KALMA FF - A promise .... Part 5 updated. Read author note pg 17 - Page 3

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Posted: 6 years ago
#21

Oh my god!!!! Suspense and drama totally my thing.

I am so sorry I did not see the chapter before. I assumed it was just a teaser. But no worries cause read it now and I am eagerly waiting for another chapter.

Please one request though Malhar Rane, Bapat ka Baap ki dhasu entry honi chhahiye. Pretty please with cherry on top. (Requesting with a puppy dog eyes). Thodi maar pit ho to bhi chalega.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#22

Hello all so here is the teaser for 2 nd chapter

Guys I will post 2 chap in this week but when I don't know..

As I get time I will post it

okay na all😛

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Posted: 6 years ago
#23

Teaser for second chap

Time is passing as normal for rest of the world. But time is pacing up for someone's breath...

Breathes are willing to win but fate is not ready to give up..

Owner of these unknown breathing is none other than Aurangabad ka singham and bapat ka baap and Kalyani ka hamsafar..

He is neither on the earth..

Nor in heaven

He is in the world where he leaves his physical entity and just introduce himself as a maddest soul for Kalyani....

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Posted: 6 years ago
#24

Hey guys do you like the teaser.. 👍🏼👎🏼

Guys I add more words to the chapter to make scene intense. I like to play with words...

So next chapter are going to be slow

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Posted: 6 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Anna.Adh

Oh my god!!!! Suspense and drama totally my thing.

I am so sorry I did not see the chapter before. I assumed it was just a teaser. But no worries cause read it now and I am eagerly waiting for another chapter.

Please one request though Malhar Rane, Bapat ka Baap ki dhasu entry honi chhahiye. Pretty please with cherry on top. (Requesting with a puppy dog eyes). Thodi maar pit ho to bhi chalega.

Di I am already giving a grand entry to malhar but I don't know I will able to met your hopes or not...

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Posted: 6 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Vermilion

Hey guys do you like the teaser.. 👍🏼👎🏼

Guys I add more words to the chapter to make scene intense. I like to play with words...

So next chapter are going to be slow

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Posted: 6 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Vermilion

Teaser for second chap

Time is passing as normal for rest of the world. But time is pacing up for someone's breath...

Breathes are willing to win but fate is not ready to give up..

Owner of these unknown breathing is none other than Aurangabad ka singham and bapat ka baap and Kalyani ka hamsafar..

He is neither on the earth..

Nor in heaven

He is in the world where he leaves his physical entity and just introduce himself as a maddest soul for Kalyani....

It is awesome neera

I waiting for the next part

Update soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Dk26

It is awesome neera

I waiting for the next part

Update soon

Will update di soon

Thank you for liking it 😃

Edited by Vermilion - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#29

Teaser seems interesting...

Waiting for the update...

Continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
#30

Sorry for late reply ...u can beat me for this

Teaser and first chapter is awesome 👏👏

I like Your way of explaining .....so beautifully expressed ......🥳

Update soon beta vrna I beat u for this 🤣

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