Akshan ff- Tere bin(last part updated on pg32)*Completed* - Page 11

Part-10

As they went to breakfast Akshat serves her fav aloo paratha guddu happily eats it Akshat receives a call and says to guddan that he has an urgent work in restaurent he will be back within 2 or 3 hrs and akshat left dadi along with durga and laxmi went to mandir and saru went to meet her sister guddu was feeling unwell she continues snizing suddenly she hears a women shouting her name angrily. She went there she was shocked and happy.

Guddan - mami aap yha kuch kaam tha qa agar kuch kaam tha to aap mjhe boola leti main aa jati aur aap chilla q rhi hai sab thik hai na. So the lady was kaushalya(in my story kaushalya is still evil and wants to ruin guddu's happiness).

Kaushalya-band kr ye apnepan ka dikhawa ye natak bakio ke samne krna mere samne nhi isi bhole chere se sbko fasa kr rakha hai na tujh jaisi swarthi aur besharam ladki maine aa tk nhi dekhi .

Guddan with teary eyes- mami ye aap qa bol rhi hai. Koi galti ho gyi qa mjhse mami

Kaushalya drags her to the mistake wall inthe balcony and slap her hard guddu falls near her mother's pic and her already injured head started bleeding.

Kaushalya- tujhe pta hai main tujhe yha pr q layi tuje teri sacchai dikhane ye jo hamse sab ho payega sab ho payega la rat laga ke rakha hai na tune ye dekh teri galtiyan ye hi teri jindagi ki sacchai hai ajtk tune sirf galtiya hi galtiya ki hai aur aaj to tune meri beti ka jo tujhe di di kehte nhi thakti uska haq v cheen liya.

Guddan -ma aap qa bol rhi hai main chutki ke sath bura q karoongi.

Kaushalya-bas kar tujhe uski khushi dekhi nhi jatinna ek to uski shadi maine us pagal se krwane ke liye raazi ho gyi upar se mjhe ab pta chala ki saari jindal property ki malki tu hai ya u kahu ki tune sari property aur paisa harab liya hai ab meri revti is bhawan mein aa bhi jayegi to teri devrani ban ke reh jayegi.

Guddan- maa chutkinmeri behen hai aap property...before she completes her word kaushalya again slaps her

Kaushalya- ye jo tu itna chehek rhi hai na Guddan akshat jindal bankr ye sab mere badaulat hi hai she narrated her deed how she got her married to Aj this shocks guddan so much she is shattered

Guddan -itna bada dhoka mami apne mre sath aisa q kiya qa bigada tha maine

Kaushalya -agar main aisa nhinkrti na to tujh jaisi ladki se shadi v kon krta sari jindagi mere sar par pari hoti kaushalya makes her write that she did wrong by accepting the shares in jindal property and many more and made it stick on the wall kaushalya before leaving tujh jaisi ladki ke sath aur koi umeed v qa rakh skte hai jo khud apni maa ko maar daala tu apni maa ki katil hai guddan aur ha meri beti se door rhna samjhi and she leaves leaving a shattered and heart broken guddan behind.

Guddan looks at the mistake walls kaushalya's words and everyone's words echos on her head she gets hazzy fb's of her mother dead body and her death she goes to the photo she was crying vigorously

Guddan -maa q gyi mjhe chod kr qa meri galti itni bari thi ki aap mjhe hamesha ke liye chod kr chali gyi qa main itni boori hu maa ki maine mami ko itna majboor kr diya ki vo meri shadi jindql sahab se dhoke se kara de shayad vo sach hi keh rhi thi ye hamari jindagi ki sbse badi sacchai hai ki hamse kuch nhi ho payega kuch nhi ho payega hamse she brokes down .

Meanwhile Aj comes back he runs toward her he saw her crying he patted her shoulder at the very next moment she was unconsious in his arm he picks her and lied to the bed he pats her cheecks and is shocked. Oh God ise to bahut tez bukhar hai he noticed her face she was looking pale her eyes was swollen due to excessive crying wait what he did just notices on her cheeks its handprint of someone it means someone had slapped her. This tought make Akshat's blood boil. Aj was fuming with anger. He called the docter.

Aj in mind- kya hua tha aisa aur kon tha vo jiske wajah se guddan ki ye halat ho gyi itna tut gyi vo aur ye nishan kiski itni himmat aisa krne ki mjhe bs ek baar us sakhs ka name pta chal jaye bs. But right now guddan needs him he just sat beside her till then everyone was back to the house they all were confused and shocked by guddu's this condition.

Dadi- ye meri guddiya ko kya ho gya

Laxmi-av ham logo ke jane se pehle to sb thik hi tha guddan sasuma ko bs jukaam tha lekin ab

Akshat- qa guddan ko cough and cold tha apne mjhe bataya kyu nhi lekin sirf cough and cold se to ye halat nhi krega iska something is wrong.

Guddan is semicounsious and is blabbering Aj comes to her she was continuously saying sorry hamse galti ho gyi docter arrives and checks her he prescribe somemedicine and ask akshat to have some words privately. Everyone leaves the room except akshat and docter.

Aj- docter kya hua kuch serious hai qa guddan thik hai na.

Docter- ha av vo thik hai maine use neend ki injection v de di hai and dawaiya v dedi hai main apse ye kehna chahti hu that she fainted due to mental trauma mjhe apse baat puchni thi qa aap apni wife ke bachpan ke baare mein kuch jante hai inki condition dekh kr lagta hai that she was having tough childhood and had suffered from assault and mental torture and aaj v wahi memories jo unko kafi dard dete hai aaj samne ane ki wajah se aisa hua hai look mr jindal aap koshis rakhe inhe khush rakhne ki and inhe trauma se bahar nikalne ki otherwise matter cam be serious ab main chalti hoon take care aur ha dhyan rakhiyega ki fever jyada na barhe warna mjhe fir se boola lijiyega.

Akshat ask laxmi to drop her till the car he sits beside guddan peck her forhead and was thinking about docter's word and is determined to know about guddan's pain . He noticed guddan's kangan on balcony he went to pick it up and shocks to see the chits scattered on the ground he looks at the wall and saw new mistakes has been sticked there.

Aj - that means guddan was writing this chits again when i aksked her not to do wait someone has forced her to do this the handwritting and tears were the proof bt the question was who?

Ps- i hope u liked it plz ignore the mistakes and do share ur views.

Part-11 pg-17