ff: dil ke dhaage part 8-11/10/19(Page 47) - Page 27

woww my Adha Half , its long ud n m really loved it...

well kaha se suru karu aapko aapne prem patra likhna 🤣

Dekha Malhar ji bipolar hain 🤣

joke apart

wonderful just

Wish Cvs iye sab dikhya hota but unhe toh unnecessary twist chaiye mu chiaye

loved how Malhar makes AS scared, she needed it..

my fav moment is Malhar purnaviram to all AN people that is class

so Mallu want to throw all An people good they deserve it except Anupriya...

oops Kallu stopped him n make sure her mayka will be there

I loved how u put Mallu is impressed with kallu in real sense

well in show also he was but khadus nehi kaha

At least in ur FF we can read it n imagine it...

oops, that didn't get Pillu as its too late..

but glad that malhar understands kalyani is not at fault n didn't scold her...

I like whatever their relationship is they shouldn't let their any fight come outside... as a couple should do..I really appreciate the mature Malhar here ..

this is much needed one re ..

oops, Sr night but this one too good...poor kalyani kitna dar gayi

thank GOD no gana bajana ermm kundi mat kharkao raja 🤣

errmmm double meaning here with KalMa convo kaha soyenge tu bhi na 🤣😛

Kalyani n her flimo example ....Mallu age ka zindegi movie hoga with ur pagli🤣

bed share mein degree malhar ka one liner 😆

sply for pallu's live commentary..she is really something..

Cvs should use it more her maskari 🤣

glad that they r sharing the bed like normal people ..Thank god ..

oops kallu gir gayi pagli hain sacchi mein...

Appu will get more jhatka I hope with time ...

I seriously wonder with her expectation first she wants Sampada to be accepted by malhar again then she can ruin kalyani's life...

I really wish to see here Malhar will deal her fine...which I miss.

pallu can't stop the next day also running commentary ..

helpers r coming to help kalyani where Sampada didn't get this much

woww love to Aparna all green in envy

Sampada ne kabhi deserve nehi kya...which kalyani deserve ....

oops sindoor scene loved this version really

oops sab kya matlab nikale pichle din ka Bappa gir ke kalayani ka shout then next din malhar ka sindoor mein ermmmm..

🤣 too good...

malhar blushing se pehele sab blushing , wish cvs will give us some thing like this re

as now also they can give it ...sigh....

are wah kalayni is glowing with sindoor Ms

loved it...

Power KalMa shipper sarma gaye sir ko dekh ke

tere shades sunte hi fifty iyaad agaya 🤣

Pallu ka commentary omg just loved it subha subha

Hope Malhar will forgive Anu n understand her plight...

Pallu to appu beech mein jake soyenge can't stop laughing

waiting for pillu's entry at AN n how pillu will be with KalMa

can't wait for the next part

Loved it di khas Kar kallubka bed se girna .gosh ye show mein bhi dikhathe.and pallu ki commentary🤣.sindoor scene wow.thank for a long ud.kush hogaya Dil.

It is awesome n my fav part is sindoor wala...

Aww!

Awesome chapter

loved this version of story

enjoyed the long update

AS dar gayi

yahi to chahiye tha

Atom bomb Malhar Rane is love

Malhar ji Sampada ke baare mein soch ke ro rahe the😭😭😭

Kalyani unko sambhalna chahti hai

Kalyani is such a good soul

aisa khatarnak parivar hai, phir bhi unko bachaya. Aai hai hi lekin baki logon ke liye bhi kitna care karti hai ❤️

Pillu ko la nahi sake, next update mein aayega😊

AnuYani conversation ❤️

decorated room to show AN people who taunt their relationship

but liked how he explained her that our relationship is not at that stage

bed pe so jao sun ne ke baad to Kalyani shock ho gayi kyun ki usse laga Malhar ji usse floor pe sone ko bolenge

usko aisa hi lagega na kyun ki Malhar ji gusse mein jo the

Kalyani aur uska filmon ka gyaan🤣🤣

Malhar ji is so caring, uske girne ke baad gently usse uthaya

Pallavi aur uski commentary 🤣

Shukar hai Aparna ko heart attack nahi aaya🤣

Sindoor scene was beautiful plus it was symbolic like Kalyani ke pyaar ka rang Malhar ji pe chadhega (ye maine aise hi interpret kiya, hope not bored you)

Aww! Malhar ji is so sweet

he knows that Kalyani will not be able to handle all the responsibilities. So helpers bulvaye. So caring!

Kalyani as a newly wed bride

Liked that Pallavi taunted Aparna

anjane mein hi sahi KalMa ke baare mein accha bol diya usne

liked how Anupriya was stopping both Aparna and Pallavi from making comments on her daughter

wow! Ab Pillu ko lene jane wale hai

parents will welcome their beloved son❤️

Thanks for writing

please keep writing 👍🏼

Lovely update ❤❤

KalMa n their nok jhok❤

Bedroom scene 😍...sindoor scene 😍... everything is lob❤

Lambe update toh aur b achha hai🙌

Thanks for the update 😊... waiting for the next...

My Adha Half Edited the comment 🤗

This was so long but amazing chapter. Loved it so much.

It was so amazing, outstanding and fabulous.

I enjoyed reading it.

KalMa were fantastic like always.

But Pallavi was star of this chapter.

She and her wild imaginations...

Sabse jyada to KalMa ko saath saath Pallavi dekhna chahti hai.

Show me wo hai bhi neutral character.

She is neither against nor supporting.

Update the next part soon...

Loved it...💖

Gud one!!♥️

Continue soon👍🏽👍🏽

Really amazing and funny

I love the part

You nailed it dear

Hope to see you soon

And always make the longer updates for us