Originally posted by: Saji79
Hi Sur,
Pehle toh a bada wala thank you and hug π€for such a beautiful and long update. It takes time to think and put it in such a beautiful way and as readers we understand the delay in update. Thank you for all your efforts.
Hey Sajida...I tried responding to you a few days back but due to some stupid reason IF was not allowing me to do so citing it doesn't allow slangs...I kept checking n rechecking to identify where did I use such a word, couldn't find it...so here I am...typing a fresh response...:) Hope this one goes through!
Thank you so much for your patience and love for this story dear! It means a lot to me that my readers are so kind and loving! π€
Pehle toh Noopor is falling in love with Sameer, yeh padha kar dhukh bhi hota hai aur gussa bhi aata hai. Jahan Naina ko hoan chahiye yeh wahan haiπ.
That's true...Naina ko to fir bhi apni jagah mil jayegi...lekin Noopur ko taqleef zarur hogi.
You have unwrapped some part of her struggle as a single mother. It must have been so tough for her. Abhi Arvind ka kya kisaa hai yeh baki hai. Many things are still hidden. I loved the way you are progressing.
Thank you dear! I'm glad you liked the excerpts here. Yes, there are still things waiting to be unfurled.
I liked how you have intertwined the past, Karwa Chauth and somewhere God has helped her and has answered her prayers though she may not be aware. Sameer ke haathoun se hi pani piya usne aisa dekha jayein toh aur Noopor ko Deepika ne.. bura mat mano I was happy. DDLG wala scene Sameer Naina ke saath hota toh mast hota.. Naina gir jati aur Sameer usko pani pilata..
Haha...you know what? I had the DDLJ scene in mind...that was one of the epic moments of the film...but then I decided it should be a bit subtle here considering their love remains unconfessed till now. I'm happy you enjoyed the whole Karwa Chauth sequence.
Ab khwaishoun par kiska zor hai.. Naina ke liye bahut bura lag raha hai .
True dear! But as they say, all's well that ends well!
Sameer and Diya bond loved it..
Happy to hear that dear!
Ab chapter ka naam hi aapne Man Proposes God disposes rakh diya .. . but I am confused was it with Noopor or Naina.. the title.. Naina ki toh sab cheeze acche se huvi and nothing shared with Noopor.
It was for both dear- Noopur intended to fast for Sameer, but God had other plans. As for Naina, she once willed herself to forget Sameer, to hate him, but destiny did not let her do so. Her concern and love for him overpowered her own heartbreak and she kept the fast for him.
Thoda halka sa romance aakhoun aakhoun mein hi .. accha laga. As usual ek sher.
Thanks dear...thoda romance to banta hai na! :P
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Wow!! As usual, another fantastic sher from you! β€οΈ
Waiting eagerly for next update
Love
Sajida
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