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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: jannatsara

Sorry for late commenting....& eagerly waiting for next update...hope we will see a great bonding between Rishab and naira and plz write about Kartik and vedika too...

Kartik aur vedika ko rehne do na abhi 😂😂😂 show mein kun dikhae dete hain kya🤪

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 3



Rishab- Hi

Naira was then expecting the next question to be how are you?? How come you are alive? How could you do this ..this and that but to her surprise

Rishab said

Tumhe pani itna pasand hai?

Yes...Rishab was a psychiatrist and he know for a fact that Naira was in depression and it seemed severe so he directly went for a positive question than what is obvious..

Naira gave a questioning look to him

Rishab- yese kya dekh rahi ho.. i know staying around water is something you have always liked but itna pasand hai...!!kya pasand hai tumhe iske bareme!!?

Naira was amazed that he was talking something out of the situation why wasnt he asking questions related to the situation like everyone does..? Why wasnt he blaming her?? And why was he so off topic?? For some moment she was asking herself rather than someone else..

Rishab- itna difficult sawal tha kya.. answer nahi dena.. marking nahi horahi yaha pe.. bas yesehi pucha..tum pehle bhi aati thi iss lake pe jab mein tumhe bhau nahi deta tha.. he said wid a smirk..

It was all so awkward for Naira yaha pe she is in her most vunerable state and Rishab pata nahi konsi duniya se aaya tha that he was talking rubbish in this situation.. she wanted to snap him rightaway but to her own amazement she replied

Haan.. it gives me peace.. i like how water has its own life.. said that and went silent again..

Why didnt she snap🙄

Rishab smiled seeing his trick work🤓

Rishab- thats nice..so deep waah he said playfully

Rishab knew Naira had the tendency to run away from the situation and she regreted doing that.. right now too she wanted to just escape from her life but that wasnt possible..


Things wents on but then Naira was spending more time with Rishab now.. they would usually spend time talking and that too alot like they wont stop.. its was just few weeks but Naira was so different.. wierdly different.. bhabi maa and devyaani wouldnot do much and just let the situation be as it is Naksh on other hand was happy that Naira was moving on in life and he was helping them with whatever possible be it arranging dance class or martial arts training for Naira.. But kirti was not happy.. she was happy that Naira was finally opening up and things were getting better there but what about who was waiting for her back in India?? Does he deserve that?? She knew what a perfect situation it was kartik was now married.. kairav was with his father like he wanted.. Naira too was moving on in life.. but is it that simple?? Is it the reality?? Are all of them happy?? Is kairav happy?? No he is not.. kirti knew that kairav was diagnosed for depression and he had given up on speaking.. it was way too much for a 5 year old to handle.. kartik was trying so hard to reach Naira.. he was shocked that how Naira had cut all ties with their son.. how could she do that?? How was that even possible??There when she was all the time ranting that their son was her life and now she was not even talking to him despite knowing his condition.. but kartik was compelled agar uske baas mein hota toh usi waqt Cape town jata aur kairav k liye Naira ko ghasitke ya uthale le aata magar kairav was too weak aur woh sirf kartik ko apne paas aane deta aur kisi se khana tak nahi khata.. all he could do was call people in Cape town but waha se sirf yahi jawab aata ki Naira ko kisi se baat nahi karni..

It was two months now.. kairav ki halat din par din khisakti ja rahi thi.. aur kartik kuch nahi kar paraha tha..

Swarna would call Naira too but would never be able to reach her.. and her motherly instinct would say that something was not right..

Kartik was suspecting too that something was not right Naira could never ever ignore Kairav that too when he was sick.. kartik would occasionally ask devyani ki woh thik hai na.. kuch huwa toh nahi.. and devyani would go silent for a while and would reply haan woh theek hai..

Bhabhi maa had refused to talk to kartik so most of the time either it was kirti or Naksh he could reach but then again nothing would come out of kirtis mouth the only thing she would say ki kairav ka khayal rakh.. Naira theek hai..

Agar Naira theek hai toh woh baat kyun nahi kar rahi.. usse kairav ki bilkul chinta nahi..

Naksh snapped phone from kirti’s hand and said

Kairav ab tumhari jummedari hai.. tumhe toh har cheez mein sirf Naira ko blame karna hota hai.. Naira ne 5 saal uska khayal rakha.. aur tum 5 mahine nahi huwe firse Naira ko padi nahi.. Naira ne ye kiya.. woh kiya.. aare chain se jine do meri behen ko.. aab woh kisi se rishta nahi rakhna chahti.. samajhte kyun nahi tum log.. tum aur tumhari puri family itni selfish hain na pehle maa ko bacche se alag kardiya.. pata nahi kya kya ilzaam lagaye aur aba 2 mahine nahi huwe firse Naira chaiye.. meri behen insaan hai koi lakdi ki gudiya nahi samjhe.. woh kisi se baat nahi karna chahti.. toh woh nahi karegi.. Naksh was super very angry

From the other side a choking voice of Kartik came

Kartik- kairav.. bohot bimar hai Naksh.. woh uski maaa ka intezaar kar raha hai..khana bhi nahi khata theek se sota bhi nahi.. baat karna tak band kardiya hai..please Naksh ek baar Naira se baat karwado.. Please bhai.. kairav k liye..


Naksh wasnt heartless and kairav wasnot someone he would ever try to hurt but something was not in his hand.. an unexplainable thing had happened and he also couldnt do much


Naksh- Naira kairav ko tumhare bharose chod k aayi ki kartik.. ye tum jante ho.. she trusted you with her soul her son..aur ab woh tumhari jimmedari hai.. thats all i can say..

Naksh cut the call..


Kirti was super upset with Naksh.. he has always been an obsessively over protective brother but how could he ignore kairav’s health..

kirti- aap bohot selfish hain Naksh.. bohot

Kirti went away from Naksh not being able to tolerate..


Like Swarna and kartik.. kirti too was suspicious about Nairas sudden change.. naira was now mostly in the out house with Naitik and if not there then with Rishab.. she was all the time with Rishab and it was wierd how in 2 mnths they were so close.. ghar pe woh zyaada aati nahi thi and kirti krish mein bg rehti thi so zyada outhouse jaa nahi paati.. Naitik was also in outhouse and last time when she visited them there was such drastic improvement in Naitik.. he wa reacting to people talking to him.. smiling ocasionally.. things were improving for him.. but all knew ...all Naitik ever wanted was his princess around..

But kirti did notice Naira a bit wierd.. she was happy and bright.. it wasnt a bad thing but for a mother who was here leaving her sick child in india it wasnot normal way to be..

But Naksh would always push kirti way from Nairas surrounding.. devyani and bhabi maa would go silent ever if kirti brought Naira’s wierd behaviour up..

They were all behaving as if they were hiding something..


Precap: swarna in Cape town🤫

I want more more more comments plz.. your response gives me encourGemnt to skip the epi and stay in my imaginary world.. 🥰

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Raxya

Kartik aur vedika ko rehne do na abhi 😂😂😂 show mein kun dikhae dete hain kya🤪

Next part will be more on kartik and vedika👍🏻

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Do u know what did I do after coming back from coaching??? Firstly I read ur story...& listen mam u have to update Ur other stories too..aur naa😠😠

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: jannatsara

Do u know what did I do after coming back from coaching??? Firstly I read ur story...& listen mam u have to update Ur other stories too..aur naa😠😠

Thanx for being so consistent.. but na mere sare sinking parts mein ek hi concept hai bass diff situations hai.. aap bolo konsi update karu mein aaj kardungi☺️ Just for u😍🥰

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Love all of your stories but this one a little more because I want the custody track to be over as soon as possible. I wouldn't mind if they would skip, show a 1 month leap or something.

I like that you introduced a friend for naira. She really does need someone to boost her and explore her side of the story. I feel like the CVs sometimes forget that naira is the protagonist and Kartik is her love interest. They make her strong or submissive according to their own needs and requirements.

Keep updating and be strong! Your imaginary world looks much better than what is being portrayed onscreen.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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This is getting so interesting!! Please do keep updating your other sinking stories too... Loved this part too... Eager to know what happened to naira!

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Raxya

Thanx for being so consistent.. but na mere sare sinking parts mein ek hi concept hai bass diff situations hai.. aap bolo konsi update karu mein aaj kardungi☺️ Just for u😍🥰

sinking another part.. that's one where kartik asked naira to go..then not only naira but also kairav left d goenka house...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hi first of all wonderful update and a great concept this is what I wantad from the serial but as always cvs won't care for viewers all they wanted was trp which also decreasing along with kiara, s charm plz update soon once again a great story... 👍👍👍😊😊😊👌👌👌

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: jannatsara

sinking another part.. that's one where kartik asked naira to go..then not only naira but also kairav left d goenka house...

Done... check karlo and cmnt karo ki kaisa laga🥰

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