Very neatly written, I really got visuals in front of ne. I imagined everything. Kalyani night dress, she coming from balcony, their bed everything. It was written with such a clarity that I felt like watching it in front of my eyes.
Very neatly written, I really got visuals in front of ne. I imagined everything. Kalyani night dress, she coming from balcony, their bed everything. It was written with such a clarity that I felt like watching it in front of my eyes.
Beautifully written'
You depicted each and every emotions of KalMa
Liked the way they comforted each other
Loved it totally
Amazing
Awesome
Fantastic
beautiful os
loved it
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