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Posted: 6 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Arshukaurkhushi

Mukku baby read it and execute in ur show

Mahima needs reality check

Please...this needs to happen in the show 😭

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Posted: 6 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: shonagudia

Very Beautifully written. You have included so many situations which they just forgot to discuss in the show . šŸ¤—

Specially the part where Drishti saved Mahima from that sword. No one ever mention or checked if she's fine or not , forget about checking the cut or thanking her. 😔

I really hope Rakshit respond half of this if not completely in the show once to Mahima n Lavanya ..

It annoyed me that the family keeps forgetting so many incidents that took place in their house and involved Drishti. Like you mentioned, the sword part was so bluntly overlooked. I wished Rakshit would say something to Mahima and Lavanya but none of that happened and what happened only encouraged Lavanya more.

Thank you so much for the wonderful comment ā¤ļø

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Posted: 6 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: vrindagupta

Wow

Finally Rakshit took a stand

Yup, finally, but only in the story. He did something completely different in the show šŸ˜•

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Posted: 6 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Hallyumint

Loved that you wrote from Ra pov.

Cause Ra Has always been sidelined in the show.

Lage raho

Loved your story by the way

Do write more ...

That was the sole motivation of writing this OS; Rakshit POV never being expressed well in the show.

Thank you so much ā¤ļø

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Posted: 6 years ago
#25

When they will stop assuming my silence to be my agreement.——woww sam what a line.šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ¼

Yup mahima shaitaan n lavanya chipku.😈😔

Amazing os sam.šŸ‘ā¤ļø

Liked the way u penned down rakshit’s dialogue.

Finally he had spoken to mahima n lavanya n abt this second marriage n gave them piece of mahima.šŸ‘šŸ¼

N the spl part that u made dri to hear this conversation šŸ¤—

Loved it.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Aquabutterfly

It annoyed me that the family keeps forgetting so many incidents that took place in their house and involved Drishti. Like you mentioned, the sword part was so bluntly overlooked. I wished Rakshit would say something to Mahima and Lavanya but none of that happened and what happened only encouraged Lavanya more.

Thank you so much for the wonderful comment ā¤ļø

@Bold , I really hope n wish , there's some logic/explanation behind his action.. I am highly disappointed with the show and it's writing ... Hope this improves..

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aquabutterfly

Great minds think alike, after all. Your comments always have a message in them and that's why I simply adore them ā¤ļø

Thanks dear :) i love sharing my exp. of 38 years hoping other people do not make the same mistakes i did. sometimes a diff perspective helps

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Heloo sam šŸ¤—

Beautifuly written šŸ‘

Loved it

Hope we ill get something like this

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Posted: 6 years ago
#29

Love love love it ! Kaash ye sach mein serial happen like this. But alas !

Anyway, after reading others comments, it’s true there are many incidents that are just like touch n go for this family. And most of them are supposed to be big deals ! It’s like to concentrate more on the supernatural stuffs, the writers forgot to balance the relationship equations in the house as well. Bar bar jap Rakshit ne dekha, Mahima keeps pressurizing Rakshit to get married to Lavanya. Also, she seems to have forgotten that, after what Panditji said, to have his son married to the right girl at the right time, isnt she the least bit happy that after marrying Drishti, he’s still alive and well ? Bhool gayi hai kya ? Beta abhi bhi sahi salamat ho, even married to Drishti. Doesn’t that mean she's the right girl ?

Now after reading your OS, I’m soo curious about what happens next. Will Drishti confess ? Will she keep mum about her secrets ? Will she thank Rakshit ? If ever you have the time and idea, do keep continuing this story ! I love this side of both the characters. Also maybe how Mahima can slowly begin to accept Drishti :)

Keep up the good work, and sending all the love and positive vibes to you ā™„ļø

Edited by Hanyshah - 6 years ago

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