KALMA FF - A promise .... Part 5 updated. Read author note pg 17

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hello all , I am Neera

Naam to suna hoga. 🤣

Here I am presenting a teaser of my upcoming ff - A promise to keep you with me till my death overcome my love for you..

A promise to keep you with me till my death overcome my love for you..

Both Kalyani and malhar are lying in the beacon of moon which is embellishing them in ornaments of love holding each other hands . Just remembering which just happen a day before.

In this one day they have got all slaps from their fate and all blessings from god.

In this one day thousands of emotions emerge in their heart.

In this one day their eyes are as wet as a ocean and as dry And red as fire.

Malhar try one last time to save his life his Kalyani, and his aai.

Hope you like it.

Mai iska 1 St chap Sunday tak hi upload Kar paoongi. And this ff going to be very long as my imagination has no end ( no exaggeration).

Shower your love with lovely reply

Index

Chap 1

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/150570456?tid=5097778

Teaser for next chapter

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/150599086?tid=5097778

Chapter 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/150726854?tid=5097778

Teaser of 3rd Part

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/150781420?tid=5097778

Chapter 3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/150803319?tid=5097778

Teaser of 4 part

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/150898012?tid=5097778

Chapter 4

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/150910665?tid=5097778

Teaser of 5 part

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/150956494?tid=5097778

Chapter 5

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/150965578?tid=5097778

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Posted: 6 years ago
#2

Superb start Neera..👏 nice teaser 👌

Love it..😍

Keep it up..👍

We will be waiting for the updates.

Dw we all are full of patience as we all had been through CVs torturous OTT drama tracks for KalMa so we will wait for it and can do anything for KalMa..😂🤣

N wish your KalMa imagination stays infinite as always..♾..😍🥰🤩

Lots of love ❤️

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Bring it on....

And welcome

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wow neera.... Awesome....

Waiting for the update....

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Its beautiful as a poem and magical as a fantacy .bring it on girl waiting .

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Jaa beta tujhe hm nhi pehchante 😂😂😁😁

Amazing teaser neera 👏🥳 well done🥳

Waiting for update

Aur likhti rhiyo 😊

Sochti to Mai bhi hu ki kuch likhu par Kya kr apne ko to sirf dusro ke os padhne me mazaa aata hai ....likhne me to aalas Cha jaata hai 😁😁😂😅😅

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hello all, I am posting chapter 1 today only as I am very happy ( I love rain and here mansoon aa gaya hai)

Thank you Darshi Di, titli Di, Sri di, taani Di, Nisha Di, rakhi Di, Lina di, chahat and aazeen Di for reading my teaser. Love you all ...

This ff will have around 5-6 parts though I have written 2 parts only but I will surely complete it soon.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Chapter 1

Both Kalyani and malhar are lying in the beacon of moon which is embellishing them in ornaments of love holding each other hands . Just remembering which just happen a day before.

In this one day they have got all slaps from their fate and all blessings from god.

In this one day thousands of emotions emerge in their heart.

In this one day their eyes are as wet as a ocean and as dry And red as fire.

Malhar try one last time to save his life his Kalyani, and his aai.

He decide to swap atharv from marriage.

He dressed as groom and tried to give surprise to Kalyani.

Kalyani was happy to know that she was marrying her Prince Charming again but a sudden thought of her aai made her loose herself. 😭

She start shivering, trembling ,fidgetting thinking about consequences which her aai face if she do not marry atharv .😭

She start sobbing.

Malhar was confused about her sudden change in behaviour. Without knowing a tear escaped from his eye. Without any delay he hold Kalyani shoulders and ask her what happen .

Kalyani present her thoughts to malhar . Malhar understand her condition and console her. He told Kalyani that he has a plan in which he made fool to atharv goons and take aai back. 👍🏼

Malhar eyes are sinking in Kalyani eyes..

He ask her if she trust him.

Kalyani hold malhar hands and look into malhar eyes and said malhar ji there are some facts in this world which can never change like

Fact no 1 Wind never stop flowing

Fact no 2 no one is eternal.

And one such fact is that I trust you with all my heart. I trust you like my breathes on air.

Malhar could not control his tsunami of emotions.

He just spread her arms and take a innocent soul in his warmth. Malhar say Kalyani you are mine and I promise aai will be with us and soon all this will over. 😊

Kalyani didn't utter a single word but just wandering in his warmth. SHe is now a free bird who doesn't care for anyone.

Malhar leaves Kalyani saying he is going for some important work.

Kalyani was swinging in air of love.

She is now super duper happy to again marry her malhar ji .

All family members are confused why she is happy on her upcoming disaster wedding.

She sat In Mandap and wait for her latest branded groom.

Her groom was there. She didn't spoke to groom.

And perform all rituals well. Everything was going well .

But suddenly she feel some ache in her body so he told malhar about that. She said to malhar, malhar ji can we stop for a while as I need to go bathroom .

But the next moment she is awestruck.

She hear the voice of atharv.

She is in complete shock.

She immediately remove his sehra and saw the face of " 6 feet long bail "🤣

He give a wicked smile to Kalyani .

Atharv went close to Kalyani and whisper in her ears, "Kalyani jyada shock mat ho, tumhari shadi mujhse hi honi thi or vahi toh ho rahi hai. Mai bhi malhar rane ka baap hoo. Vo mujhe ek baaji mai hara sakta hai lekin yeh Jung meri hai. Tum meri Ho sirf. Aur Haan tumhari aur malhar ki galti ki saza tumhare pure parivaar ko milegi.

Tumhari aai aur pati ko bhagwan ke paas bhej diya hai. Unki hi raakh par hamari aaj suhaag raat hogi. Tumhare Pillu ka bhi maine sauda Kar diya hai. Ab wo jab lautega toh underworld don bankar hi lotega. Tumhare sarthak kaka kal tak jail me honge aur Anupriya aur malhar ke khooni hai wo.

Ab koi nahi aaega tumhe bachane meri jaan. I am your lover wo bhi psycho....

You will be mine Kalyani.

Toh jyada chalak banne ki koshish Karna bhi mat.. So now let's continue our wedding rituals. "

He apart from her and said " Are kuch nahi hua hai. Be calm. Actually my wife is very excited for consummation And she can't wait.

Atul : " Koi nahi Kalyani. Abhi shaadi toh karlo then suhaag raat bhi mana lena. Maine bola tha na you will love your husband.

Kalyani was fully devastated now. Her legs are trembling now. She cant take it anymore. She loose herself and tears start escaping from her eyes.

She was doubting her own existence.

How a 18 year old girl can be a reason of her own family devastation. She looses her aai once again. When she loose her madhuri, she think she now can live for a reason. To take revenge for her mother death. But god rewarded her again with a more sweeter Maa. She loves her as much she loves madhuri. But just bcoz of her a beautiful heart get murdered from a evil man. Her aai was like a few good people in world which are like reincarnation of god. She also loose her husband. He was the only man in her life. She feels protection in warmth of malhar. She never dreams of his husband. In all her life, she just wish one thing, that, her lover will remain always happy. Kalyani wishes to falling stars always " Hey all falling stars, I am taking vows in front of you that I am in love with a person for whom my breathes are on. My shadow is living. That one person is someone with which I am entangled from infinite past to infinite future....

I don't know his name but I can feel his presence around me "

Kalyani at that moment ensure that malhar is the only her soul mate for which her existence exist.

But now what is good in it. As she looses her love and that falling stars also Fraud her.

Kalyani feels very pity for Pillu and sarthak. She just can't take it more. She loose her balance and fall off. Her head struck to pillar of the Mandap and she have hurted herself and she get fainted...

Edited by Vermilion - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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All readers plz give a detailed explanation about do you like this chap aur you want something extra in next parts..

Plz tell me what you like in this

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Oh ! Wow! Too much mystrey ! Too much tension ! I hope everything will b sorted ! Malhar pillu and aai will b back .

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