls on her butt

Maan look swide eyes and tight lipped

He knows better to laugh or take a pic all though his lips and hands are itching

Maan holds her by the elbow, helping her get up

She is red with embarrassment

M-Are you ok?

She nods


Maan knows she is embarrassed

Without further adieu in her standing position he lifts her off the ground

He does not pay any heed to her protests till they reach a flat ground

She never realized she had tightly clutched onto his shirt

She loosens her clutch as they land safely on the flat earth

She looks up into his eyes briefly pushing his forehead play fully

G-Pagal!

She walks ahead then looks over the shoulder and bewildered Maan

G-Ghar chalein?

Both reach the picnic spot as Maan says ki Sunset dekh ke chalte hain

Geet is laying on the soft grass and Maan is sitting beside her

G-You know I was thinking about it

M-About what?

G-The thing you said

She supports herself on her elbow looking at him

G-I think you are nice. Even if aren’t rich....but…we will add money and have something…it will do

M- Do what?

G-It will do for life

M-I already have life. What exactly are you talking about?

Geet sarr pe haath maar leti hai

G-Leave it!Dumbo. Let’s go

Maan shrugs…Geet ki random baatien…headless and tailless

He also gets up

He looks at frustrated Geet

M- So my looks aren’t that bad any more hmm? As for money…maybe I’ll inherit some…plus I have rich friends who are generous...I mean I would never destitute. So let’s just say I already have that money

Geet looks at him first then shakes her head

G-We will work real hard and earn honest money

M-It’s honest

G-No,hamarra paisa…khud ka paisa…that we earn

M-Hmm I guess I should probably tell you this then... before you get your dream of working hard destroyed

He pauses

She looks at him

M-I....

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Posted: 6 years ago

so much carefreeness its nice to see both of them like this. OMG is he going to revel his identity and if he is will she know who he is and believe him. Oh boy and wonder if she was talking about their future together.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Very nice, she seems to have let go some of her inhibitions and it looked nice to see her being so carefree, enjoying their time together.

Maan was abt to say something to her, and she was also being cryptic. What was that about we will earn hard earned money and all that? She could be a little clear abt what she wants..

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Posted: 6 years ago

They r enjoying to the fullest without any tension,

Is he going to reveal his identity..

She is speaking about their future

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Posted: 6 years ago

Part 57

fab update!

great seeing Geet so happy! loved their convo!

will Maan tells her he is rich?

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Posted: 6 years ago

geet become more carefree with maan . maan happy seeing geet happy.

geet thinking about their future together

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Posted: 6 years ago

Geet talking about their future and in happiness Maan going to reveal his identity

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Posted: 6 years ago

Sorry for no update today. Please expect the next update on Tuesday

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