Read the update! I liked it, however, the pace of the story quickened a lot in this update, in the last ones one small scene was elaborated and here it's night to morning, and they don't talk much and still he's like super attracted to her and she means something to him. Attraction at first sight to a beautiful woman is justifiable, but I am not relating to this feeling towards her after like a night. You have written it beautifully but I am not able to relate. Maybe it'll get clearer in a few updates. Or, coz they are showing something unjustifiable in the show as well, that's rubbing off here. Loads of love!
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