Added Chapter 23: All The King's Men: PreRish - Page 90 - Page 34

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Posted: 5 years ago

Tubby never fails to amuse me with his adorable antics.

Loved this update! ❤️

Prerna's apprehension and anxiety was so well expressed and relatable to a huge extent. Loved that instagram influencer bit and RB's reaction to it. 😆

It's adorable how he takes up the role of a mentor and guides her through those anxious times. The kitchen scene that followed was equally endearing with the father-daughter duo planning a celebratory dinner for Prerna.

However, my favourite part was the one that flawlessly depicted Prerna's growing attraction towards him. I could picture RB in gym and Prerna staring at him in a lecherous manner. 😆 She brought in Paresh Rawal to calm her nerves. 🤪

Prerna should seriously approach the man. It's a sin to live a nun's life with someone like RB. 😆

Lastly, I thought a certain someone is gone forever. Frankly it was such a good riddance. 😆


P.S. If you're planning to send updates via PMs, don't forget to include me. :)

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Posted: 5 years ago

Fantastic update sohaa! 👏 You perfectly potrayed fluff , humor and suspence in one chapter. Love Rishbah's king-ish attitude,it suits him perfectly like a second skin. And absolutely love the way you potray prerna's chara, less dumber and more intelligent compared to the show! 👍🏼 i wonder how much prerna will resist her husband's hot-bod! ☺️ very excited for the upcoming chapters. Please just post here if possible! 🤗

-Yusra.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Perfect update 👍🏼

Why is Anu back? He should stay in London for good 😆

Prerna thinks her husband is handsome 😉

Thank you for the update 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago

Interesting update 👏

Anurag is back, let's see how it will affect PreRish's relationship

Prerna is getting attracted to Rishabh's hot body🔥

Rishabh & Kuki's surprise for Prerna was beautiful

The gym moment of PreRish was hilarious 😆

Waiting for next

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Posted: 5 years ago

I’m not going to get my masters, I’m not going to get a job. Oh god, I’ll have to become an Instagram influencer!

Wait. This is exactly my line of thought!!!

Okay let me say that celebratory dinner, flowers and just that unadulterated warmness made me want to steal Bajaj so I could spend my good days with him... ahem before I get carried away

So I was totally on board with Prerna and could visualize Karan and was drooling over it but why did you mention Paresh Rawal woman?!?! That doused all the thirst away instantly... 😳😂

Ooooh. The king is ready for his next pounce. I’m hooked.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Oh hell, I laughed so hard in this update. Humor was on point, especially the gym part. It's impossible to not be flushed when your eyes set on a perfectly sculpted body & I am glad Prerna acted like any normal girl of her age would-be flushed, mumble.

Great update again. Waiting for next. Update.

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Posted: 5 years ago

First of all....add me to your PM list immediately if you are going to update through PM only...I don't want to miss a single update,OK?If you forget me I'll come and haunt you in this thread😈...

Coming to the update....simply fantastic....there are so many angles....the story twisted through so many directions but always on the right path....towards the inevitable destiny....it's just that destiny is still a bit far right now!!

Let's start from the beginning....Anurag....let me tell you I really appreciate the fact that even after getting so many messages from him...she totally forgot about him subsequently...at least till the duration of this update....I'm content with the fact....I'm glad she's feeling atleast a tiny bit of guilt in not informing about him to RB.....I know a meeting between them is unavoidable....but I want her so mired in the enigma that is Rishabh Bajaj till then that when she finally meets Anurag,she can't think of anything other than RB....Oh I Know you'll have some plan according to your story...I'm just ranting...don't mind me...whatever I say in my comments are my wishes for that particular story....that may or may not come true....I'm perfectly fine with that....so no pressure...😆

Loved the one-on-one between Rishabh and Prerna....his wit always come in to play when they are alone like this...and then there are the family times....absolute best...only next to their romance ofcourse...but that's another point....I love any scenes with Kukki in them....the three of them as a family is a treat to watch.....so naturally the kitchen scene is absolutely sweet...adorable....aww-inducing....the banter of the father-daughter duo is really cute....if Kukki knows how to boost Prerna's emotions then Rishabh knows how to boost her self-esteem....❤️

Ah...RB's birthday is coming....??He deserves some gift from dear wifey,no😈??Please tell your Prerna to arrange something romanticsmiley2....I know my tape gets stuck whenever romance bit is mentioned but what to do.....you are saying the story is more than half way through but still no signs of romance or passion from these two.....he's in 'dreaming about her' stage while she's still stuck at 'ogling him objectively' stage😲....what does a girl do to get some romance in her favourite story,hmm??

I absolutely love her "filter-less bullshit in front of Rishabh" moments🤣...they are hilarious....Oxygen...seriously....she's f**ing talking about oxygen shortage in the world when she has her hot,half-naked husband in front of her??Her brain surely is suffering from oxygen-shortage....there can't be any other reason to miss such a chance!!😳...but there is restlessness on her part... She's effected by him... That's good!!

That was a fantastic scene showing a glimpse of the ruthless business moghul....I really like RB compared to a King...it's such an apt title for him....and that smirk always spells trouble to whomever he's targeting😎....I'm dying to see who's his next target now...😈

I hope this doesn't end up being longer than your update🤣...Waiting for the next masterpiece Sohaa....Have a great time in the meanwhile!!

Edited by esha143 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Every time I see that you've updated, I get butterflies and I save the read for the best time in the day. That's the power of your story and the way you developed the characters. I love your version of Bajaj. The way you portrayed him, that's my dream man right there.

Coming back to the story, I actually thought Anurag was out of the picture. But he's back. I am really looking forward to Prerna's thoughts of him after she meets him this time. And of course, Bajaj's reaction; will he be cool or will the king become a little possessive?

I literally had tears in my eyes while reading that whole kitchen scene. The way Prerna says "its perfect" is feels. I also liked how Tubby wasn't ignored.. cutie pie.

Lastly, snackilicious vs. Paresh Rawal? Hahaha, loved that.
And Prerna rambling, cute!!!

Looking forward to the next update. I see you mentioned PM'ng the next chapters, if you have a list for PM's, will you please add me in?? Thank youuuu

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Posted: 5 years ago

Please update soon 😃

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Posted: 5 years ago

Hi dear

Lovely update. Its awesome. Tattos reminded ksg

Its noce to see Rishab helping her in studies.

Paresh rawal seriously hillarious

Send pm dear


Ty dear


Suma 💕

Edited by sumathiaishu - 5 years ago

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