(Upd- 21/2) FF// Prescribed Insanity, Chapter 14, Pg. 89 - Page 7

Originally posted by: just4coll

I LOVE this story so far. Has me grinning like a madwoman!

Payal's day was so messed up, and yet so plausible. I never run out of respect for teachers, esp ones that teach lil ones, scratch that, all teachers. Love how it puts Khushi's day in perspective.

And the six foot tall pole. That's a step up from granite pile isn't it. I laughed while reading it, and now I'm smiling just thinking of it. So both Arnav and Khushi would be happy if they never saw each other again, to the extent of inventing excuses to avoid the other. But there is no escape for them, is there? Ghoom phir ke ek dusre ke samne hi aana hai...

Nani totally cracked me up. The banter in Raizada house was such fun. And both families are having mutton for dinner - coincidence much?

Glad you're enjoying <3

@bold I honestly feel like I'm headed in the exact same direction with this one 😆

Originally posted by: rafiki84

OMG OMG OMG SC!!!!!!! This is hilarious 🤣

I can't wait for them to eat mutton stew together on Sunday and talk about how delicious it is 😆

I don't want to laugh at your enamel woes but this is just too good 😆

Update soon! ❤️

Glad to know hon. ❤️

Middle ground would be to pray that my enamel woes get better and Arnav's worse 😆

Originally posted by: cheers2all

🤣

This ☝ is live footage of me after reading the two updates.

Your writing has me in splits, Sabi. Every.single.time. This one was no different.

Arnav's hovering over Khushi & Anjali was typical of what is expected of ASR. If not for Anjali, I am sure Khushi would have given into the temptation and actually used the sledge hammer.

Loved the dinner table discussion at both, Raizada & Gupta family. Both are having mutton stew, the youngest in both families have "work" on Sunday night and both of them don't want to see the other. Can I get a seat at the Raizada table for Sunday dinner? I, for once 😉, do not want to miss the spectacle.

Special shout out to Payal, for calling a horrendous day, okay-ish 😆

P.S. - I have a feeling the reason Arnav Singh Raizada doesn't want to see a dentist because he is scaild and not because he is inchane. Maybe he needs to be a little blave and let Khushi take a look at his tooth

Live footage of me after having read your comment -> 😃

Originally posted by: v5a1s6

Yay another hilarious ride you take us on!

I am thoroughly enjoying the humorous sarcasm generously thrown in this story.

Hope your dental woes go away soon but leave you with ample inspiration to continue writing :)

Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: TwilightStar_JP

Oh my god! Chapter One was such a delight! Only you can come up with such things!

Whatt lovely update! Start to finish there was not a single dull moment. Punch lines over punch lines. You must try stand up comedy man. Your writing is next level. Such smooth transitions! Whatte gift!

Only you can make such a mundane dentist ordeal such a fun event. Off to chapter 2.

Cheers

*Edited*

Chapter 2 was next level! Short though :P Sunday come soon!

The punch lines just got better here. Especially the I'll apologize to a lamb I see one the next time and Coal stage diamond formation. Beautiful man! Just too good.

They are going to have mutton stew twice in the same week?

Sunday is going to be funday! Can't wait.

Cheers

Thank you hon. You're too kind ❤️ Can imagine myself on a stage, collecting tomatoes and making sauce out of them to eat with chips.

Originally posted by: sharmeenb

Ha ha ha ! What a riot. Cant wait to read more. I will be thinking of this when i visit the dentist next, who is a goodlooking male!, by the way.

If you have a good-looking male dentist, you might want to be careful about corrupting your head with this story 😆

Originally posted by: Arilip

Aching tooth n mutton stew awesome combo to torture anyone 😈😈😈😈😈this is really epic.....I have read your stories many times but after you left the forum.... It's wonderful to interact with the author who made my stomach ache so many times 😀

That's lovely to know! <3

Originally posted by: ihtas411

Ha ha I cant stop laughing and my husband is looking at me as if I have lost it.

Mutton stew.

Originally posted by: crazyweird

Welcome back

Loved the updates- my son was wondering why mom is grinning looking at the phone...

Can you pack me some of that mutton stew too please.... 😋

Originally posted by: rethkumar

your sense of humour shoots off the roof yaar....it took me 10 mins to calm down n write this comment...lov u

You guys 🤗

Oh i wish but unfortunately his wife is his assistant and keeps a close watch ! 😒

Originally posted by: saucechips

Thank you hon. You're too kind ❤️ Can imagine myself on a stage, collecting tomatoes and making sauce out of them to eat with chips.

Ha ha ha. There you go, another epic one! I'm serious now! 💃💃💃