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Posted: 6 years ago

as per promise maan is touching geet also share that her father disown her legally . vickram was angry with this decision

maan taking care of geet as he wants to punish her for long time

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Posted: 6 years ago

Interesting..

Intriguing story I just came across.

Read it all.

Maan is on a revenge taking spree.

He abducted geet from her wedding night forced her to get married to him.

He is threatening her to harm her family n making her obey all his orders.

He is torturing her.

But why. What has she done. What is their past.

Handas are helpless. They are unable to rescue geet. They disowned her.

Geet fell ill. Maan is taking care of her.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Awesome update....

Geet dad disowned her from his properties....

Maan is torturing Geet ....

Poor girl ....

Got fever....

Looking forward for next part...

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Posted: 6 years ago

Maan tried to ruin geets image but in future he will regret....vikram dissappointed to hear abt geets disowned by her father

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Posted: 6 years ago

PART - 5

Its 10 am when he awake, getting late than his normal routine. He check her temperature before leaving the room. Outside he hear the voice of his friend Adi and he step towards in the direction. Maan walked towards him and he greeted him. "very late." he remarked seeing him in night wear.

"hmm. But you are here early morning. Any thing serious?" Maan asked the reason of his coming.

"she had fever so i thought to come and check before leaving for office." he told and Maan quickly check her. Her cry sound pierced his soul.

"ise to abhi bhi fever hai." he got tensed and his brows knotted. "why the hell you not informed me?" he burst on her care taker.

"You were busy.." she fumbles.

"its none of your business, how busy i am..if you were not.." Maan's anger getting out of control.

"Maan leave,i think we should take her to hospital first." Adi distracted him before he lash out his all anger on poor old woman.

"don't cry sweetheart,no don't.. Adi come." both run out taking her with them. Soon they were in hospital. Doctor examine her. Her cries made Maan weak. He can't see her in pain. His stoned eyes shedding tears. Adi consoled him.

"don't worry she will be alright soon. She is a fighter and you know that." though he tried not to show his weak side but Adi is his best friend knows him in and out.

"its all because of that b****. I was busy in taking care of her and see here my..." he wouldn't able to complete. His fists firmed.

"don't worry Mr. Khurana she will be fine soon." Doctor gave her injection and allowed both to take her home.

"but doctor fever ja kyu nahi ra?" Maan asked in a whimpering sound.

"because she is a born weak. But don't worry there is nothing to fear about." he assured them.

"Doctor how is she?" he asked and doctor's eyes turn blank. He don't have any answers of this question.

"from past 7 months you were asking the same question Mr. Khurana and like before i don't have any answers. You know she getting best treatment,but in case of coma patient nothing is confirmed." his hopes trashed down once again. From past 7 months he was coming here in a hope that may be one day she will open her eyes but every time he only got disappointment.

His feet took him towards the direction,where a lifeless soul laying and breathing only because of life support system. He just saw her through glass window and his eyes burned with rage and tears,he hold inside. Adi too walked to him. "Lets go, let her rest." he said and dragged him away.

Adi drop him at KM and moved for the office. He took her inside. She was sleeping now. Maan placed her on bed and caressed her head softly. He leaned over her and kissed on her forehead. "get well soon my sweetheart. You know na i can't see you in pain." he held her soft hand and kissed it. He stood up. "next time ye galti nahi honi chahiye. Now take care of her." he instruct and moved towards his room for fresh n up. Geet was still sleeping in his bed. He stare her in rage and went inside his washroom.






When he comes out he found her awake. Geet was scared seeing new surroundings. She needs time to absorb every thing. Both were silent. He don't want to talk and she was scared to ask. Maan went out and summon his servant. He came with glass of milk. Maan signals and he placed it on the side table. "take your medicine with Milk." Maan commands but she don't made any movement which enraged him. "don't you get my words clearly. Drink it or stay hungry for whole day. Kyunki kaam to tume aaj bhi karne hai. Whether you are well or not,i don't care." he yelled on her. Next she quickly gulped the whole milk in a go,but one question was still troubling her and she can't resist back. Maan too guess seeing her face. "what?" he asked.

"who changed my clothes?" finally she asked and his mind start running on devil mode again.

His anger replaced by his devil smirk. "obviously its done by your loving husband. But if you don't like then don't worry next time i will ask to my any servant." his gleaming eyes scared her and she clenched the collar of his shirt more firmly as she had nothing inside his shirt. Warm drop of water rolled over her cheeks. Maan was happy over her thoughts. He knew Geet never saw any female in the house,so she could believe what he said.

Maan sat near her and she squeezing in herself,as much he tries to approached her. "now why this drama when you are an open book for me. Last night i got the whole view now what you are hiding?" Maan's voice and gestures was a threat for her. She believed every single word of him and start crying. "You wanna cry go ahead. I won't stop you because i love to see you in pain. Aaj tak tumne sabko pain diya hai. Now its your turn to taste your own medicine." Maan laughed over her helplessness.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Sad for geet but what she done in the past and why Mann is anger eager to know the reason

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Posted: 6 years ago

Nice update.who is she who is in coma.what geet did in past which make maan so cruel.want to know soon.waiting for next part.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Is he doing all this for his sweetheart

Seems her condition is because of them

Geet's condition is bad,he is scaring more as the time passes

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Posted: 6 years ago

Thanks for the update......

My guess was right.....there is a baby in the house and she is the baby of Maan s friend who is in comma....

And maan thinks that Geet is the reason behind all this misery in his life....

Waiting for next

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Posted: 6 years ago

great

who is that little child n why is suffering n how is related to maan

maan is enjoying geet's fear

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