AkshAn FF: Judaai (Last Part, Pg 20)

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Index:

Part- 1 : Pg 1

Part- 2 : Pg 2

Part - 3 : Pg 4

Part - 4 : Pg 5

Part - 5 : Pg 5

Part - 6 : Pg 6

Part - 7 : Pg 8

Part - 8 : Pg 8

Part - 9 : Pg 9

Part- 10 : Pg 10

Part - 11 : Pg 11

Part- 12 : Pg 11

Part 13 : Pg 12

Part 14 : Pg 13

Part 15 : Pg 14

Part 16 : Pg 15

Part 17 : Pg 16

Part 18 : Pg 16

Part 19 : Pg 17

Part 20 : Pg 18

Part 21 : Pg 19

Part 22 : Pg 20


I will try to upload on a regular basis but as I have my studies also so ff will take time.. Hope you guys like it

Jindal House

It was Antara & Akshat wedding. After Antara's fake miscarriage & Akshat's transferring of whole property to Guddan, Akshat didn't delay his marriage, it was his last day in Jindal House as he has decided to leave with Dadi & Antara. Antara & Akshat came down, Guddan was missing since morning, Durga & Laxmi was worried Guddan as well as Akshat's decision. As the wedding ceremony was going to start the door bell rang. Saraswati went & opened the door & Police inspector came. Akshat went near him.

AJ: Inspector Saab aap yahan kya baat hai

I: Mr. Jindal kya MH H9 apki car hai?

AJ:Ji Haan

I: Yeh car kon use karta hai apke family mein?

L: Ji sasuma mera matlab hai Guddan ji

AJ: Kya baat hai inspector

I: Hume bohat afsos ke saath kehna par raha hai ki issh car ka accident hua hai aur yeh car khai ke pass gir gayi hai aur accident ke samay Guddan ji car mein thi

All were shocked except Antara & Saraswati as they were happy. Akshat felt like his whole world stopped.

D: Yeh app kya kehre hai aisa nehi hosakta

I: Khai mein car girne ki wajah se car mein blast hua hai aur car Guddan ji ki lash tak puri tarah se jal chuka hai yahan tak ki body bhi nehi bachi

Akshat holds Inspector's collar in angry way. Dadi fell down Durga & Laxmi supported her.

AJ(shouting):KYA BAKWAS KAR RAHE HAI AAP AISA NEHI HOSAKTA WOH MERI GUDDAN HO HI NEHI SAKTI

Angad, Vardaan & Kishore pulled Akshat apart from Inspector.

I:Dekhiye mein samaj sakta par hume Khai ke pass se unka saman mila hai

Inspector pulled a plastic from his pocket & showed him. It was Guddan's mangalsutra & bangle. All were shocked seeing it. Akshat took it from Inspector & examined it. Tears where coming out from his eyes. He fell down.

AJ(shouted): GUDDAN

Next Day

Pooja was conducted for Guddan's last rites. All family members including Gupta family & other people gathered. All were sad & crying except Antara & Saraswati.

A: Acha hua kuch karna bhi nehi pada.. jo hota ache ke liya hota hai

S:Abb toh property apki samjhi Antara ji

A: Sahi kahan

Akshat sat in front of Guddan's picture like a statue. From yesterday he was just sitting somewhere holding Guddan's picture. He remembered the words he said to her. Never in his imagination he thought that he have to see this day. After pooja was completed, people started to leave. After sometime Gupta family also left. As everyone was going to their room the door bell again rang, Durga opened it & lawyer came.

Da:Sen Saab abhi aap

Sen: Ji woh mein

Just then his eyes went to Guddan's picture & the Garland around her picture. He was shocked.

Sen: Guddan ji margayi lekin kal hi toh mein unse mila tha aur unhone neyi toh aaj apke pass anke bola tha

All were shocked hearing this.

AJ:Kya matlab hai apka

Sen took some papers out & handed it to Akshat.

Sen:Mr. Jindal Guddan Ji Divorce paper banwaye tha aur unhone kal sign bhi kardiya tha aur kahan tha aaj ake apse sign le Lun

Akshat was shocked.

Sen:Itna hi nehi unhone sari property aur business apke name kardiya hai

A lone tear escaped from his eyes. Antara & Saraswati were on cloud nine hearing this.

A(in mind):Wah Guddan wah marne se pehle toh tumne mujhe sone ki thal pakra diya

AJ: yeh aap kya kehrehen hai

Sen: Ji Mr. Jindal.. unhone apke name pe property wapas toh kiyi hai magar

A: Magar kya

Sen:Unhone yeh clause add kiya hai ki Mr. Jindal apni property aur business aaj ke kisikebhi name par nehi kar sakte agar unhone aisa karna chaha toh sari property aur business ek trust ke name hojayegi

Antara was shocked hearing this. Ahshat was not even listening he was just staring at the divorce & property papers.

Sen:Yeh property aur business tabhi kisike aur name ki hogi jab Mr. Jindal ki natural aur accidental death hogi

Antara was hell shocked.

Sen: acha mein ab chalta hun

Sen left. Ahshat without another word went to his room. Antara was getting angry.

A(in mind):Yeh Guddan tumne thik nehi kiya ab majbooran mujhe thos kadam uthana parega

Akshat in his room went near the chits which was stuck by him. He started how hateful words he told to Guddan. Tears were coming from his eyes.

AJ: Guddan meri galti ke wajah se tum aisi ban gayi.. meine tumhe saja dena chaha jo tumne Antara ke saath kiya par tumne toh mujhe sabe bari saja diyi kyun chali gayi tum

He fell on his knees & started crying vigorously.


Hope you guys like it. Sorry for grammatical mistakes.

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Guddan zinda hai na??

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