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Yes it's entirely different from show and only names and place are taken everything is fictional 😆 I am glad you liked their encounter I just wanted this to be this way only as in JA their chemistry would set screen on fire what will happen if they themselves are fire 😆 so hot headed stubborn with same mindset of ruling other motto to defeat other

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First of all sorry as i was little busy with exams n all.
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JoJa encounter is good, Ja is too rough on jo.
As usual a strong jo is here.
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First of all sorry as i was little busy with exams n all.
The story is going very good, actually its going amazingly.
JoJa encounter is good, Ja is too rough on jo.
As usual a strong jo is here.
Will love to read more.
Keep updating.
Thank you.

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Chapter 21

Go ahead I don't care"! I lost everything already what more it will do if I lost my friends as well"!

Why "? Why would you do this"? Don't you care about them"!

"I do but I won't let them be my weakness they're loyal and my well wisher"! They rather die than see me giving into things which break me to do"!

(Jalal look at her and immediately realise what he made her to be , his brother would often say "Be wary of person who have nothing to lose"!. Cause most dangerous people are who have nothing to lose", cause they have nothing to care about , nothing to fight for no one to live for"And here he did left her with nothing. She know now she have no home anymore , the one she lived all over her life won't welcome her back. And the one she is currently dwell won't be her home ever it's prisoner for her from which she desire to escape but she can't. And eventually it's left her with no one and nothing. Really did you really left her with nothing"? Ask his inner self and he looked at her she was looking back at cub. She care what she think her to be her own. And here you were talking about her attender her maid come friends how she can let them be your prey to make her bow to you. Aren't we all sane play to be most heartless and uncaring towards everyone before our opponents so that they get nothing to to target against you. No wonder she is playing the same game oh I got you little doe you're not getting away with this).

"You know what you did caught me off guard by your big big words"! But truth is well known to me and of-course' you"! And that is You can die for them giving in to my demand is nothing for you to do for their safety"! or else why would you agree to tell me everything when I had you at my mercy"?

(Jodha was looking down towards cot where to cub was lying peacefully. But her mind and attention was on his words. He caught her cause it's easy you can do whatever you want I don't care but truth is opposite of it. She can't let anything happen to her friend they're all she have now with her. While Jodha was lost in her thoughts Jalal took his own sweet time to look at her. When a thought cone in his brain, why she still have on face"? She didn't mind to be bareheaded before my brother ", but she bother to have veil on before me her husband"! Why she isn't looking at me"? She doesn't mind to talk freely with my brother", but with me she had to show attitude"! He didn't like it warm to other cold to him it's unfair with him. Only he have right, to hear her to see her to be with her. She is his her mind her heart her soul her opinion her emotion all belong to him. And she should know it or she already knew but riling him up. He step closer to her then holding her right wrist turn her around to him. And by left hand took of her veil. Her thoughts broke the second his bare hand contacted with her wrist , she looked at him in confused manner but he clear it next by taking off her veil).

There is nothing to hide from me"! You're mine I have every right to see things exposed ", which I have right on which I own"!

"I ain't thing ", I am human and no one own humans"!

That's where you're wrong"! The one who doesn't owned any home", depend on others for fulfilment of their wish", for their security", owned by the one they're depended on"!

(He spoke without any shame but how right he seem to be. Bitter truth definitely human aren't to be own by any but this fact seem to differ in case of women raised in certain manner which can be term as appreciate for one they're going to tied up with life. How come the one who made such rules didn't thought about equality and human rights of everyone. Aren't the walls of difference on the basis of Religion caste poor and rich enough "? That there is this unfair rules and regulations on basis of Gender to create wall of difference. His words sting deep in her heart she whenever she thought she can win with him he defeat her even on the game words she lost every damn time. She knew if she object in one or other way he will say things which she already knew but hearing them will hurt her more then knowing it already).

If you're done proving how you own me", then May I leave for my room"? I am very tired"!

"No you're going to stay with me tonight"!

But I"!...

"Don't you dare to object I already decided", you're going to stay with me from now on"!

Wh what why"!

Not only this you're not allowed to be out from here either"! You're going to make report of everything you do and present it before me daily"!

What's wrong with you why you're doing this"!

Cause I had enough of your busy days"! You're here cause of my relation with you", but expect me you have time for everyone even my lost head brother"!

You monster"! how dare you question my character"?

(Jalal ignore the question fore at him only the endearment of being called monster by her re-rang in his brain he looked at her then sneering in rage. He growled on her face).

"A monster you say huh", now you will face the monster and then I won't be having issue getting called monster by you"!

(He sneaked his arms around her waist by getting closer then, picked her up swiftly throwing her on his shoulder. Earning loud gasp from her and heavy struggle in the form of punch on back while kicks on front recklessly wherever her hand and feet get access to but he reamin ineffective , Walking over to the terrace area which was Adjacent to his dressing room).

"What are you doing", "let me go leave me"!

(He placed her over the forged small boundary wall of terrace edge, she look back and loud yelp escape from her mouth finding herself on top of palace, everything looked ant size from there and she was sure if she fell she would defiantly going to get acess to grave. In shock and fear she immidately she grip on thing she get access on tightly in fear it was more like getting caught of guard whatever she might thought she didn't expected this of hell she never expected anything when it's come to unpredictable men standing before her).

"Now all set "! So tell me do you wish to get released by my hold now"!

(As he spoke his hold on her started loosening but not enought to let her fell down but she found herself getting cold, her grip got more tighten she was still looking down at back while he had smirk on face knowing well how she might be feeling for him she is sight to behold in every form either in fear anger happiness. He wasn't able to grasp her expression at moment cause of her looking back and down, but he was sure her facial expressions must mirrioring her fear full heart which is beating to loud at moment for him to hear as well).

"What's up little doe"? to scared to speak "?come on tell me should I let you go now"!

"Don't you dare to call me that I ain't that"! and yes let me go"! Cause dying is far much better then enduring your beastly side for life"!

(Huh he was sure he didn't expected this it was surely not she was looking back at him, with fearless fierce eyes glaring right at his own surprise widened dark eyes, not for once she there was hestitation in speaking anything every word spell by her was well clear and loud firm confident manner. But then he had to come back with befitted reply, obliviously even getting things own way he can't spoiled everything by getting her killed , worse by his own hand it will ruin the thing he done till now. Everything Everyone will get out of his control as well which he can't take risk on. Not when everything is in empire getting critical for him to control).

"This the very reason you have to endure me"! By staying in my room with me"!

(Saying this he scooped her down from wall edge and about to say something more, when he heard soldier voice from the entrance of his room. Cause of heavy Curtain he couldn't see them which, Jodha was greatful for or else imagine the humilation she may face ,if it's spread outside how she was thrown on edge of boundary wall of terrace by emperor).

Pardon me for interrupting your majesty ", but Her highness the Dowgar Queen", expecting to meet you at her room"!

(Looking back at her with raised eyebrow he Expected her to agree to his order, however knowing very well she wont. And just like he knew she open her mouth and spoke firmly).

"I won't stay here no matter what"!

I don't think ", you forget how guards forbidden", you from stepping in Arena"! It will be shame if they stop you from going out from this room"!

(Saying this he walked out of there while she watch him instructing something to guards. I shouldn't come here with him if only I knew these cub are here. He caged me again and I am helpless it's humilation if they stopped me. She was thinking about it when she saw her maids stepping in room they saw her sitting near cot her slumped shoulder were sign she lost again. They walked closer to her and spoke firmly to comfort her alas no words could encourage her).

Don't worry everything will be fine"!

(She didn't said anything while the maids prepare the bed for her to retire for night. They sense her Exhaustion thus they didn't felt like questioning her she was going to sat on bed when Bilal Khan come there and spoke).

"His majesty seek to have dinner with you"!

(She sneer at this giving annoyed look to Bilal she dismiss them without hesitation. Making them shared a look but they didn't said anything and walked out of there. They knew better not to risk their neck by questioning their mistress when they're off mood).

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So much just to show off."!

(Abdul moves halted while Zaheer step back And Aziz held his sword tightly in alert mode. listening the voice they were busy practicing Thier weapon when a voice echo in arena. They look at way of voice coming from and found three girl coming towards arena. They just reach the entrance when they said this).

Weponary practice are never to show off"!

Indeed it's not but even their is time for practice"! It's going to be night soon"!

"We don't owe explaination to anyone about what and when we do"!

(The girls shared a look to each other, realising Thier plan is failing they knew these two men are important enough in emperor life to change his decision sometime and for what they want them to do is important for them to gave into provoking. They look back at then look back at Abdul and Zaheer).

"Ofcourse you don't the people who had to backstab to get hold on two unarmed girls definitely doesn't owe explaination to anyone"!

Why you're here"! Women aren't allowed here"!

"Ofcourse they're not allowed here cause you fear to be defeated by them"!

"We don't know what you're trying to do women but we sure won't be any help in whatever you wish to achieve by us"!

(Spoke Abdul on firm tone letting it clear if they think by provoking them, into getting argument or to make bet will let them get something they wish to seek by using them as step of ledder won't be of use. As Jalal won't give in anything just cause they ask him to do so but no wonder the girls were hitting on most weakest spot of them. Their ego and they were sure if they didn't stop their little play they might end up giving in. And that's what happen already enraged by their comment Aziz spoke pointing sword at them ).

"Maybe by defeating you in combat we can prove we Mughal fear no one "!

Defeating us mean disarming us", well I suggest you you can't even unveil us"!

That's enough now if we unveil you what you would do then"!

"Whatever you ask for but if we proved whatever say it's right you would have to do what we ask for"!

"Fair enough choose your weapon"!

(The girls move towards the weapon holder and took a sword all were sparring weapon, choosing one the combat started between them the rule was simple the ladies need to be unveil, if the men wish to win while the men need to unarmed if ladies wish to win. Within next few minutes of fight the men realise the person they re fighting with are very noble time they seem to following every rule of combat. But they didn't they were just pretending to do so they waited and waited for them to go on the thing they thought to be their weakness).

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(Entering his room he started taking of his things one by one keeping his crown on table laid before dressing area his pearl neck piece , the over coat waist band his finger rings . But very soon he realised change in air , his room was embrace by enchanting scent which he knew well , belongs to her he immediately glance around to see her but find her nowhere thus he moved further in room towards sleeping one, the meeting with his mother took bit of time then on way he ended up having meeting with few scholar thus he did got late. And he look on bed disappointed gripped his heart as he didn't find her on bed , "didn't expected her to wait for me", but at least she could be little caring regarding her responsibility"! He turn towards the table laid at front before the bed and took the jug fill with wine pouring a bit on glass he neared the glass to his lip but before he could take a sip of it he saw her lying on couch. she look very mesmerizing in the light of litted lamp. He couldn't help but continued staring at her she look so peaceful so enchanting and alluring he didn't felt like waking her up for Dinner at all hoping she might had her dinner already. He step more closer and bend down on knees to come upto her lying form level. The wind coming from forged window was making her hair come on front disturbing her , thus as soon he saw one more time her hair coming on face unconsciously His hand move towards her to fox them on place but he hestitate to do so and look at other side ,but then she twisted on couch and her head rested on his open palm of head rested area of couch looking back at her again).

"You're robber of my heart"! You're criminal which commited crime and thus need to be punished"! I feel my entire self on fire"! whenever I see you happy with anyone, mere thought of you can be happy with one who isn't me unleash the monster in me"! If only you know what you your action do to me"! if only I could express what you mean to me"! You hate me I know and it's fine by me, you despise I don't expect anything less from you after what I done to you or doing with you"! But you finding solace in others company isn't acceptable"! You're allow to fight me shower me with hatred build in your heart everytime I do things to you"! But you're not allow to be admire by others"! Not at all Jodha not even in dreams cause you're mine solely entirely mine Little Doe"!

(He said all this huskily to sleeping Jodha who was to exhausted by his games to even realise the person she despise is leaning so close to her forget about realising he is even saying something to her. But not for long as soon enough she twist again letting his hand free which he used to he slid under her and lifted her in his arms. It was no big deal to him as He had her in arms before thus he knew it's not hard cause she is very lightweight But he was wary of her being light sleeper. But soon he realised she is to tired to wake up today by being carried in his arms. It's not wrong to be in love", it's wrong to not realising how you're hurting the one you love"!. Right now a part of him know he just like he can't see her with other he can't have her attention on other he can't bear her hatred for himself as well thus he need to stop acting so ignorant to her emotions. But he find it hard to admit and stop on his move he think controlling is what he need to do by controlling only he can have her. Cause all over his life he learn this to get things you desire you need to be on control and hard on action as being lenient won't lead you anywhere. Tucking her on bed he to got on bed besides her hugging her close to him. Whispering a night to her and kissing on her forehead he rested his head on pillow and soon enough drifted to heavenly sleep).

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"You mean to say"! he took her to his room"?

(Spoke Rukaiya while smoking from Hukka pipe , sitting royally on couch leaning on rested area. Few women of Harem come to her, she knew they're worried of losing Jalal entirely to a none believer already he pay no heed to them. Now the new queen become threat to them as much they dislike her they love him enough to not let him bewitched by any none believer it's unacceptable for them. They think at least Rukaiya does make time of him for them but she won't cause they're being anything but good to her).

"Yes he did he took her from Angoori Baag to his room"! And they spend night together"!

(It was really surprising week of no meeting no facing off no glancing at each other . And now they ended up being together in room that to which belong to him , where even she doesn't have access to spend time at but why it's making her feeling uneasy she didn't bother about him being associated with any women he himself insure her about her never letting her place given to her. Queen Farida , Queen Nazima , Queen Pinaz the three of them continue talking letting their point out before her).

"We know she won't be only threat to your position", but everyone of us", his majesty must be aware about the conspiracy against him by Scholars in empire"!

"She is doom for all of us", till yesterday she get to practice her religion build temple here", today she even got place in his room then tommorrow in his heart"! Which eventually make her access to power in empire"!

"Yes your grace it's not new to anyone ", that his majesty admire courages wise kind people, she is one of them by putting forth her condition bravely she earn his respect", by showing no interest in him she earn his attention"! Respect attention won't take long turning into love"!

(Rukaiya heard them and no wonder even she fine truth in whatever they spoke , she herself sense this while having word with Jalal it's no new to her at all she is familiar with how Jalal mind work at least half of time she can predict what he would do next otherwise he is unpredictable to her as much he to everyone. Which always have others on toe in alert mode she even teased him whenever he went on any war or to work outside saying she pity the people work with him as he is living terror to them. But now she don't know he is changed she can sense it but she can't do anything either , as he is powerful loyal brave warrior then sharp witty fearless emperor).

"I understand your concern"! Cause the emperor won't negelate his responsibility for anyone"! It's late you all should retire for night as well"!

(Listening this the women's got the point of leaving now. As it's tine for their rest or not it's time for her rest for sure. And even if she agreed to them she won't make it evident with them after all she doesn't treat them with high regard. Whereas Rukaiya started thinking ways to get even with Jodha , either get yourself so capable to not only regain the top position but keep it up with it for forever. Jalal is winning point while rest of people in Harem are her competitor in race getting hold on winning point first mean rewarded by power fame and love).

"Either pull the one back you think you might taste defeat by", or work hard pull yourself high enough to leave none on you way to win"!

(Thinking this Rukaiya dismiss her maids and got on bed to rest she had plan in mind to act on. All she need befitted time to imply her plan with full action).

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(The girls were sharp and quick in move it wasn't easy the men fell many times on ground but luckily the sword didn't fell from their. They didn't even realise how late it's become till they're fighting with each other. Their cloth were sweat soaked and they were tired and panting hard the girls even got injured a bit but didn't back if before they found them noble following every rule of combat then now they knew better not to judge opponent soon. And soon enough watching them slow down in moved they made quick move to disarm them at same time.befkre they were fighting in circle not letting the girls have easy access to backstab them but while fighting the girls divide them in corners of arena individually stretgist in combat. Expect Abdul the two of them were now lying on ground with their sword far from there reach lying on ground as well).

"We won", do you admit you're defeated"!

(Getting up from ground dusting their back they move to take their sword. But stopped cause of sword pointing at their neck they look at girls then spoke firmly in curiousity).

What you want"!

Let princess come empress her highness Jodha bai allowed in arena for practice"!

We can't do that it's his majesty's order"!

You are dear to him thus you can't be completely helpless in this matter"!

(Saying this they walked out of arena without even giving introduction to who they are. But they knew they're attender of Jodha as it was so oblivious by their attire their way of seeking something for her. They knew she didn't ask for it but they're doing this to make her happy just like they do in matter of him in case there is something important but unnecessary for him to be involved even though without him saying they do it on own. Looking at each other they took their weapons and walked out of arena thinking ways to make Jalal agree to their wish. It was matter of their image already they lost to them if they failed to have him agree they won't be able to look at themselves and be confident enough to take important decision and act on them).

You think it will be any help to us"!

"I don't know Lalita but by risking our neck ", if we can ensure one good thing for her than it's all worth"!

"Even though I doubt it but I hope they somehow succeed in making him agree"! Cause she won't beg him to let her allow for this"!

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(Pulling covers over herself Jodha stirred in sleep and open her eyes slowly watching how entire Room shower by Sunlight she heard birds chirping sound but she wanted to sleep more thus closing her eyes she moved in ,but as soon she moved she sense someone hot breath fanning on her face timidly opening her eyes and flinch loudly gasping for air screaming loudly).

"What kind of nightmare is it"! Let go of me"!

" quite women stop yelling and squirming", go back to sleep"!

(Speaking firmly he turned his head away while his right arm held her waist more firmly pulling her close to cuddle and sleep calmly. No matter how warm and pleasing it was she was to distress to the idea of being with him to consider sleeping further hence she started struggling more firecly).

No "..let go of me"! Leave I said "! How on earth I ended up on bed"?

"Stop women be at peace", I ain't going to do anything", just sleep for now"!

(He spoke this time bit sternly making her freaked out more and her struggle was no where to stop anymore and eventually he found his grip on her loosening thus he twisted on bed and re-held her. By getting on top of her then in angry look he growled on her face).

" what part of the word "Stop ", you don't understand"? I told you to stop struggling didn't I"?

"The same part of word "No " you don't understand"! "You got me on bed without caring about my privacy"!

"Why I should bother about it", the last time I checked I made you mine by marrying before God ,World and everyone we held dear", you're my wife don't forget that not only I have right to got you on my bed" I have right to practice my right as husband on you"!

"Not only you as husband"! but even I have right as wife", but there is thing called consent which deserve respect"! Till you don't get this don't try to be near me"! Cause the day you would do", you won't need to try u will be near you already"!

(Jalal was fully awake by now he listen her words and looking at her, without saying anything not getting back anything to say he release her by stepping down from her and bed. Making her hestitate first but then she got down from bed and started to walk out of sleeping room. He didn't stopped her nor she made move to ask him about leaving. Whereas Jalal become thoughtful did she just gave me way to woo her, did she just pointed out their can be us"? not only me and she but we together as Us"? Faith, Understanding , respect and love important but complicated for me to act on how I can trust her"? to love me when I gave her no reason to do so"! How I can understand her "? when the only thing she do is to disobey me just to prove I can't control her"! How I can respect her when she don't respect me my wish my view my emotion", and love what's love "? enjoying the company you're with? Or losing control over your action for person you think you love"? a feeling of strong or constant affection for a person , but presently the only thing I feel is strong sexual desire for her "! I want to control her own her in every way possible whenever however I wish. Then how it can be term as love she seem a drug which I am addicted of. If I an sinner she is one hell beautiful sin of mine , Before the world outside my equal , between us inside as inferior it's complicated yet this how he want things to go around).

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(Finding a new Knight at her service all clad in armour well armed Jodha wasn't to surprise what surprising was about him was his face which was half secure by cloth she saw deep Burn scar which was peaking from cloth working as veil at bottom of eyes. She wasn't sure with her curiousity she wish to see his face full enough, to hear a glorifying story of war she wasn't even aware she is making the knight squirm under her gaze. Watching the Queen is bit curious cause of new Knight , Bilal Khan clear his throat and got her attention she look at him then back at Knight standing before her).

"Your grace"! He will be at your security service whenever you need to head out of palace"!

( Jodha nodded and continue walking back to the garden, she found eyes familiar to Ayaz Beg as well, but she didn't said maybe both are brother. She didn't knew why it's bothering her to have another knight at her security. Being princess she had many surrounding her on one or other way everywhere every way, then why now it's making her feel suffocated is that cause she knew more then providing her security it's to keep eye on her move).

"He is really controlling me and I am unable to do anything"!

"Did you did something your highness"?

"Yes I mean to ask why I need him when I am forbidden to go out of palace"!

"Forgive me for delaying in informing you, that you're allow to visit the Goddess Ambe"!

(Listening this a smile appeared on her face immediately and even though he face was well hidden by the veil on face but her twinkling eyes were expressing her delight regarding the information. Even her maid cum friends were happy as well. But Jodha even after getting happy by information become thoughtful. What's the intention behind this granted permission "? admit she talk about it with Dowger Queen still she knew it's won't be validable unless the emperor himself grant her permission).

What are you thinking Jodha"?

"Nothing important "! go make the arrangements of Temple Visit"!

(Not sure about her sudden change on mood the maids nodded and went to make arrangements of her visit to temple. Why I am fretting over permission being granted for temple visit, it was one of my condition for being allowed to practice my religion freely. If he won't allowed me for this then it will be like backing from promise he made. Happy by thought she get something in her way Jodha didn't made attempts to cross check the information if being allowed).

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"Sorry for two days delayed in update"! 😒

And I ain't sure I may update next one soon 😒

Cause instead of getting well my health is getting more down this in advance I apologize once more.

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