kunan & munal SS: thu mujhe, mein tujhe

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Munal and kunan ss

Hi guys this is my another story on mounal and kunan

This is based on movie..and im writing this solely becz of jasmine…she asked me many times to write this story on munal and kunan

There will be two versions..it is also suggestion by jasmine only

Im not going to reveal the movie..after reading im sure u guys can easily guess it..bt I promise I wont copy paste movie as it is..i vl try to add my own charm

So let’s jump into charter sketch

Kunal: rockstar… handsome and care freeguy, doesn’t believe in love and marriage.. bt he believes friendship..Lets c how his life turns when two girls enter into his life

Mouli: a care free and independent girl, she is stylish and not a typical next door girl..and also she doesn’t believe in love, but believed that friendship with guys r better than girls until she met her best friend nandu

Nandini: she is simple, beautiful and naïve girl, she believed love and marriage bt not now becz of some reasons

Rajdeep( Rd) : nandini husband

Intro:

A beautiful girl waiting for some one restlessly..she is looking at her watch again n again..its almost 8 now…her eyes r welled up..her lips r trembling..her body is shivering

wr r u rajdeep ji..u told that u vl b back in half an hr.its almost 3 hrs..im waiting on this road..i even don’t know how to come to home ..u didn’t tell our address also to me…I didn’t have phone and ur number too.in this big streets of London..how can I search fr u…im still waiting fr u with hope..y u left me like..hope nothing happened to u..ho god plz take care of rajdeep ji…I cant live with out him..i hope he didn’t face any danger

she remembered how her marriage happened grandly with rajdeep..how happy she was..how she landed in London yesterday itself..today how she came to shopping along with her husband..and how he got call and left in hurry by saying he vl be back in 30 mins

she is wondering wat to do now

she is feeling hungry as she didn’t eat anything from mrng

herself: oh god wat to do now…wr I have to go..how can I reach rajdeep ji..wr should I say…plz show me the way god

at that time she saw some guys r looking her with bad intention..they r saying some bad words

and tried to come near her

she started running from there to save herself..guys too chased her..bt some how she escaped

she took deep breath

at that time she heard a person speaking with another through phone

person: wat..u r not coming to this shift? How can u keep sudden leave..i can understand ur problem..bt wat can I give answer to customers ..they need entertainment..right now hw can I bring singer all of sudden

ok If u r not coming ..dont come from tmrw too..ur not required for me anymore

by saying this he kept phone seriously

herself: if I go n ask him..he may give chance..so that I vl get some money with that I can eat anything.and can search fr my house

girl went to that man who is tensed situation

sir if u r ok..can I get chance to sing

that guy face blossomed

guy: who r u?

girl: sir my name is nandini. im singer.i cant say anything more..bt I need money on urgent basis

guy: ok first sing a song..so that I can say..and I also require singer on urgent basis..if I like ur singing..i vl give as much u want

nandu started singing

he really impressed

guy: tq so much..u came at right time to help me

nandu smiled

nandu went inside

its restaurant cum bar

its very new fr her

bt she had no alternative

already customers r waiting fr singer

she took deep breath

and went to stage

she closed her eyes and

she started singing

(Apne karam ki kar adaayein

Yaara, Yaaraa… yaara!

Mujhko iraade de

Kasamein de, waade de

Meri duaaon ke ishaaron ko sahaare de

Dil ko thikaane de

Naye bahaane de

Khaabon ki baarishon ko

Mausam ke paimane de

Apne karam ki kar adaayein

Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein

Sun raha hai naa tu

Ro raha hun main

Sun raha hai naa tu

Kyun ro raha hun main (x2)

( she remembered her mrg with rd, she remembered with hw much hope sheentered into married life)

She got tears when she remembered when guystried to misbehave with her and hw she escaped frm them)


Manzilein ruswa hain

Khoya hai raasta

Aaye le jaaye

Itni si iltejaa

Ye meri zamanat hai

Tu meri amaanat hai haan…

Apne karam ki kar adayein

Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein

Sun raha hai naa tu

Ro raha hoon main

Sun raha hai naa tu

Kyun ro raha hun main

she completed her singing and came out of it with huge round of applauds

she opened her eyes and smiled

all wished her best

the guy who gave this opportunity( owner of restaurant) once again thanked her and gave her cash

he also told her have dinner in this restaurant itself

he also asked her to continue as singer in this restaurant itself

nandu decided to work here until she find rd

nandu ordered food

and started eating

she completed her food

and while coming out

she saw a girl who is fighting with a guy in parking space

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Posted: 6 years ago
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part 2:

she found girl is in full in hangover mode

that guy is fighting with her fr dashing his car by coming in wrong way

nandu rushed to them

she some how managed to stop the fight

and requested the guy to leave the issue as girl is not in conscious stage

guy left by mumbling something

girl abt to fall

nandu held her

girl laughed sheepishly: thaaannnnkkkk uuuu beauuutiiiifuuuulll

she said in hangover mode

nandu understood she is not in situation to drive

nandu made her sit in the car

girl handbag fell down

and her visiting cards fell down from purse

nandu asked watchman of restaurant about address

he told its near by only

and also gave detailed view of route

nandu took driver seat

she leart driving in her clz days from her friend

that helped her

while driving girl is buck bucking…caressing nandu by saying ur gooooddd…prettttyyyy..beeeuutyyfulll

nandu smiled by seeing her antics

she reached girls house as per address

she got down n helped girl to come out

she took her to entrance..bt door is locked

nandu: its locked…parents r not there in house?

Girl: no mom…..no daaaddddd….all lllllleeeefffft me n staying upppp…she said looking into sky with tears

Nandu felt bad

Nandu; then keys…

Nandu remembered something

She searched in girl purse

She found keys

Nandu opened keys

She took girl inside

She made her sleep

When she abt to go

Girl hold her

Girl; don’t leave meeeeee and go pleaseeeeeee

Nandu smiled

She sat beside her n caressed her hair

She thought abt rd: im missing u raj deepji..i love u so much…I hope I vl get back to u soon..

She slept by sitting beside her

Next day morning

Nandu woke up

She saw girl who is sleeping like kid with cute smile

She too got smile

She went n freshen up

She opened her purse fr something and found letter

She opened it and started reading

Nandini…I know u vl search me..thats y I wrote this letter and kept in ur bag before itself,…I hope after seeing this letter..u vl stop keeping hopes on me..matter is I don’t love u..i married u becz of my parents insistence …bt I cant stay with u..i hope u understand me…and plz don’t put me in difficult situation by coming back to me

From rajdeep

Nandu got tears

She cried a lot

Atlast after so many conflicts btw her heart and mind..she decided not to cry fr that man

meanwhile

Girl woke up

And shouted

Girl: oh god my head is paining…please anyone give me coffee

Nandu heard this

She got up

She went to girl

And forwarded glass

Girl drank it without opening eyes

Girl: yuck…wats this

Nandu: nimbu pani..helps to get out from hangover

Girl saw nandu

Girl: who r u?

Wait wait

She remembered before day scene

Girl: omg u only na brought me to home

Nandu nodded yes

Girl: tq dude

She said and hugged nandu

Girl forwarded her hand: by the way my name is mouli srivatsav

Nandu : my name is nandini

Mouli: y u r looking so dull

Nandini: nothing like that..im fine

Mouli: really…ok lets talk abt that later..before that I vl go n freshup..by the way will u do one thing

Nandu: wat?

Mouli: will u prepare coffee fr me

Nandu: ok

Nandu went to prepare coffee

Mouli came after freshing up

Nandu gave coffee too mouli

Mouli tasted it: wow osum…

Nandu: ok mouli ..im going

Mouli: where?

Nandu: to my house

Mouli smiled

Mouli: to the place where ur husband told not to come?

Nandu shocked

Mouli shown the letter which she found at hall

Nandu: woh mouli

Mouli: don’t stammer much…I understood full story…just leave abt that guy…u stay here itself only

Nandu: mouli how can i

Mouli: oyy hello….dont think im allowing u stay here freely…u can stay here only on one condition

Nandu confused

Nandu: condition?

Mouli:ha... whenever I fall in restaurant becz of hangover…u should bring me home

Nandu smiled

Mouli forwarded hand: friend

Nandu too joined hands

Mouli: u know wat actually I don’t like friendship with girl..bt u r lucky yar…u stole mouli heart and became her friend

Nandu smiled

Mouli: uff that smile…im only finding difficult with ur smile..dont know wat will happen to guys..hey nw itself I remembered..tmrw im going to my fried bday party ..lets go n njy

Nandu: no mouli..i don’t like

Mouli: ur coming that’s it…arey I need ur company

Nandu: ok will come

Next day

Nandu and mouli went to party

Mouli enjoying the party

Nandu stood at corner

Mouli came to her

She pulled nandini and started dancing along with her

Nandu felt difficult first

Bt she too later enjoyed

While dancing she abt to fall as some one pushed her while dancing

Some strong hands helped from falling down

Nandu looked at person

That guy already lost in her

They shared an eye lock

Mouli shouted

Mouli: kunal malhotra

Both nandu and kunal came out of world

Mouli jumped with joy

Mouli: nandu..he is kunalmalhotra..rockstar in London

Im dying to meet him

Nandu gave awkward smile

Kunal is just looking at nandu

He is not hearing mouli blabbering

Mouli : mr kunal im mouli srivatsav..die hard fan of u

Kunal smiled

Mouli: and she is nandu.

Kunal: I know..she is good singer

Mouli shocked at the same time nandu too

Mouli: how u know..even I don’t know that

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome superb fabulous fantastic lovely updates dear

Thanks for pm

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Posted: 6 years ago
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poor nandini.where did rajdeep go all of a sudden?whose call was that?luckily nandini escaped from those guys.happy that the restaurant owner liked her singing n appointed her.I love this song

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharda_123

Awesome superb fabulous fantastic lovely updates dear

Thanks for pm

tq so much dear❤️

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

poor nandini.where did rajdeep go all of a sudden?whose call was that?luckily nandini escaped from those guys.happy that the restaurant owner liked her singing n appointed her.I love this song

tq jasmine❤️

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Posted: 6 years ago
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nandini saving the drunk mauli...taking her home n taking care of her was sweet.shocking that rajdeep left nandini as he doesn't love her.still confused whose call was it. does rajdeep have any gf? why does mauli dislike female friends? mauli nandini becoming friends was sweet.happy that mauli let nandini stay in her house.kunal catching nandini before she fell down n eye lock was romantic. though mauli was talking his eyes were on nandini.wonder whether he has already fallen for nandini or will he fall for mauli.guess kunal was there in the restaurant when nandini was singing

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Posted: 5 years ago
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@Vardhini ..awesome start ..dear ..👌

Nandu and Mauli met and how !! Rajdeep is so evil ..

Hmm so Kunal know Nandu is a singer 😉..he must have heard her song ..good ..👍

For this story too without even guessing the name of movie..I can say ..it will have its own charm..👌💖

Keep going..👍

Thanks girl pm @Jas dear.😊

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Nice character sketch. Nandini believed in love and marriage. She was happy after marrying Rajdeep. Poor Nandini. She waited for Rajdeep but he didn't turn up. Nandini impressed the hotel owner with her song and got good amount of money.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Part 2

Sad that Nandini was dumped by Rajdeep. Glad that she impressed Mouli with her coffee.

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