MG story- O... Majnu ke nana!! p2/pg12 Teaser-pg17 28july.

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Geet was busy with some guest when her cousins pulled her for dance. She danced with them as it was her only brother's wedding, she must enjoy it fully. They all had been practising for last few weeks for it.

She was busy twirling and laughing with them, when suddenly she collided with someone very strongly. She would have lost her balance, had it not been for the person holding her in place, with his hands around her waist.

Geet stiffened feeling the close proximity and immediately distance herself taking a few steps away. Then after a moment of composing her self, Geet was about to turn to thank that person for saving her, But got shocked hearing the person speak,...

" Kuch cheezein kabhi nahi badalti.. Haina?? You won't ever learn to take care of your self..!!! Haan..???"

Geet turn around quickly to confirm and was stunned to see him there. As if he read her mind, a smirk came on his lips...

"Nahi, baby don't stress your little mind, I am very much here in real".....he said with a flirty smile & came a little closer to her and whispered...

" You are not dreaming me like usual... ".. With that he winked at her!

While geet who had been shocked to see him, came back to her senses with his teasing & flirting comments like usual. She got angary with his smirk and attitude. She won't let him have the satisfaction anymore.

" Aur kuch log bhi kabhi nahi badalte. Besharm k besharam hi rahte hai,... Hamesha ki tarah.. Haina???? " She spoke taunting him about his flirting with her.

But it didn't have any effect on him. Instead, his smile became more naughty and deep...

"That's what I like about you the most, Tum mujhe kitni achhe se jaanti ho naa!! Tabhi toh kahta hoon... You are perfect for me!!! "

He came closer and closer with each word, invading her personal space.. While Geet fumed seeing him unaffected by her earlier comment.

Geet pushed him away, creating some distance between them and glared at him in anger. In return, he gave her his most charming smile ever.

She wanted to slap him badly to wipe that stupid smile off his face... Instead she controlled her self and tried to move away from him.

Look at the guts of this man! First making her angary and now blocking her way... She looked at him irritated. He only smiled back at her, asking..

"Itni jaldi kya hai jaane ki..?? Kuch der ruko mere paas..!! "

Geet was ready to retort him back when someone called her, making him back out instantly.

And taking the chance, she quickly moved from him and his reach.

After that Geet tried her best to not come in front of him.... Whereas, he tried his best to cross her path as much as possible and irritate her all the more. She couldn't do much, there were many guest , plus he was no. 1 flirt, he didn't mind that there were so many people around watching his antics.

Geet was standing with few girls which were from the brides side, when her gaze met his and he gave a flirty smile to her again. The girls noticed it and commented that how dashing & handsome he is.

Geet felt her anger increase at his behavior, while those comments made by the girls, only added to it.

"Flirt kahinka..!!! " She spat glaring at him angrily, and he winked at her again. She gasped at his audacity, but was relived that no one noticed it... Thank fully!

Like that, he kept irritating her and came behind her all the time, while she kept moving away to get rid of him.




PS: would continue if got good response... Or else think of it as a random oneshot

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Lovely update..

Waiting for next update..

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thanks for posting! will defn comment!

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congrats

awesome update

geet is very much irritated with someones flriting

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Congrats on your story

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So cute! Naughty Maan is always very hot

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Nice one

Please continue further

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Superb countinue soon.

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Hie Shona...

Congrats on this new Maaneet cute story...🤗

Would love for you to continue this...😃

Edited by sahibasharma - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Story...

It seems Maaneet know each other from before...is he like her brother's friend or something?

Lovely to see him fooling around with her and irritating her with his flirty nature...

Always love to see the fun and naughty side of Maan...

Geet looks cute being all irritated and angry on Maan...but he simply loves to irk her more...

Nice start...

continue soon...would love to know the background of the story...

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