AkshAn FF: Judaai (Last Part, Pg 20) - Page 3

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part - 3


As the chandelier was about to hit Akshat someone pulled him. The chandelier hits the floor & both of them falls near the stairs. By this time all other family members came back as Antara had send them out.

Da: Lalla

All were shocked seeing the person who saved Akshat.

AJ&A: Guddan

It was Guddan. She stood up & helped Akshat to stand. Angad rushed towards Akshat.

G:Aap thik hai?

Akshat just nodded as he was unable to believe that Guddan was in front of him. Guddan turned & went near Antara.

A:Guddan tum zinda ho hum sabko laga

Before Antara can complete her words Guddan slapped her with such a force & she falls on floor. She looked at her. Guddan pulled her up by holding her neck tightly.

G:Kahan tha na humne humara sath tumhe jo karna hai karo par humare parivar ke upar ek anch nehi ani chahiye

Saying this Guddan left Antara & Antara stepped away from her.

Da:Tu zinda hai hume laga

G:Ki hum margaye.. Haan humne apne marne ke natak kiya jaise Antara ne kiya tha.. kyun hai na Antara

Dadi was shocked hearing this & looked at Antara, Antara was just looking at Guddan with disbelief. Akshat by this time was little bit normal & stood behind Guddan.

AJ: Sahi keh rahi hai maa Guddan itne din se Antara sirf aur sirf natak kar rahi thi

And Akshat narrated what just happened few minutes back & how Antara revealed her truth. Dadi was stunned hearing this, she went near Antara & slapped her.

Da:Teri wajah se Maine Guddan kitni taqleef pauhchayi saram nehi aayi yeh sab karte huye

A:Nehi aayi saram bilkul bhi nehi aayi.. sab Sahi chal raha tha par issh Guddan ko bhi aana tha.. mein toh ab jail jayungi par issh Guddan ko bhi zinda nehi chodungi

As she was about to attack Guddan, someone pulls her & slapped her & she again falls on ground. It was Vikram. All were shocked except Guddan. Antara stood up & stepped back from Vikram.

A:Bhai aap bhi zinda hai

V:Haan apko kya laga hum margaye Arey bhala ho Guddan ji ka jab sabko laga ki hum margaye aur humara antim sanskar karne jaa rahe the tab unhone dekha ki humari saasein chal rahi hai aur unhone Sahi waqt pe humara ilaz ke liye hospital mein bharti kardiya aur hum bach gaye

Guddan stood beside Vikram.

G:Humne kahan tha na Guddan yeh shaadi toh hone nehi degi aur Lord Krishna ki asirwad ki wajah apke shaadi ek din pehle hume Lord Krishna ne rasta bhi dikha diya

FLASHBACK

Guddan was sitting in her room crying thinking she lost the battle when she got a call from hospital that Vikram was awake. She rushed to hospital & met with him, she told him everything & how the wedding was conducted.

V:Hume yeh shaadi kisibhi halat mein talni padegi jab tak hum puri tarah se thik nehi hojate

G:Hume pata hai par kaise

Both were thinking when Guddan got a plan & told Vikram about her fake death.

G:Hum yeh akela nehi kar payenge hume thodi madat chahiye

V:Aap chinta maat kijiye humari team apki madat karegi

On the day of wedding Guddan went to lawyer's place & as per plan she reached near the accident place where Vikram's men helped her make a scenario of accident.

FLASHBACK ENDS

G:Hume pata tha ki jasiye tum humare clause ke barein mein sunogi tum Jindal Saab ko jaan se marni ki koshis karogi aur hume ussi waqt ka intezar tha ki kab tumhari sachai unke akhon ke samne ayegi

Guddan & Akshat looked at each other. Akshat's eyes where saying thousand emotions at the same time but Guddan face was blank. Just then police came & arrested Antara. Vikram handed them a video camera.

V:Issh mein Antara ke khilaf sare saboot hai.. le jayi ise

With that police took Antara away. Dadi went towards Guddan & holds her hand.

Da:Mujhe maaf karde meri bachi.. humlogo ne tujhe bohat taqleef pauhchayi hai

G:Dadi aap aisi baat mat kijiye ismein apki koi galati nehi hai.. lekin abb hum Jindal ghar ki bahu nehi bansakte.. hum yeh ghar humesha ki chod ke jarahe hein

All were shocked at Guddan's decision. She went to her room & Akshat followed her. As he entered the room he saw her packing her suitcase, he went near her & holds her hand.

AJ:Guddan pls mujhe chod ke maat jao jantu hu bohat badi galati kiyi hai but mein tumse bohat pyar kartu hun

Guddan looked at him & took him in front of the chits which he has stuck.

G:Parhiye apni galatiyon ko Jindal Saab aap humse pyar nehi karte hai balki pyar nehi apki galati hai

Akshat looked at him.

G:Jaise humse pyar karna apki galati thi waise hi aap par bhasoda karna humari.. aur ab ish Guddan se aap par bhasoda karna na ho payega.. humne pehlei divorce paper sign kardiya hai aap bhi kardijiye

Saying this she took her suitcase & went downstairs. Akshat followed her. All family members tried to stop her but she didn't heard their request & left the house with Vikram.

Hope you guys like it. Sorry for grammatical mistakes


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Posted: 6 years ago
#22

Amazing

So antra aunty ko jor ka jhatka jor se lag gya guddu aur vikram dono jinda hai😆

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Posted: 6 years ago
#23

Awesome job,

Guddaon & vikarm ki entry dhamekedar ❤️🥳

Tussi cha gaye

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Posted: 6 years ago
#24

Wah bhyee vikram aur guddan donu zinda hain

Aunty k saath bhi sahi hua aur akshat k saath bhi

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Posted: 6 years ago
#25

Maza aa gya

Fake death 😂😂😂

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Posted: 6 years ago
#26

Awesome update

Love it

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part - 4


Dadi went towards Akshat & kept her hand on his shoulder.

Da:Lalla tune use jane diya.. roka kyun nehi

AJ:Kis haq se rokta maa jo haq maine use china hai

D:AJ aap Guddan se aur woh apse bohat pyar kartein hai.. aap jayiye unke pass manane ki koshis toh kijiye

L:Haan AJ pls jayiye

AJ:Sahi kahan apne.. maa mein Guddan ke pass jaraha hun

A:Bhai rukiye mein bhi apke saath chalta hun

Akshat & Angad went to Gupta House. Kaushalaya opened the door, Akshat went straight inside the house & started calling Guddan. Bhushan came out.

B:Aap yahan kya kar rahe hein

AJ:Papa pls Guddan ko bula dijiye

K:Aap yeh kya kehrehe hai

A:Uncle & Aunty woh

And Angad narrated Guddan's fake death & Antara's truth. Bhushan was shocked hearing this & dropped on a sofa behind him. Kaushalaya rushed to him.

K:Samhaliye aap khud ko

B: Aur maine Guddan ko kitna kuch boldiya

AJ:Kya matlab hai papa

B:Aapke shaadi ke dodin pehle

FLASHBACK

Guddan went to temple as when she was returning Bhushan stopped her way.

G:Papa

B:Papa kehna ka haq tu kho chuki hai

G:Yeh aap kya

B:Sahi bolraha hun apne rishtey ko bachane ke liya tune ek bache ki jaan le li Guddan.. chi tujhe toh apni beti bolte huye bhi sharam arahi hi hai

Guddan was in tears hearing all this.

G:Apko bhi aisa lagta humne

B:Tujhse yeh umeed nehi thi

Saying this Bhushan left leaving a devastated Guddan.

FLASHBACK ENDS

All were shocked hearing this. Kaushalaya stood up & went to Revati's room, but Revati was also missing even her things were also missing. She found a letter & read it. She was shocked & rushed outside.

K:Suniye Revati bhi chali gayi

All men were shocked. Angad took the letter from Kaushalaya & read it, she was in tears. Akshat took the letter & started reading it aloud.

Letter

Mummy aur Papa

Jab tak apko yeh letter milega tab tak mein aur Di yahan se dur jaa chuka honge.. haan Di zinda hai aur bilkul sahi selamat hai.. mere aur Di ke liya abb yahan rehna muskil hai.. Di ke saath jindal house jo hua se hua par papa apne tak di pe bhasoda nehi kiya.. mein apni Di ko aisa nehi dekh sakti.. aur jo Di ke sath hua yeh kya pata mere sath bhi aisa ho isilye Angad ji aur Jiju se keh dijiye ki hume dhoondne ki koshis na karen.. hosake aap sab hume maaf kardijiyega

Aapki Chutki

The letter dropped from Akshat's hand.

K:Dekha aap logo ki wajah se humne sirf Guddan ko hi nehi Revati ko bhi khodiya

Saying this Kaushalaya started crying & left from there. Akshat turned towards Bhushan who was also crying.

AJ:Papa mujhe maaf kardijiye humlogo ki wajah se yeh sab kuch hua

B:Ismein sirf aapki galati nehi hai damadji meri bhi hai apne ko kasurdar maat banayi

AJ:Mein waada karta hun aapko bohat jald mein unn dono ko dhund layunga yeh mera wadda hai

Saying this he & Angad & went outside.

AJ:Angad mujhe maaf karde meri wajah tere aur Revati ke bich

A:Nehi bhai ismein apki koi galati nehi hai aur mujhe Revati ji pe naaz hai ki unhone tabh bhabhi ka saath diya jab unke khud ke gharwalon ne sath chod diya.. toh aap chinta maat kijiye

Angad & Akshat hugged each other.

Somewhere Else

Guddan & Revati were standing when Vikram came to them & handed them the tickets.

G:Thank u Rawat Ji

V:Ismein shukriya koi baat nehi hai par yeh aap logo ka akhiri faisla hai

Guddan looked at the tickets & nodded her head & looked towards Revati.

G:Chutki tujhe

R:Bash di ab aur ek word nehi maine kehdiya ki mein apke saath jayungi toh bash

G:Thik hai.. Rawat ji apse ek binati hai ki aap hum kahan jarahe hai yeh aap kisi se bhi nehi kahenge.. apko humari kasam

V:Guddan ji aap fikr maat kijiye.. bash sadhani se jayiga

Guddan nodded & left with Revati. Vikram looked towards their direction.

V:Hume umeed hai bohat jald woh din bhi ayega jab aap Akshat ko maaf karpayengi

Jindal House

All were present at hall when Akshat & Angad came. All went towards them.

Da:Kya hua lalla

They told them what has happened & how Guddan & Revati were now missing.

Da:Lalla ab kya karenge

Akshat with a determined face looked towards Radha & Krishna statue & then at Dadi.

AJ:Chinta maat kijiye maa bohat jald mein Guddan aur Revati ko wapas layunga yeh mera waada hai


Hope you guys like it. Sorry for grammatical mistakes.


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Posted: 6 years ago
#28

Awesome part

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I wish K ah guddan ko find kar lega

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice update

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awsome

Show mein to mjhe rewti pasand na ayi story mein i liked her

Bhushan papa se ye umeed nhi thi

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