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U portrayed guddan's feelings well
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But can we get another part plz
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U portrayed guddan's feelings well
Maza aa gya
But can we get another part plz
Thank you so much for liking it😳
Originally posted by: Kaya_luvakshan
Very nice piece of writing...Tanu ..loved it...
Ok so now once again one VM request...
Song is dilruba ....from the movie traffic signal...
Singer is Kailash kher...
Pls pls pls. Tanu short b chalega but Bana de bahnaaaaa
Yeh kaunsa song hai?? 🤔
Yeh kaunsa song hai?? 🤔
Suno naa...pls ... MATLAB mujhe achcha lagaaa .... Isiliye Bola ...aapki marzi aage ...😭
Originally posted by: Kaya_luvakshan
Suno naa...pls ... MATLAB mujhe achcha lagaaa .... Isiliye Bola ...aapki marzi aage ...😭
Yaar I love this song. Mere favorite serial mein bajta tha yeh 😍
You guys requested me to write another part of it. So here it is
Guddan,I wish I could stop you right now. Kaash tum mujhe samajh paati ,mere pyaar ko samajh paati. Yeh pyaar jhootha nahi hai ,utna hi Sacha hai jitna iss Akshat Jindal ka wajood. I know you are hurt with Antra's return in my life. More than that you are angry with me that I could not give you your right in front of Antra. I'm the reason for your tears. But I promise I'll fix everything soon.A determined AJ said while looking at Guddan who is about to leave with her parents to her home.
Lalla, Guddan kahaan Chali gayi?? Maa, she is gone and just hugged her mother tightly. Maa, what should I do now?? How will I be able to to survive without her. I know that Antra is back but I'm not getting that same connect with her which was 15 years back. I'm happy that she is alive but don't know why I'm not able to love her anymore. I wanted to tell her about Guddan that she is my wife and I only love her but due to her health I wasn't able to do so.
Hausla rakh Lalla,sab theek ho jaayega. Mujhe bharosa hai apne kaanha par woh sab theek Kar denge. Par maa,main Guddan ke bagair kaise reh paayunga,aap toh jaanti Hain use dekh dekhkar hi toh yeh Akshat Jindal jeeta hai. Aur ab jab woh yahaan hai hi nahi Mera saans Lena bhi mushkil ho gaya hai. I just want to go to her right now, want to see her.
Guddan is in her room at her home. She has made her room a mess and nothing left unbroken in her room. She is only crying and crying on her fate. Why Jindal Saab,why?? Why did you do this to me me?? Why did you break my heart?? I thought that your love for me is above all but you proved me wrong. You only love Antra ji. I meant nothing in your life. It was always Antra ji. Agar pyaar tha hi nahi toh kyun Hume ehsaas dilaya ki humse pyaar karte Hain. Hum iss ehsaas me Bina hi theek the atleast koi expectation toh nahi thi na aapse. Par jab Hume ehsaas karwa Diya ki hum aapke Bina nahi reh sakte,tabhi yeh sab hona tha. Humne aaj Tak apne aap ko itna kamzor mehsoos nahi Kiya. Sach kehte hain log ,kisi se mohabbat Insaan ko bahut kamzor,mehkoom aur majboor Kar deti hai. Aur Hume inn teeno cheezon se nafrat hai.
In Jindal bhawan
AJ is sitting near the balcony and reminiscing the moments he spent with Guddan. Tears are rolling down from his eyes. Guddan, please come back. I promise I won't hurt you again.I know how you must be feeling right now because I'm feeling the same. Woh theek toh hogi na??- His mind questioned. Should I call her?? No, I have to go to her right now to see her whether she is fine or not.
With this,he takes his car keys and leaves for her house. He reaches their but he doesn't have the courage to go inside the home. He is just sitting in his car and looking at the window of her room so that he could get just one glimpse of her to assure himself that she is fine. He is waiting and waiting but she didn't come. It's morning and he is still waiting for her to come in her balcony. And finally, the moment has arrived and she is there. Her face looks full,eyes swollen as if she didn't stop crying all the night. It's hurting him.
It's all because of me Guddan. I'm the reason of this condition of yours. But it won't last long. Today I'll tell Antra that you are my wife and life.I can't see you suffer like this without any fault.You will be back to your home today. With this,he goes back to his home.
Antra,Antra- he shouts.
What happened Akshat?? Why are you shouting??
I'm sorry Antra but I need to talk to you. I wanted to speak with you yesterday too but couldn't get a chance.
What is it Akshat?? Tell me. Why are looking so stressed?? Is there any problem??
Yes Antra,there is a problem and the problem is you.
Antra gets shocked after listening this.
What are you saying Akshat?? I'm your wife. How can I be a problem for you??
No Antra, you are not my wife anymore. I have given this right to someone else.And it's not my fault. I had just fulfilled your wish only. You only wanted me to get remarried. You wrote those letters which forced me to marry Guddan.
Guddan?? Antra murmured.
Yes Guddan, she is my legal wife. She is Mrs. Guddan Akshat Jindal. My only wife whom I love alot and can't live without her. Antra , you don't hold any right on me now. I'm only Guddan's husband. I'm not your Akshat anymore. I'm only her Jindal Saab.
Main chaahkar bhi tumhe woh haq nahi de sakta kyunki sirf Guddan ka haq hai mujhpar. Main usse bahut pyaar karta Hoon. I had never thought that I would love someone else in my life except you but I was wrong.She changed me completely.
Antra sitting on her knees trying to observe everything what Akshat is saying and then stands up wiping her tears . Akshat, you need not to be sorry. It's not your fault. 15 years is such a long time. I'm happy that you have moved on in your life. I'm sure Guddan must be a very nice girl, that's why you love her alot. It's just my bad luck that I can't have you in my life anymore. Because you are not my Akshat anymore.
Thank you so much Antra for understanding me and hugs her. It's okay Akshat , I'm happy for you.
But where is Mrs. Guddan Akshat Jindal?? I couldn't talk to her yesterday. I want to meet her now and wanna see that what is so special about her that you love her so much and smiled.
She has left Antra.She thought that now I will only live with you as you are back. And I even didn't stop her. She will hate me Antra.
Don't worry Akshat,aisa kuch nahi hoga. I'll go with you and make her understand that you are only hers. Thank you so much Antra. No, Akshat, you need not to thank me . Ab chalein tumahri Guddan ko waapis laane. Akshat smiles and they leave for Gupta house.
In Gupta house
Guddan is still behaving so restless. She is breaking things and even talking very rudely with her family members. Her parents are worried for her. Bhushan decides to talk to Akshat. Just then their door bell rings. Bhushan opens the door and sees Akshat and Antra on the door.
Damaad ji aap ?? Aur yeh aapke saath yahaan Kya Kar rahi Hain?? Pehle hi Meri bachi Kam pareshan hai Jo ab aap inhe apne saath le aaye.
I'm sorry papa. I know I have done a big mistake. But please tell me where is Guddan?? I want to talk to her.
Ab baat karne ke liye Kya bacha hai. Ab toh aapki pehli wife waapis aa gayi hai ab aapko Guddan ki Kya zaroorat.
Just then Antra speaks, bhushan ji Akshat be mujhe sab Bata Diya hai. Uski aur Guddan ki Shaadi ke baare mein aur hum Guddan ko waapis lene aaye Hain aur Maine decide Kiya hai ki main humesha humesha ke liye inn dono ki zindagi se Chali jaaungi.
Bhushan folds his hands in front of Antra and thanks her. Arey yeh aap Kya Kar rahe Hain bhushan ji ,iski koi zaroorat nahi hai. Akshat pati home se pehle Mera dost tha. Aur ek dost ke Dil ki baat ek dost nahi samjhega toh aur kaun samjhega. Main samajh chuki Hoon ki Akshat sirf Guddan se hi pyaar karta hai aur inn dono ko hi saath mein hona chahiye.
Papa, batayiye na Guddan kahaan hai?? Beta Kal raat se hi apne kamre mein baithi hai. Na kuch khaaya hai na piya . Ab tum hi jaakar dekho use.
Akshat goes to her room and sees the condition of her room . It's a mess. Iss ladki ka kuch nahi ho sakta and smiles.
Chhutki humne kaha tha na Hume disturb mat karna par tum phir aa gayi. She is going to throw something on her and turns towards her but gets shocked to see Akshat in front of her.
Arey ruko ruko,yeh Kya karne ja rahi ho. Apne pati ko maarogi??
Aap yahaan, yahaan Kya Kar rahein aap?? Apni biwi ke pass jaayiye na.😏
Akshat (teasingly) Usi ke pass toh aaya Hoon.
Kya Matlab hai aapka?? Hume confuse mat kijiye.
He is moving close to her and she is moving back and hits her back in the wall.
He pins her to the wall and goes near her ear. Matlab yeh ki tum hi toh Meri biwi,Mrs. Guddan Akshat Jindal and kisses her earlobe. Guddan closes her eyes. She is having sensations in her body with his touch and hardly manages to say- aap phir jhooth bol rahein Hain na humse. Aapki biwi toh Antra ji hai na ,aapka pehla aur aapki pyaar. Toh aap unhi ke pass jaayiye na ab. He gets irritated with her Antra jaap and shushed her.
Bus bahut ho Gaya,ab aur bardaasht nahi ho Raha hai mujhse. Kya kabse tumne Antra Antra- laga rakha hai. You are my wife and you know that I love you alot then why are you doing this to me??
No, you don't love me. You only love Antra ji. That's it,he is now completely frustrated and just presses his lips on hers and kisses her deeply. She is standing still in a shock and he is just doing his work on her lips.And bites her lower lips. She winces in pain and moans. Akshat please don't do this to me. I won't be able to handle it.
Why do you need to handle it damnit?! You are my legally wedded wife. You have all the rights on me as a wife. I love you, you love me then what's the problem and put his head in the crook of her neck. She starts caressing his hair. But Antra ji,unka Kya hoga??
Tum Antra ki chinta mat karo,Maine use sab much Bata Diya hai hamari Shaadi ke baare mein and she has accepted this truth. So you need not to worry about her and pecks her forehead.
Just then,Antra enters her room. Yes Guddan, Akshat is right. He has told me everything about you and your wedding and I have decided to move out from his life. He only loves you not me.So please forgive him and go with him to your own house.
I'm sorry Antra ji. Hamari wajah se aapko yeh sab karna padh Raha hai. You need not to be sorry Guddan. Yeh Mera woh Akshat hai hi nahi,yeh bus tumahre Jindal Saab Hain. Guddan hugs Antra . Guddan takes a leave from her parents and goes with Akshat.
On reaching Jindal bhawan,Dadi and Laxmi bahu welcome her and did her grihpravesh. Everyone gets happy except Durga and saru. Antra congratulates Akshan and take their leave.
Akshat takes Guddan in his arms and goes to his room in front of everyone. And they have their room pravesh together.
Welcome back Mrs. Guddan Akshat Jindal to your world. Yes Mrs. Jindal this room is our small world where we have to make our own memories, where we have to live together and where we have to deliver a lot of babies like you. Guddan gets shy at his thoughts and hugs him tightly.
I love you,I love you so much Guddan and we can never fall apart, not in this life. I was,I am and will be yours forever.
I love you more Jindal Saab, thank you for having me in your life.
And they live happily ever after.
The end
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