aashi & yuvi @ sanganer-part 2

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hi guys! thanx 4 the encouragement. i'll be still moving in a bit senti way.dont mind,but getting bugged i'll stop.

yuvi goes into his roo(some room) varun is fast asleep. he goes & stands beside a window.sid enters, as usual in a happy go lucky way.

sid:hey dude! tum soye nahin?

yuvi:(still thinking abt wht happened outside) no dude neeend nahin aarahe thi.

sid: kyun, uske baare mein soch rahe the kya( as though he knew the reason)

yuvi: wht do u mean sid?

sid: ab bata bhi do, maine tumhe aashi ke saath dekha. aur jab bhi tum uske saath baat karke aate ho, tum sab kuch bhool jaate ho.

yuvi: (not, ready to accept the fact) sid, tum kya bucwaas kar rahe ho.main us wacko ke baare mein kyon sochu,jisne mujhe problems ke siwa kuch nahin diya.

sid: right! yeh baat tum kisi stupid ko bataoge na, to woh bhi shayad believe nahin karega. yuvi tumhare aankhen saaf saaf bata ti hai ke tum abhi bhi useeke bare mein soch te ho.

yuvi:(a lil angry) sid' just shut up. mein sirf ranveer dude aur kal ke performance ke baare mein soch raha tha.( he was shore tht he was lying)

sid: (smiles) ek baat kahun dude, tum sab se kehete to ho ki tum yahaan ranveer ke liye aaye ho, par sach to yahi hai ki tum yahaan aashi ki wajah se aaye ho. usne tum se sirf ek baar kaha aur tum maan gaye.

aashi ,on her way back to the room suddenly hears their voices & stops right there.

in the room

yuvi: yeh sach nahin hai.

sid: right! to tum goa kyon gaye, sonia aunty ke saath holz spend karne?(sarcastically).

yuvi:sid! main is baare mein kuch baat nahin karna chahata. mein aashi ke baare mein ab soch na bhi nahin chahata. bas dude( he sits on the chair, with an xhausted look) bahut hogaya. main thak gaya hoon aashi se. maine sab kuch try kiya dode, yahaan tak ke maine apna dil bhi kholkar rakh diya. lekin use koi farakh nahin pada. woh mere baare mein soch thi bhi nahin. ( a decisive look) sid, main bhi yuvraj dev hoon, aur yuvraj dev kisi ke peeche nahin bhaage ga, ab aashi bhi mere life mein koi maine nahin rakhte.( he knew wht he said wasn't true, but he had decided he'll never bother abt her)

sid just paated on yuvi's shoulders & walked away. he was in no mood to argue with yuvi.

aashi heard all this. she was heart broken. though their relationship was over, she knew tht somewhere the 2 cared 4 each other. but everything was over. she had to be happy abt it, but no,she wasn't.

she goes to the other room completely lost. vrinda sees the look on her face.

vrinda: aashi sab teek to hai na?

aashi: (suddenly finding vrida in front of her) ummmm, haan haan, sab theek hai.

vrinda: (not agreeing with wht aashi said) aashi, baat kya hai? yuvi ke saath ( a, long pause) ummmm kuch hua kya? ( waiting 4 aashi to outburst)

aashi: hey bhaggu! mein yuvi ko leker kyon pareshaan hoon vrinde. mere life mein waise bhi bahut saare important cheez hain, use chodkar mein us psycho ke baare mein kyon sochu.( she knew she wasnt speaking the truth).

vrinda:( i know u very well kind of look).aashi, main jaante hoon ki tum apne dil ki baat aasani se kisi ko nahin bata thi. par main yeh bhi jaante hoon ki baat jab yuvi ki aate hai to tumhe batane ki zaroorat bhi nahin padte,sab kuch tumhaare aankhon mein dekh jaata hain.

aashi knew tht vrinda was speaking the truth. but yet she never wanted to accept the fact.

aashi: no, this is not true. main us ke baare mein ab ab kuch nahin soch thi. everything is over( recalling wht yuvi said) aur woh bhi mere baare mein care nahin karta.

vrinda: (smiles)aashi mein ye to nahin jaante ki tom dono apne relationship ke baare mein kya soch te ho. par itna yakeen ke saath kehe sakte hoon ki yuvi tumhaare bare mein bahut care karta hain. maine uske aankhon mein dekha hain aashi, jab tum goa chale gaye thi bina bataye, to yuvi paagalon ki tarah tumhe doond raha tha. main jaante hoon yuvi ne tumhare saath theek nahin kiya. par insan badal bhi to sakte hai.aashi yuvi ke life mein ab bhi tum maine rakhte ho aur yeh baat tum bhi ache tatah se jaante ho.

aashi wanted to believe everything wht vrinda had just said. but she quitely went to her bed.

all night aashi & yuvi kept thinking abt the happier times they had spent together.

i'll soon continue. ppl if its boring, stop me stop me,stop me.

story thoda saaad hai, but aage shaayad theek ho jaaye.

guys i'll be waiting 4 u r reply😛

happy remixing!

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Posted: 20 years ago
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AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE..........!!!!!!!!!222222222 GOOD!!!!!!!!!!it's gr888888888 !!!!!!!!plzzzzzzz continue!!!!!!! duh,how on EARTH can v stop u????????newayz,plzzzzzz make it happy in d end!!!!!!!!!
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would u mind contiuing in the actual post of the fanfic ? coz it will be easier for us (viewbies and mods) to move th fanfic to the sticky once its completed for it to be forever with us


but as usual this episode was very good !!

and plzzzzz continue
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gr8 yaar...plz continue 👏 👏 👏
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simply gr8..puhleez continue!! 👏 👏
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Originally posted by: nishi

would u mind contiuing in the actual post of the fanfic ? coz it will be easier for us (viewbies and mods) to move th fanfic to the sticky once its completed for it to be forever with us

Even I agree! I mean if you don't mind!

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great yaar seems u can be a script writer cool continue 😛 😛 👏
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hi ppl! thanx a million 4 the encouragement.i'll contnue 4 shore.


patr 3
sanganer 8:00am
vrinda: aashi utho subah hogaye hai. tab se jagaa rahe hoon. utho aashi uthoooooooooooo.
aashi: hey bhaggu! pleasssssssse is vrinde maate ko mere nazroon se hata do.
vrinda laughs, but contnues to bother aashi.
aashi: vrinda, main raat bhar soye nahin. atleast thode der aur sone do
vrinda: (a naughty smile on her face) raat bhar soye nahin aashi, kyon yuvi ke baare main soch rahe thi.
aashi:(wakes up, in an angry tone) shut up vrinde.main apne sleep us looser ke liye kyon barbaad karon.


all get ready the day goes busy preparing 4 the show,yuvi & aashi temporarily forget all their differences mainly 4 the performance.in the evening they all perform its a sucess. they r able to collect money to save the school.( guys its the same as wht happened in thursday's epi)
hey! tia-ranveer patch up toooo.i do not know how though.

next day.all pack their bags and r ready to go, not maurya but GOA! yes, all ppl decide to spend their holz there.
aashi wants to buy something 4 ranveer's sis. sid insists tht he'll join her.aashi finds it a lil weird, but never bothers to ? him.

aashi thruout keeps yelling at sid.
aashi: hey bhaggu! tumne is sid ko kyon banaya.
siiiiiddddddddddddd yahaan aao, tume kabhi zindagi mein ladki nahin dekha kya, jo har ek ladki ko is tarah ghoor rahe ho.
sid: tom nahin samjhoge. are yeh gaon ki girls to kitne cute dekht hai.

aashi just decides to give up.
on the way back home. sid stops aashi.
sid: aashi, mujhe tumse kuch zaroore baat karne hai.
aashi: not now sid, hume jaana bhi to hai.
sid holds her hand , a very serious xpression on his face. aashi too becomes serious seeing the look on his face.

i'll continue.

happy remixing!
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Cool!!!! Ur fic is superb. i just read the whole thing & it totally rocks!!!!!!Plz continue fast!!!! 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hi Sonia,
I read your fanfic today only.Its very gud 👏 👏 👏 .Plz Continue

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