Hi Sur,
Pehle toh a bada wala thank you and hug 🤗for such a beautiful and long update. It takes time to think and put it in such a beautiful way and as readers we understand the delay in update. Thank you for all your efforts.
Pehle toh Noopor is falling in love with Sameer, yeh padha kar dhukh bhi hota hai aur gussa bhi aata hai. Jahan Naina ko hoan chahiye yeh wahan hai💔.
You have unwrapped some part of her struggle as a single mother. It must have been so tough for her. Abhi Arvind ka kya kisaa hai yeh baki hai. Many things are still hidden. I loved the way you are progressing.
I liked how you have intertwined the past, Karwa Chauth and somewhere God has helped her and has answered her prayers though she may not be aware. Sameer ke haathoun se hi pani piya usne aisa dekha jayein toh aur Noopor ko Deepika ne.. bura mat mano I was happy. DDLG wala scene Sameer Naina ke saath hota toh mast hota.. Naina gir jati aur Sameer usko pani pilata..
Ab khwaishoun par kiska zor hai.. Naina ke liye bahut bura lag raha hai .
Sameer and Diya bond loved it..
Ab chapter ka naam hi aapne Man Proposes God disposes rakh diya .. . but I am confused was it with Noopor or Naina.. the title.. Naina ki toh sab cheeze acche se huvi and nothing shared with Noopor.
Thoda halka sa romance aakhoun aakhoun mein hi .. accha laga. As usual ek sher.
Milne ki Umeed toh nahi hai Tujh se
Lekin Kese Keh doon Ki Intezaar Nahi hai Tera
Waiting eagerly for next update
Love
Sajida
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