Ariya FF: Niyati ka Khel [Thread 2] - Page 59

Awesome update

Loveit

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Awesome update..

Finally Sikander is dead... He loved Ahana very much..

Sik seems human near his death

People form connections with another no matter how cols and cruel they may seem

Every one craves love

Finally sikky is dead

But his love for ahana is something else

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Amazing.....👏

Seriously i m glad that "the sikander" who did all the cruel things and was a complete monster has finally met his end.........

But i feel pity for the lover part of sik who has loved someone so much.........

Thanks for the update 😊

Please continue soon.....

cmnts on part-30

ek mnt ek mnt... mera dimag faat raha hai.. I mean ye ho kya raha hai yaar?? Ahana to bht pehle maar chuki thi na sikandar k vaja se?? I mean mujhe to yehi yaad hai ki arjun injured the Hospital me n baki team Ahana ko bachane gaya tha but uski already death ho chuki thi ryt?? I mean argh yaar ye actual me kya tha?? flashback or plan?? aab kya chal raha hai kuch v to samajh nhi aa raha ha!! God!! ok next part jaldi dena n mera confusion v thora dur kr dena agr possible to... thnx for pm...

Awesome update

Read part30 n 31

Love it

Finally sik is death...

Plz continue soon

Thnx for pm

Nice update finally Sik dead update soon

How did I miss this one. Read all updates in one go.

You have beautifully captured emotions and the way you have woven the flashbacks and their feelings is awesome.

I have become a fan of this one. Your way of expressing is great specifically those cliffhangers.

Do continue soon. Please add me to your PM list

Nice story.All the Ariya moments were beautiful specially liked the dinner date and when first time Arjun tells Riya about his past.You described Arjun's emotion beautifully whenever he was devastated, in pain, his loneliness or rage.

Liked how first Riya then Ayesha make Sameer understand his fault & his apologize.

How can one make same mistake twice.Sameer shouldn't accuse Arjun when Riya was hospitalized for second time.But Ryan's outburst was natural.Other team members also shouldn't accuse as they knew what Arjun had been through before.Good that he'll not forgive them so soon.

Purab-Ryan-Arjun relation & their moments was lightful.

Sakshi's past was painful.Glad that at least she found her love now.

Why that Kirti is even on ETF? She should be out of ETF not just for undercover mission but for lifetime.

Sometimes it feel like Arjun is Rockstar when he said that he'll not hurt her for the third time and sometimes not.When will this Rockstar mystery unfold

Felt bad for Sikander.You depicted Sikander's part very beautifully when he knew Ahana was in danger.But as you sow, so you reap.Can't escape doing bad things.

Once, in your reply you said that Ryan & Ahana will not end up together.But why? People make mistakes and they should given second chance.I admit he was too rude but his sister's life was in danger & he was worried.Arjun also did the same.If Arjun can be given chance why not Ryan.Moreover, they love each other.But yeah Ryan should repent badly.Sorry if I sound offensively.

Now, few questions my mind couldn't answer through the story😳

1. Whose funeral ETF did? The girl Riya mentioned as her look-alike or another.
2. Why Ryan didn't do Riya's funeral? I know you answered.But he hadn't any proof being her alive apart from the emotional one.He blasted Arjun & Ahana now but can't show up that time.
3. Why Ryan didn't look for Riya before finding her on hospital? Although they lived in the same apartment before & now.She was kidnapped not in any undercover mission and no one knew.
4. You didn't reveal the reason why Ahana was annoyed with Purab, did you?
5. How none of team knew Riya's brother (except Arjun& Shree) after her death and informed her family

Sorry for all the questions but these were running in my head & I couldn't but ask you😳Disadvantage of reading many parts together.

P.S. Can you check if the links given on first thread working on current window? Every time I click, it not works and I had to open the links on another window.