MG STORY BAWRA MAN PART 25,26,27- PAGE 34,35 25MAY2020 - Page 17

Part 20

The groom's family on learning that Geet is adopted

cancelled the alliance , now these people are truly stupid

as Geet has character she is respectful and they only saw the one

fact that she is adopted well its their loss

when Maan heard that Geet was hurt and tried committing suicide and is now

in hospital he left immediately to return to India

its true when he says that Rajveer did not care about Geet if it was Maan he would

have made sure that everyone know just how important she is to him and that he loves

her very much

Looking forward to Part 21

PART 21

They reached KM

In outhouse,

Mohinder and Rano saw Geet.

Geet: Maa papa

Geet hugged them.

Devki saw her.

Devki: Aur kitna tamasha dikhayegi ye ladki saying so Went to her room.

Maan felt anger listening Devki's talk

Geet felt bad . She became sad.

Brij: Dont cry Gudiya.

Rano took her to room. Made her lie on bed

Just then Maan got call from KM

Anjali: Beta aap hospital se kab aa rahe ho?

Maan: Maa main outhouse me hun. Geet ko discharge mil gaya.

Anjali: Itni jaldi. Hum abhi aa rahe hai Geet se milne. Suniye, Maa Geet ghar aa gayi.

Maan touched Rano and Mohinder's feet.

Mohinder: Beta ji aap to nahi aanewale the

Maan: Ji par phir pata chala

Brij: Achha hua ye aa gaya.

They were talking. Just then dadi anjali and amar arrived. Rano took them to Geet.All went to Geet' s room except Devki. Amar kept his hand on her head.

Amar:Are you ok beta?

Geet: Am fine uncle.

Anjali: Jaldi jaldi thik ho jao.

Dadi: Haa hume hamari wahi purani Geet chahiye.

Geet: Haan

Geet felt bad for troubling all. She didnt have much courage to face.

Rano: Kya hua ?

Geet: Mujhe neend aa rahi hai maa.

Dadi: Hum bahar chalte hai. Geet ko aaram karne do.

All came out. But Maan made excuse of making call.

He stood near entrance of her room in such a way so geet couldn' t see him.

Geet felt all left. She took out her all sadness and started crying.

Geet: sab dukhi hai meri wajah se. main kya karu babaji?

Maan: She need time. Main nahi jaa sakta uske pas abhi.

Maan came where all were sat. Brij asked maan to come with him. Both went to garden. Dadi amar anjali went to km.

Maan: kya hua brij?

Brij: tujhe kya hua hai?

Maan: Kuch nhi bas thak gaya hun?

Brij: Sure?

Maan: Haa yar.

Brij: Bas maan ye tin mahine gujar jaye phir hamesha ke liye india.

Maan avoided the discussion

Maan: Good night Brij kal bat karenge

Brij: Ok. Good night.

Maan went to KM.

Anjali: Beta khana kha lo?

Maan: Mujhe bhuk nahi hai Maa.

He went straight to his room.

Amar: Sahabjade ka kya hoga ? Chahta hun retire ho jau sari jimmedari ise de du. Par iska to dhyan hi nahi hai.

Anjali: Kya aap bhi do tin dino ke liye aaya hai aap phir shuru ho gaye. Main khana laga deti hun. Maa aap bhi aa jaiye.

Dadi: Tum maan ki plate tayar karo. Main use khana khilaungi.

She took plate went to his room. She saw Maan lost .

Dadi: Aaiye khana khaiye.

Maan: Dadi aap jaiye mujhe khana nahi khana. Mujhe nind aa rahi hain.

Dadi: Itne jaldi. Aap to der rat tak jagte ho na Maan.

Maan:Mujhe subah jaldi uthna hai.

Dadi felt he is behaving weird

Dadi: kyun?

Maan: Mujhe Boht imp kam hai kal. Please dadi aap jaiye. Mujhe koi baat nahi karni.

Dadi left unwillingly.

Maan sat on bed helplessly. He remembered Geet sad face. To himself " Bhale hi Geet mere pas hai. Par phir bhi boht dur hai mujhse. Is incident ke bad wo pehle jaise muskura bhi nahi rahi. Brij is right wo tut gayi hai."

Maan tried to sleep. But sleep was far away from his eyes. He went toward window and continuously watching outhouse. Just then he saw Geet coming out.

Maan: Geet itne raat ko bahar kaha ja rahi hai.

He saw Geet was going toward garden. Maan came out and followed Geet. Now they were in garden. Finally he speak.

Maan: Geet.

Geet turned.

Geet: Aap itni rat ko yaha ?

Maan: Ye main bhi keh sakta hun. Tumhe der tak jagna nahi chahiye. Doctor ne aaram karne ko kaha hai. Jid karke ghar aayi aur ab bahar ghum rahi ho.

Geet: Mujhe neend nahi aa rahi.

She sat on bench.Maan too sat near her.

Maan: I know tum par kya bit rahi hai. Par tumhe aage badhna hoga.

Geet: Aage kaise badhu. Mujhe kyun bachaya

Maan: Are you mad ? Sab tumse kitna pyar karte hai.

Geet: sab nahi karte. Meri dadi mujhse nafrt karti hai. Aap ki dadi ki tarah nahi . Aapki dadi aapse kitna pyar karti hain. Dadi hamesha se veerji se pyar karti. Ab mujhe samajh aaya kyun.

Maan: Isliye tum suicide karna chahti thi.

Geet cried.

Geet: Nahi kyunki meri wajah se maa papa veerji ko kitni insult sehni padi. Maa papa chahte the ki meri shadi ho jaye. Wo boht khush the. Lekin shayad main unka apna khoon hoti to shadi nahi tutati

Maan: Wo tumse phir bhi boht pyar karte ho. Maine dekha Brij kitna pareshan tha.

Geet: Yahi to maine sabko pareshan kiya.sab mere wajah se sad hai.

Maan: No Geet.

Geet: Yahi sach hai. Main boht buri hun. Isliye mere mata pita mujhe chhod kar chale gaye. Aur ab sabki khushiya chhin li.

Maan tried to console her. Geet started walking towards outhouse. Maan started walking behind her.

Maan: Geet suno.

Geet: Mujhe kuchh nahi sunana.

She tried to walk but fainted. Maan hold her on time. Patted her cheek .

Maan: Geet utho. But no response.

He hold her in his arms. Took her to her room. Settled her on bed. He sprinkled water but no effect . Maan called doctor.

Part 21

thanks for the pm!

emotional update! well written!

Hate Devki's attitude towards Geet!

glad that the Khuranas came to meet Geet!

sad seeing Geet like that! Maan is worried about Geet! he loves her so much!

dadi tries to get Maan to eat!!!

great that Maan assures Geet! she took the wrong step! she has so many people that love her!

oh no Geet fainted! hope its nothing serious!

update soon!

P.S when can you update ur other Maaneet stories?

thanks

Maan was worried fr Geet want to talk to hr alone he get time when Geet came out in garden he try to console hr Geet now knows y hr dadi hate hr hope before going back Maan talk to his parents about Geet

devaki still says bad words for geet making her sad . maan is restless seeing geet's condition

Nice update..

Waiting for next update..

now waiting for Part 22!

Interesting story.

I liked it.

Read it in a go.

Geet has so much hidden in heart.

She doesn't open up to anyone.

Brij n maan are childhood friends.

Brij thinks that one should dream according to their status n feels that as they are middle class they should only get partner from middle class only.

He doesn't reciprocate sakshi as she is from a rich family.

Sakshi, maan, brij, geet, pinki share a great bond.

Geet keeps distance from maan.

Devki doesn't love geet as she is adopted.

She is mohinder's friend's daughter.

Maan loves her a lot but he doesn't tell anyone except his dadi fearing geet n brij's reaction.

Geet's alliance gets fixed n maan breaks down.

John helps him n takes care of him.

Geet's wedding is broken as the groom's family break the alliance saying she is adopted.

They bad mouth her.

Geet tries committing suicide.

Maan comes back to India knowing about it.

Everyone is hurt seeing geet in such condition.

But maan is behaving wierdly don't know why.

Those stupid groom family they knew about geet being adopted they didn't have problem initially then what happened suddenly.

They should be punished for doing so.

I'm extremely sorry for such late response