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Thank you for writing the next part
Beautiful and happy ending
Loved it that akshat din't waste time to tell the truth to antara
Do write more
Can we also get an epilogue 🤗🤗🤗
Thank you for writing the next part
Beautiful and happy ending
Loved it that akshat din't waste time to tell the truth to antara
Do write more
Can we also get an epilogue 🤗🤗🤗
Thank you so much for liking it😳
Originally posted by: Akshata2010
Awww!
You make me want for more....! 😆 I hope you write an epilogue on those AkshAn Babies that Guddan gave birth to
Waise tumhe bachon ki bahut jaldi hai 😆
Waise tumhe bachon ki bahut jaldi hai 😆
Ayyy!
Koi aisa insaan dhikhao mujhe iss forum pe jo Mini Guddan/Mini Akshat ko nhi dekhna chahta 😆
Originally posted by: Akshata2010
Ayyy!
Koi aisa insaan dhikhao mujhe iss forum pe jo Mini Guddan/Mini Akshat ko nhi dekhna chahta 😆
Haan,woh toh hai. Main toh khud aisa dekhna chahti Hoon 😉😆
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Originally posted by: Kaya_luvakshan
Very nice piece of writing...Tanu ..loved it...
Ok so now once again one VM request...
Song is dilruba ....from the movie traffic signal...
Singer is Kailash kher...
Pls pls pls. Tanu short b chalega but Bana de bahnaaaaa
Bana Diya hai 😳
Happy ending😍😍😍😍
Glad you wrote it.
Epilogue
Although,AJ and Guddan love each other but they haven't become one yet. One fateful day, both are lying on their bed sides. All of sudden, Akshat asks Guddan- should we do it Guddan?? Guddan with a surprise- What Jindal Saab? What do you want to do??
AJ(patting his head)- yeh ladki bhi na ,ek number ki bholi hai,kuch bhi nahi samajhti.
Boliye na Jindal Saab,Kya karna chahte hain aap??
Guddan,tumhe Sach mein samajh nahi aa Raha ki main Kya kehna chah Raha Hoon?? No Jindal Saab, I'm not getting you what you wanna say.
Hey bhagwan,Kya karoon main iss ladki kaa and pulls her towards him.She lands on his chest.Kya hua Jindal Saab,humne kuch galat keh Diya Kya?? Boliye na.
Guddan, Don't you think that we should come close to each other?? 😉
But Jindal Saab hum toh already bahut close Hain.
Hey bhagwan 🤦, Guddan mera Matlab hai ki tumhe nahi lagta ki Hume ek doosre se pyaar karna chahiye??
Par Jindal Saab,hum toh aapse pyaar karte Hain aur aap bhi humse pyaar karte Hain.🙄
Arey yaar tum samajh kyun nahi rahi ki main Kya kehna chahta Hoon?? Toh samjhayiye na Jindal Saab aap Kya kehna chahte Hain.
Guddan,main kehna chahta tha ki we should make love to each other so that we can fulfill maa's wish of having grandchildren😉. Guddan gets shy after listening to this.
Jindal Saab aap bhi na,kaisi kaisi baatein karte Hain. Hume sharam aa rahi hai 🙈. Arey isme sharmane wali Kya baat hai. Don't you want to make your MIL a Dadi soon? Guddan shyly hides her face in his chest .
So shall we?? 😉 and he is about to kiss her but she runs towards the balcony of their room. He follows her and holds her from her waist resting his chin on her shoulder. I love you Guddan,he whispers in her ear and kisses her earlobe. Guddan closes her eyes at his touch. He starts giving kisses on her back,neck and shoulder. Guddan not more able to handle it, just turns around and hugs him tightly. With his finger,he lifts her chin and kisses her forehead,eyes,nose and at last captures her lips in a deep searing kiss. First she was shy, but then she also starts reciprocating the kiss. They both part due to lack of oxygen. Both rest their foreheads on each other.
Jindal saab hum aapse kuch kehna chahte Hain. Bolo na Guddan Kya kehna chahti ho??
Thank you Jindal Saab.For what Guddan?? - He asks.
For marrying me Jindal Saab.
Guddan, are you in your senses?? No Jindal Saab, I'm not and smiles.
Same here- he replies and both hug each again.
Guddan, today I want to make you mine forever. I want to make love to you.But only with your will , I'll not force you.
Jindal Saab, make me yours.
Are you sure Guddan? I mean , do you really want this?? Yes Jindal Saab,I need you now. He takes her in his arms and put her on their bed. He lays beside her. One by one,he removes all her jewellery and their clothes. He covers themselves with a duvet. He starts kissing all the parts of her body. She is just moaning his name which is making him lose his control. Guddan, I'm going to enter you. It will hurt so please let me know if I hurt you. She nodes in positive and he enters her. She winces in pain and scratches his back.After sometime, Pain turned into pleasure and she starts enjoying it. They make love whole night and sleep in each other's embrace.
One month later
Guddan is feeling nauseous. Jindal Saab is worried.
What happened Guddan?? Kuch nahi Jindal Saab bus thoda ulti jaisa feel ho Raha hai and runs towards washroom. He is standing near the washroom. Guddan,are you alright?? Please tell me. Guddan realizes that she has missed her dates and now these vomits. Soon, she gets that why is it happening to her. I think I'm expecting and hides her face in her hands.
Akshat is waiting for her outside the washroom. She comes outside and he asks her if she is fine. She gets shy. Guddan,tum Sharma kyun rahi ho itna. Kuch hua hai kya?? Wo.. woh Jindal Saab hum..Hume. Kya baat hai Guddan khulkar batao. She goes near his ear and whispers- Jindal Saab,I think you are soon gonna be a father. He gets shocked . Is this true Guddan?? Please tell me, pretty please. Yes, Jindal Saab,I think it is but we have to confirm it with the doctor first. In his excitement,he picks Guddan in his arms.
Arey, Jindal Saab yeh Kya Kar rahe Hain. Neeche utaariye Hume. He puts her down and hugs her tightly. Thank you so much Guddan for giving me this happiness. I never thought that I would a father to my own child. You have filled my life with happiness with this news. Thank you so much for making my life complete and pecks her forehead.
They go to doctor in the evening . Doctor confirms the news of Guddan's pregnancy. Both are so excited . After reaching home,they tell the family members about this news. Everyone gets so happy. Maa gives blessings to both of them and thanks Kanha ji for giving her this happiness of becoming a Dadi again.
Akshat takes Guddan to their room and starts taking good care of her. Due to this pregnancy, Guddan has mood swings but Akshat handles all her tantrums with a smile.
5 months have been passed. Guddan is having a baby bump now.
Jindal Saab,dekhiye na kitne mote ho Gaye Hain hum. Itna wazan badh Gaya hai hamara. Toh Kya hua Guddan,aisi condition mein yeh sab normal hai. Aapke liye yeh kehna aasaan,humse puchhiye Kya Kya sehna padh Raha hai aur woh bhi sab aapki wajah se.
Meri wajah se?? Haan aapki wajah se. Aapki wajah se hi toh yeh sab kuch ho Raha. Between this nok-jhok , Guddan feels some movement in her belly and it's a baby kick. She winces in pain.
Kya hua Guddan?? Are you ok?? Dekhiye na Jindal saab,yeh shaitan hamare pet mein football khel Raha hai. Dono basp bete be thaan liya hai Hume pareshan karne ka. Guddan,how do you know that it's a boy,it could be a girl too. Jindal Saab dekh lijiyega ladka hi hoga,nahi Guddan ladki hi hogi. The baby kicks her again. Akshat puts his hand on her belly and feels the movements of his baby and even talk to the baby.
8 months have passed, and it's Guddan's godh bharai. Maa has arranged the function for Guddan. All the ladies give blessings to Guddan and her child. All the family members are very excited as Guddan's due date is very close.
Guddan is in her room and suddenly she is having her labour pain. She shouts -Akshat. Everyone one comes to her room.
Maa tells Akshat to take her to the hospital as her water bag is burst. Akshat takes Guddan to the hospital. Family members also reach there. They are waiting outside the OT. And finally there is a sound of a kid crying in the OT. Everyone gets excited. Doctor comes outside the OT and congratulates Akshat and family for having a baby boy. Yes,Mr. Jindal,it's a boy. Tears fall from his eyes and he the doctor.
Doctor, how's Guddan?? Can I see her??
Yes,Mr. Jindal, both of them are fine and you can see them.
Akshat goes inside the room and holds the baby in his arms. Tears of happiness are flowing from his eyes. He takes the baby near Guddan. She holds him and kisses his forehead.
Guddan,are you fine? And pecks her forehead. Yes Jindal Saab, I'm fine. Thank you so much Guddan for giving me this happiness.You have made my life complete now. Now there is some one who will call me papa and will call you mamma. Then family members enter the room. They take the child in their hands one by one.
They name the child as - " Armaan Jindal" . Dadi thanks Kanha for this blessing and hugs her son and DIL.
Years of marital bliss and Armaan is now 5 years old. He is the apple of everyone's eyes especially Akshat. They both make a good team against Guddan to irritate her everytime.But she loves her the most even more than her Jindal Saab because,he is just like her Jindal Saab even one-step ahead.
The end.
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PS- Ignore the typos