This is your first work that am reading !! Read it in one go !! This short story was really interesting and had me on the edge till the last line !! Poor Maan, a product of bad parenting, but lucky enough to have a chance of redemption on right time !! Geet is the symbol of true live !! She put up with him in the hardest of times, lost her baby, but still loved and stayed put with him !! Very nice SS!!
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