Mishaan OS - lag ja gale

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Posted: 6 years ago
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I managed to pour that puree on myself, idiot that I am! But technically it wasn't my fault this time. My heart beat was racing like crazy.... I was about to kiss her....just one more inch and I'd have been in heaven....but damn Pari for her bad timing!

I had to let go of her and came here to make this godforsaken puree which BTW didn't like being called names as it spilled itself all over me and made a fool of me in front of the girl I wanted to impress! Well, way to go Ruhaan!

"What are you laughing at me for? Look at your aanta.... It looks like lape!" I managed to counter. Well I couldn't very well stand there and let her laugh at me, could I? I have my male ego to cherish, after all. But I have to admit, she looked so cute; trying to control her laughter and miserably failing at it. God, I love her....how much I love her. It's like whenever I see her, I forget everything else, I forget the world exists, my eyes gets glued to her, hell, I even forget to breath. I love her, it has become a mantra to me which I chant infinite times a day. I love her, I chant again, smile and go to my room to take a shower and rid myself of this sick tomato smell, ewww!!

I came out of wash room, my hair is still wet and dripping drops of water as in my hurry to take shower I'd forgotten to take a towel with me. Told you, I'm an idiot! As I start looking for the towel, it magically appears before me, I turn and find her standing a foot away from me, holding the towel in her hand. My breath hitched, God, she's so beautiful, more than beautiful, she's aesthetic, magnificent. She held her hand out to give me the towel, I took it from her and start wiping my face. Suddenly she looks at me weirdly, I raised my eyebrows in silent question, she doesn't answer but tip toed and start caressing my hair. I'm in heaven! but my bliss was momentarily as she wasn't really caressing my hair, instead she was extracting a tomato pulp which must've been left there. She holds it out for me to see and we both smiled. I kept looking at her heatedly and she does the same, there was nothing funny now. She looked so damn beautiful that I wanted to ravish her, devour her, right here right now. She takes the towel from my hand and slowly, oh so slowly starts wiping my face. It's too much for me to take, I couldn't control it anymore. I practically snatched the towel from her hand and threw it away, I take her arm and pulled her to my chest with Savage urgency.

It was as vital for me as taking breath for everyone is. Embracing her in that moment was like taking the next breath for me. I hugged her tight, so tight that there wasn't even any space for air to pass. She hugged me just as tightly and for the first time in my entire life, I felt like I was home. It was my home, her embrace. I could happily die a hundred death in that moment, for the purpose of my life was fulfilled now. The girl, I loved for so long, yearned for so long, loved me back. It was most definitely the happiest moment of my life.

The end

I know it was too shortπŸ˜‰ I'll try to write a longer one next time....I'd gotten pm to write an OS on their hug and I tried my best....I hope you like it @Gis Shakti😊😊

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Ofcourse, it's very nice..πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›

You should have added some romance, too. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

But, yes it was very nice.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Loved it dear❀️ It's so beautiful but I was little disappointed.. Atleast Iss story mein toh wo adhura lip lock puri kar deti thi naπŸ˜›

Edited by pranurosid - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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it was amazing OS dear πŸ‘β€

I remembered that MisHaan scene while reading this and that scene became more special and meaningful

loved it ❀❀❀❀❀

and love you for this OS 😘😘😘😘

you are awesome vartuu

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: pranurosid

Loved it dear❀️ It's so beautiful but I was little disappointed.. Atleast Iss story mein toh wo adhura lip lock puri kat deti thi naπŸ˜›

ye hug ke upar OS tha kiss ke upar ek aur OS likhegi hai na vartuu πŸ˜‰

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Oh..my god...Oh my god...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Thumne write kiya...

It was too good..πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€...amazing.....superb😍😍😍😍

Kya kya kehdoom mein iske baare mein....

Just like Ruhaan ke pov ko maine imagine kiya...πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

The love...need..passion everything he felt for her ..you described very well...πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

This side of Ruhaan is interesting to watch...😊😊😊

Kabhi kabhi Mishaan ke moments par one shot likhna...your writing is superb...😍😍😍😍😍

Edited by Gis...shakti - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: swaasp

ye hug ke upar OS tha kiss ke upar ek aur OS likhegi hai na vartuu πŸ˜‰

Aww You're too cute meri jaanπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜ okay.... Pakka kiss k upar bhi likhungi kalπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gis...shakti

Oh..my god...Oh my god...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Thumne write kiya...

It was too good..πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€...amazing.....superb😍😍😍😍

Kya kya kehdoom mein iske baare mein....

Just like Ruhaan ke pov ko maine imagine kiya...πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

The love...need..passion everything he felt for her ..you described very well...πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

This side of Ruhaan is interesting to watch...😊😊😊

Kabhi kabhi Mishaan ke moments par one shot likhna...your writing is superb...😍😍😍😍😍

I'm so glad you liked it sweetie....I wrote it for you onlyπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ˜πŸ˜

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: swaasp

it was amazing OS dear πŸ‘β€

I remembered that MisHaan scene while reading this and that scene became more special and meaningful

loved it ❀❀❀❀❀

and love you for this OS 😘😘😘😘

you are awesome vartuu

Love you more Swati....literallyπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: arfanazneen

Ofcourse, it's very nice..πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›

You should have added some romance, too. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

But, yes it was very nice.

Thanks ArfaπŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ’œπŸ’œ actually that's where I lack it; writing love scenes, that isπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆ not that I excel it everywhere.... But still I find it very difficult to write that...dunno why.... But I'll try next timeπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜

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