O RE PIYA #Akshan FF--Part 18 Updated on Page 26 - Page 8

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Posted: 6 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Superb update

Continue soon

Done with next part plz check

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Posted: 6 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Viditian1

This is not fair..why cliffhanger.😭..aur vi bi tb jb akshan scene tha...but it was an awesome uodate..loved it...plz cont soon with akshan romance cont..😃plz❤️

@bold😆 sorry for that

@red- I'm really happy to know u guys are liking it

@purple- updated with some akshan moment

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Posted: 6 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Swati_20

@bold😆 sorry for that

@red- I'm really happy to know u guys are liking it

@purple- updated with some akshan moment

@green..plz aagey se aisa na krna😃

@bold..its soo sweet story..we all are loving it..❤️

@red..it was awesome..akshan scene❤️..but ye dill mange more😛..

Update super soon😃

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Posted: 6 years ago
#74

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ Akshan

Update very soon 😉 wait nahi hota😆😆

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Posted: 6 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Viditian1

@green..plz aagey se aisa na krna😃

@bold..its soo sweet story..we all are loving it..❤️

@red..it was awesome..akshan scene❤️..but ye dill mange more😛..

Update super soon😃

@bold-ji jaroor, there are more on the way

😊

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Posted: 6 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: Akshananju

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ Akshan

Update very soon 😉 wait nahi hota😆😆

Sure try to update tomorrow if possible

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Posted: 6 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Swati_20

Sure try to update tomorrow if possible

🤗all of us will be waiting😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 9

Guddan was standing near the exit gate of college just then her phones ring it was poonam's call

Guddan- hello kaho ho tum

Poonam- book issue kr wala li tumne library se

Guddan- haan baba aur pichle 5 min se gate pr tumhara wait kr rhehai pr tum dikh hi ni rahi ho, aur tumhe pata hao last bus bhi ja chuki hai abtoh hume auto se jana padega jaldi aao varna late ho gayene.

Poonam- guji actually hume ni sirf tumheauto se jana padega

Guddan- Matlab tum kya aj yaha hospital maihi rukne wali ho kya yeh mazak chodo aur jaldi se bahar aao

Poonam- irada toh kuch aur hi mera

Guddan- kya Matlab

Poonam- vo kya hai na main Dr. Angad ke sath hoon, hum ek choti sidate pr aye hai

Guddan- ek min Dr. Angad ke saath toh thik hail kin yen choti sidate kya hoti hai bhai hume bhi toh batao (with a naughty smile)

Poonam- are baba guji ab samjho na plz

Guddan- ab hume kuch samajh ni aa raha tum thoda detail main hisamjha do vase bhi hum besties hai yaar hum se kya chupana

Poonam- ji bilkul hum besties hai pr Dr. Guddan Gupta ap single haiaur hum… khair yen sab chodo aur haan Dr. Angad hi mujhe ghar drop kr denge thotum auto se ghar chali jana pk

Guddan- yes boss aur haan hume apne iss chotu se date ke bare maiupdate krna mat bhulna

Poonam-ok bye

Guddan- bye, hmm ab panda to gayi apne pandey ji ke saath chal betaguddan ab ap bhi api sawari jaldi se dhood lijiye warna aj pakka late hojayengi ap aur vase bhi joro ki bhook bhi lagi hai

Guddan (in mind) haad ho gayi hia aj toh sare siyape kya aj hi honehai hey lord Krishna plz koi toh auto yah taxi dila dijiye 15 min se try krrahe hai pr koi auto wala mil hi ni raha aur uss pr yen yen sari humri jaan leraha hai. Baap re

She was standing there for next 15 min but doesn’t get any auto or taxi suddenly her sight fall on a car parked near the gate; she went near itand thinking

Guddan- waits if I’m not wrong this is Dr. Akshat’s car right, ohyes guddan you are absolutely right this is his car only. Waah loard Krishnaapne toh humari problem hi solve kr di thank you. Lekin yeh Dr. Akshat hai kahacar yaha park kr ke kaha chale gaye dikh kyu ni rahe, aahhh haa vo rahe chaloane do inse lift le lungi

Akshat- toh Miss. Guddan aap yaha kya kr rahi hai

Guddan – kyu hume yaha ni hon chahiye thakya

Ashat- ni mera Matlab hai tumhe toh ab tak ghar chale jana chahiyetha na

Guddan- haan toh hum ghar jane ka hi toh wait kr rahe the Matlabhum ap…(guddan in her mind- ni kya kr rahi hai guddan agar sidhe se liftmangegi toh pata ni kya sochenge phir kitne dino tak inki bakbak sunni padegikuch ur soch ki yeh khud tujhe lif offer kregn)

Akshat- kuch kah rahi thi tum ap… ap kya

Guddan- haan ghar hi jar he the hum poonam ke saath lekin vo tohapke dost Dr.Angad ke saath chali gayi, vase ap yaha kya rahe hai iss apko gharni jana

Akshat- haan main toh gharhi jar ha hoon vo Dr. mittal ke saathkuch case ki details samajh raha toh

Guddan- toh chale

Akshat- haan main toh ja hi rha hoon, tum kese jaogi

Guddan- haan hum auto auto se chale janenge (in mind- lift chahiyehume lift)

Akshat knows very well that she want lift from him but was notready to accept it so e decide to tease her little)

Akshat- haan toh auto tumhe vaha auto stand pr milegi yaha ni uskeliye tumhe vaha chal ke jana hogo

Guddan(in mind)-khadus akeli ladki yaha khadi hai aur auto se janeki baat kr rahi hai yen ni ki lift hi puch le vase toh college main pareshan krte rhate hai ki hum friends haipr ajb sach main friendship nibhane ka time aya toh auto stand dikha rahe hai

Akshat (while sitting on driver seat)- oh hello Miss. Gupta sideplz

Guddan- haan ap ja rahe hai

Akshat- haan toh ab yaha apke saath apke auto ke an aka wait toh nikr sakta na tum jao apne auto stand pr bye

Guddan- bye (unwillingly)

Akshat drove his car slowly so she will stop him and asked for liftbut oh god this girl was so stubborn why won’t she asked, he sop his car atsome safe distance from her so she couldn’t see him he was looking at her inhis car side mirror her face shows clearly she want the lift but why she didn’tasked me once don’t know what’s going on in her mind.

On the other side guddan was cursing herself for not asking him forlift

Guddan- lift mang leti toh kya chala jata haan toh kya huwa vothoda bakbak krte but it’s ok na timely ghar toh puch jati aur safely bhi abpata ni iss halat main kab tak yaha rukna padega

Voice- lift

Guddan (looks in the direction of voice it was akshat)- Dr. Akshatap…ap toh chale gaye the na phir vapas

Akshat- vo kya hain na koi itna jiddi ho sakta hai I can’t imagine

Guddan- what

Akshat- phele andar batho phir baat krte hai and he opens the door

Guddan silently sits inside without showing any expression, akshatstars driving

Akshat- agar lift chahiye thi toh sidhe sidhe bol sakti thi itnebhav khane ki kya zaroorat thi

Guddan- haan toh jab apko pata tha toh ap bhi hum se bol sakte the

Akshat shook his head in disbelief and thinks “Kya ladki hai, prjasi bhi hai mujhe pasand hai”

Akshat- music

Guddan- yeh car apki hi hai na

Akshat- ofcourse it’s mine

Guddan- toh apki marzi jo krna hai kijiye humse kyu puch rahe hai????

Akshat smiles on her and start the radio

Akshat- toh kaha dorp krun tumhe

Guddan- ap hume vo Lalghati Square pr drop kr dijiye vaha se hum chalejayenge

Akshat- apne ghar ka address ni batana chahti ho toh koi baat ni prghar ke aas pass ki jagah bata do main vaha drop kr dunga

Guddan- Green Valley Society vaha rhte hum

Akshat- ok

Guddan- yaha se ni yeh route lamba padega ap age se right le kr VIProad le lijiye vaha traffic bhi ni milega aur hum jaldi puch jayenge

Akshat do the same and then suddenly he stops the car and looked at her

End of Part

So aj ke liye itna hi ab ap sab apne dimag ke ghode 🐎 ko jara tej kijiye sochte rahi age kya hoga jab tak hum chalte h bye...

And plz ignore all the typos and grammatical errors... See you soon

Edited by Swati_20 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: Akshananju

🤗all of us will be waiting😆

Updated plz check

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Posted: 6 years ago
#80

Amazing👍🏼

Guddu ke jid ke samne akshat ko v jhukna hi para😆

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