The revolutionary RagKor- A different attempt - Page 8

Nikki dear

what was that

😱😧 I re read to confirm

when I saw your new update 😃and first read no mishap in Lucknow episode I was happy

but when I read the end

whats up..i thought bullet will miss the mark when he ran to save her

ok this is comment teaser😁 full one coming soon😆

Great going Nikki

Love the story. I'll start with the last part:

I suspected that KN and Teju knew Raghav was smuggling something 😆, loved their plan and Teju's acting.

Love the way you described Ragkor meeting, the conflict between their emotions and yearning for each other and the need to act formal in front of Chakor's parents.

Raghav kidnapping Chakor was cute, nothing could stop our dude from meeting his lady.

The end is shocking, hope Raghav is safe. I'm curious to know what it'll lead to.

Love the progress in Ragkor story and how you weave the drama into it.

Part 4:

The lake scene was , the way he comforted her and realized he can't see her tears, the way she felt safe in his arms and him blurting out that she's beautiful ❤️. The broken bones line was funny and so true of our jungli billi 😆. Chakor took longer to get ready 😉, love those small details.

Part 5:

Raghav's unplanned confession ❤️❤️, poor Raghav he must've been hurt seeing Chakor avoiding him, but she knew what her heart wanted straightaway 😃.

Changing the place of the meeting was a smart move. Raghav was the first one to oppose Chakor 😆 and Rana shouting to stop their bickering 😆. Agree the plan if fine in lives are lost.

Part 6:

This part was love 😍😍. Chakor's confession scene was beautiful, the new sensations and emotions, Chakor's anticipation for the kiss and Raghav stopping 💕💕, it reminded me of Sukor haldi scene.

Raghav walking with Chakor for "protection" 😆. Loved Chakor's shyness when Raghav looked at her. The scene was 🔥🔥🔥.

Part 7:

The team members were funny, pretending not to know about the lovebirds, teasing them, interrupting them, just what friends would do.

Ragkor scene was emotional and heart touching. Teju and KN going with Raghav was unexpected.

Nikki..... whatta dhamaka yaar suuper.

👏 Loved KaJu combo... ha ha whose parents ughhhh haaa helping the son and he getting irritated typical..... loved it.

dude want to get fast to meet her, her palpitation and she running to meet and they meeting but holding themselves,,, the urge to hug but just sharing that he has returned fine. I liked that ....

A big smile when he kidnapped her but shortlived... Ooops am sure nothing will happen to him if at all she is there to bring him back....

If at all you try to do something I will send you the Bomb Man to bombard you🤣

Very intriguing Nikki.... good...

Okies next update please.😊

@Uma......i am floored with the GIF's...so apt they are always..yeah i know the end na...me too sincerely hope he is safe...but never know...its a freedom struggle dear....😈

@mesh........whoa...thanks for the effort mesh🥳.....very sweet of you to recap all the chapters...hope the remaining 3,4 also turn out to be Ok.

@sumi...isnt your "update" request coming too frequently!!!....ha ha bomb man...is in the jail...so i am safe....😉

Sri again a big thank you for the comment....I relived my story through it. Love you loads

Super aswm undate Niki di 👏👏👏full of suspense,thrill&drama..loved it..loved KN & Teju's plan, Teju's acting & d way dey fooled d guards..so dey already knew Raghav was smuggling d bombs & made their plans accordingly..Raghav coming to meet worried Chakor after returning back was a beautiful scene😍both of dem were longing fr each other,emotions were flowing high bt dey couldn't show it due to d presence of Chakor's parents..dey were forced to control their feelings & act normal..lovely scene Raghav abducting Chakor for a secret meeting 😍 another beautiful scene..whatever happens Raghav just can't stay away frm his Chakor😍that was so cute..thn Ragkor's hug,their eyelock which spoke a thousand words,d way he caressed her face,Chakor saying I love u😍such a blissful scene it was💘bt the climax was scene was a bolt frm d blue..it was so shocking..praying for Raghav's safety..eagerly waiting for d next update,hope Raghav is safe..u r just acing it Niki di

Nikki 🤗,

Coming to part8

I loved KN , Teju plan and even raghav was surprised, its good to visualise KN as good and a light hearted family moment of raghav with them. Its nice. And thankfully Lucknow episode ended peacefully.

then they had to stay back for some time to avoid suspicion and whether Suraj worried or not, I was worrying😁 , oh then mean he will be late and till that chakor wont be having a peaceful breath.

then i knew he will be more worried than me, he immediately went to meet her though its late night and I loved how you wrote the scene..the urge to be in each other arms but acting formal for bhuka sake, surely it will be killing inside.

then finally Raghav found a way to meet her...we knew they will be missing each other like hell...and I am awed at their hug ,his caressing and her ILU.

but then came the THUD moment. john came😱 and they were caught😒 chakor asking not to reveal and she going on and on, I can visualise and imagine. chakor in opponent arms and in gun point, can visualise Raghav feelings and reactions too. as we thought, he ran to save her, he saved her but whats next.😧.

you stopped😁 ..awaiting next update now.

hope he is safe.. you told, you like straightforward sweet stories right..no tragic na.. but if thats the case, Raghav is not injured , I am even more eager to read whats next bcoz how they gonna handle john is even more interesting.

I loved all but wait..did you mention only 3 to 4 parts remaining in mesh post..😒

I was expecting more to read..

Thanks again so much smita🥰🥰🥰

Part 8:

OMG Nikita what a terrific update. Full of anxiety & excitement. You make my spine to shiver. Each & every portion was so lurid. My love & respect for the Rajvanshis have increased ( never thought it could happen, but was compelled to do😊😊) , all the tricks & back up plans was commendable👏👏. Finally they transcended the hurdle with intelligence & delivered the bombs at the destination . Loved the line "hamara ghar anokha hain…..waise toh baap numbri toh beta dus numbri hota hain….yahan toh ulta hain….beta numbri toh baap dus numbri ha" indeed KN is super smart🙏🙏. Raghav was in hurry to reach AZ immediately but had to stay there for a night to avoid police's suspicion .

Chakor was worried about Raghav & he came to her at midnight to make her tension free, to give her the news of his safely return after completing the task, but didn't get the chance to hug & caress each other which they were craving for, but ended by some formal talks😞😞.

British's abusive activities, solicitation & the Revolutionaries activities fiercely running. I loved you always managed both the sides so beautifully .Loved the way you wrote the scene with dialogues, it seems I'm reading a script👌👌👌.

Loved Ragkor bump meeting on the way to local school, they were overwhelmed , melted in joy, lost in each other 😍😍😍 .But alas their happiness was not lingering 😢😢 there was an unexpected turn in the story. Raghav was shot to save Chakor😰😰. It's too shocking. I'm speechless. Hope nothing will happen to him & he will be saved. Pls update soon as I'm too much anxious.

Originally posted by: LuvSSever

Nikki 🤗,

Coming to part8

I loved KN , Teju plan and even raghav was surprised, its good to visualise KN as good and a light hearted family moment of raghav with them. Its nice. And thankfully Lucknow episode ended peacefully.

then they had to stay back for some time to avoid suspicion and whether Suraj worried or not, I was worrying😁 , oh then mean he will be late and till that chakor wont be having a peaceful breath.

then i knew he will be more worried than me, he immediately went to meet her though its late night and I loved how you wrote the scene..the urge to be in each other arms but acting formal for bhuka sake, surely it will be killing inside.

then finally Raghav found a way to meet her...we knew they will be missing each other like hell...and I am awed at their hug ,his caressing and her ILU.

but then came the THUD moment. john came😱 and they were caught😒 chakor asking not to reveal and she going on and on, I can visualise and imagine. chakor in opponent arms and in gun point, can visualise Raghav feelings and reactions too. as we thought, he ran to save her, he saved her but whats next.😧.

you stopped😁 ..awaiting next update now.

hope he is safe.. you told, you like straightforward sweet stories right..no tragic na.. but if thats the case, Raghav is not injured , I am even more eager to read whats next bcoz how they gonna handle john is even more interesting.

I loved all but wait..did you mention only 3 to 4 parts remaining in mesh post..😒

I was expecting more to read..

thank you dear so much....you know i love you loads❤️

yes dear probably 3 parts more....hats off to you if you want to read more...i am doneeeee already😉

and yes i know i love simple, straight stories.....but kabhi kabhi........

A hushed silence descended……It took a few minutes for the reality to sink in……Mr. John realised what he had done…..Chakor was raging. She held Mr. John and tried to hit him saying…..I will not spare you……You will pay for your crimes…and again ran and hugged the motionless Raghav…..tried waking him up …but to no avail……..The four guards who were there, were shocked too….They knew who Raghav was…..Mr. John realised that he had committed a grave blunder…If the villagers would come to know then there could even be blood bath in Azadganj. He couldn’t afford to take that risk…. There were 5 days more for 13th April and he didn’t want any problem and certainly not this one…..he gave the guards some money, asked them to keep their mouth shut and bury Raghav’s body in the vacant space nearby…..he asked them to keep quiet till the 13th….Then they would see what is to be done……

He dragged Chakor and said ….If you dare open your mouth be assured that his parents will be the first to go followed by Rana, Vikrant, Leela, Ashfaq and Peer and last but not the least you……She was shocked as to how he knew the core team….She said…I don’t care what you do to me but you dare not touch Raghav’s parents and my friends…..He gave a devilish laugh and said…you have seen what I can do, so be assured I mean each and every word that I have spoken….The otherwise strong Chakor jittered a little looking at the maniac eyes…..The guards picked up Raghav after they had dug the grave…..Chakor was wailing, wanting to hold him and sit there forever …John asked her to keep her mouth shut lest her wailing caught somebody’s attention…. ….she was pushed and his body buried……

Mr. John then asked his guards to arrest her, all thanks to the Rowlatt Act.

The main provisions of the ‘Rowlatt Act’ envisaged the arrest and deportation of any person on mere suspicion of sedition and revolt; the trial of those arrested by special tribunals established for that purpose; and the declaration of possession of treasonable literature as a punishable offence. It was already a cause of great distress for the freedom fighters. But the British Government was unaffected….

Chakor was anyways in a state where she couldn’t comprehend anything…She had basically become a walking corpse!!!! Her world had turned upside down within moments.

Slowly the news of her arrest spread in the village…..The five came to meet her…..They were shocked….They said that they had been to meet Raghav but he was also not to be seen around…..She barely controlled herself listening to his name and whispered that she was clueless about his whereabouts….She was missing her parents very much….

Chakor was so tired that she flopped down after they left and cried enormously…..all the moments she had spent with Raghav flashed before her eyes……The first eyelock, the first touch, the first hug, the first kiss, all invoked a flood of emotions in her….

The next day saw the Rajvanshi’s coming to meet her…. They said they were shocked when they had heard about her arrest…..At the same time they were plagued with Raghav’s disappearance…They wanted to know whether she knew anything….Mr. John had personally accompanied them…..She hung her head and whispered a no……Kamalnarayan assured her that he would do whatever he could for her release…She muttered a wholehearted thanks…...Mr. John also very sweetly said that he would try his best to find out Raghav’s whereabouts…..Chakor wanted to throttle him then and there….

After they had left, Mr. John tried questioning her about the plan…She said….Raghav had made the plan and none of us knew about it…..you finished him you wretched before he could tell us anything…she tried to hold him through the bars…He laughed loudly and walked away…His laugh kept ringing in her ears and tormenting her…..

The others kept coming to meet her ……….They were all worried with Raghav’s disappearance and her imprisonment…They had lost their pillars of strength ….…They weren't sure whether they would do anything at all on the 13th....She tried to keep a brave face and encourage them though she herself was totally broken inside.....Once when she thought that the guard was not looking, she tried to tell Leela about Raghav, but Mr. John came and she ended up saying “INQUILAB ZINDABAD”…

She was continuously under scrutiny and did not get a chance to tell anything to anybody…

On the 11th of April, Mr. John had an unexpected visit by Kamalnarayan. He told John that he was very worried about Raghav’s sudden disappearance. He further said that since the Hindu new year, Pratipada as they called it, was on the 13th, he and his wife were wanting to do a puja. As per their family astrologer, the puja would yield maximum results if it was done on the night of the 12th lapsing into the 13th. According to them this would be the best time to invoke the gods. He further said that the puja would be done in front of thevillage deity so that the peace and prosperity of the village was also ensured……..as per the tradition the villagers would expect him, his family and all the chhaoni members to attend it. Mr. John tried to refuse saying that he was very busy but Mr. Kamalnarayan insisted and said Saheb, the villagers would be very upset if you do not come. Also, the puja is after your office hours, so it should not be a problem. Mr. John had heard a lot about the Hindu traditions and how the Hindus were fiercely protective about it. He decided it best to attend and reluctantly said yes.

Mr. Kamalnarayan only had one request to make to Mr. John…he asked him to get Chakor along…He said that as the puja was for the welfare of the entire village, he felt that Chakor should also be a part of it…he assured Mr. John that after the puja he could take her back with him to the prison cell…..Mr. John said he couldn’t guarantee but would think about it.

On the 12th night the entire village was lighted with oil lamps. The girls were busy drawing rangolis. The boys were putting up flower decorations everywhere. A huge Yagna (a ritual sacrifice) was arranged at the centre of the village. The pundits had begun their chanting. Visibly disturbed Kamalnarayan and Tejaswini were sitting and doing the puja. Mr. John and the others accompanying him were welcomed in the Hindu traditional way with a village girl garlanding and applying vermilion to them. He had managed to leave two guards at the office to keep a watch.

He had got chakor with him but guards were stationed near her so that she wouldn’t interact with anybody. Everybody was happy seeing her……Mr. John had thought it better not to disappoint anybody at this stage…..The puja was going on in full swing with the entire atmosphere resonating with the chants……Seeing everything and everybody, Chakor all the more missed Raghav and tears started flowing…She somehow managed to control her feelings….

At that moment the village clock chimed 12 and a huge explosion was heard. A big ball of fire rose. The villagers ran towards it. They saw Mr. John’s office up in flames. The explosion had been so powerful that the entire set up was gutted in no time. However there seemed no casualties…..All were shocked. Mr. John was completely baffled. Slowly he turned red in anger. He shouted for the guards. There was nobody around…….He could do nothing but sit down and clutch his hair……..

The next day news started pouring in from different parts of the country speaking of similar blasts in several parts of Hindustan. Hundreds of offices were gutted. It was a big jolt to the British. That day they understood that revolutionary India and peaceful Gandhian India together was a lethal combo which they could no longer take lightly.

The Lucknow British office came to know that help had poured in from Azadganj right under their nose. They were so upset with Mr. John that he was transferred with immediate effect. The Chhaoni was asked to be withdrawn. Across India there were celebrations. Many places saw British officers getting transferred and chhaonis being removed…….

This also resulted in the immediate release of Chakor. She decided to run to the Rajvanshis to inform them of Raghav before Mr. John left…..When she turned in the alley a familiar voice called out…Chakooorrrr . She was stunned.